Aurora vs (x) CeEd
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 02-14-05 at 12:11 AM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

(x) CeEd has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-10-05 12:13 AM.

NIGGa enough talk.....................lets get this shyt poppin//////////

cmon bitch enough tough talk......................................... lets get it on////

yes....I chek in soon nigga, az lon az I checkd it don mata rite?

thik mahfuka...............u need 2 accept..............................

Aurora has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-11-05 01:39 AM.

I alredy checkd n so jus shut up aight? dam no wunda u mad.

you're done kid

you in the lowest seeding, you can't even define the meaning
why should we let u win? are we running out of human beings?
we all connect man...the chance of your konquest is real slim
no he doesn't have any enemy...cause all his friends hate him
don't be messing with me, my defense multiplied as it fortified
see thats why his career never blossom...until it parished & die
his verse doesn't really start...until it had reached the footer
he has a large winning mouth...pity everything else is a loser
I think you wack...inspite your amazingly different inner light
I know heads had called you a wit...believe me they're half right!
kid feather weight...yet he must be those fat kids, I mean well
he looks like he's got a ghost writer with him...than I realised it's him himself

AIIGHt .................................swweeeeeeet...... .......

Blah......... X back for verses to eat and spit...rip, flip,homie look at yourself........twist you far worse than the Exorcist
Ima trap your radiated lines as if "electrical" didnt exist in rays
now the kats under the knife has had his nuts to be spade.....
the way america wuz discovered by Christopher Colombus
kid u lack to rap, wack at rap,still zags his pants ,kiss my ass
beatin me is like Shady wuz witout the Aftermath........Blah
the kid misses "light" and lacks to deliver the Punches

yo upppppppppppppppppppppppppin this shyt,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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This was feedback posted for (x) CeEd
 

X stop doin the blah thing aurora drop your verse in our battle

This was feedback posted for (x) CeEd
 

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Voted For: Aurora

im gonna hate to vote for ar. om this one
first off exceed if rap didnt have to rhyme then id give you a kob, half your stuff aint rhyme for real and ar. like one bars of your didnt either
punches, i say these punches were kinda weak but ehh ar took them, you had a good ass opener but your closer aint quit cut it and ex man your opener and closer wasnt very good so of course since ar. had a better opener he takes it,
metas4 didnt realy have any in this battle so couldnt really say
wordplay would go to ex cux he had them but it aint work but at least he had some and ar get some wordplay in thier and make it somethin better to read
multies i dont think they worth putting in a vote but ex you got this just cuz your opener had hella mukties

no hate yall but i give my vote to aurara
ya feel?

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This was feedback posted for Aurora
 

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Voted For: Aurora

we all connect man...the chance of your konquest is real slim
no he doesn't have any enemy...cause all his friends hate him
don't be messing with me, my defense multiplied as it fortified
see thats why his career never blossom...until it parished & die

VS

beatin me is like Shady wuz witout the Aftermath........Blah
the kid misses "light" and lacks to deliver the Punches

vote Aurora for better punches and more multies and better flow and structure, cause he totally caned this guy... X needs to elevate dramatically...

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Voted For: Aurora

Aurora - you had a nice flow with some nice personals and punches...my favorite was:
"I think you wack...inspite your amazingly different inner light
I know heads had called you a wit...believe me they're half right!" shit was clever
you had nice vocab too...only thing i can really tell you to work on is throw in a multi maybe...good job, homie

(X)eed - really wasnt feelin it, i couldnt flow wit it at all...i guess i didn't understand sum of ur structure cuz come of ur shit didn't rhyme

IMO Aurora took it easily...keep rhymin...

Return The Favor - Link In My Sig..thanks

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Voted For: Aurora

this was an 1-sided battle from the start of this:

(x)ceed- ight ur verse was ok not the best i've seen but
u can elevate 4 the next time no hate...ur
structure in the beginning was off but u got it a
lil bit back on in the middle...wordplay was not
there...punches were played...not many
personals...no multi's

aurora- ur verse was good...ur flow was on point...u
had plenty of punches in this battle...also sum
personals...wordplay was played a lil but otha
parts it was nice...a few multi's...

overall- aurora took the battle by hitting harder wit his
punches & his structure was actually well
organized than (x) was
make sure 2 return the favor

Voted For: Aurora

Yo i Think Aurora got dis one hands down good shit homie here is how im going to break it down......



you in the lowest seeding, you can't even define the meaning
why should we let u win? are we running out of human beings?
Dis was iight flowed good.......6/10
we all connect man...the chance of your konquest is real slim
no he doesn't have any enemy...cause all his friends hate him
Yo was good in da first line but didnt make sence in da 2nd......5/10
don't be messing with me, my defense multiplied as it fortified
see thats why his career never blossom...until it parished & die
Dis was a pretty good punchline here....7/10
his verse doesn't really start...until it had reached the footer
he has a large winning mouth...pity everything else is a loser
Dis was fire right here best line.....8/10
I think you wack...inspite your amazingly different inner light
I know heads had called you a wit...believe me they're half right!
Dis was a pretty decent line 2......7/10
kid feather weight...yet he must be those fat kids, I mean well
he looks like he's got a ghost writer with him...than I realised it's him himself
Dis really didnt rhyme.....5/10
Overall:38/60




Blah......... X back for verses to eat and spit...rip, flip,homie look at yourself........twist you far worse than the Exorcist
Dis would have been FIRE if u wouldnt have put homie on da end of da 1st line cuz homie and Exorcist dont rhyme......5/10
Ima trap your radiated lines as if "electrical" didnt exist in rays
now the kats under the knife has had his nuts to be spade.....
Dis was a good line......7/10
the way america wuz discovered by Christopher Colombus
kid u lack to rap, wack at rap,still zags his pants ,kiss my ass
Dis wasnt dat good......5/10
beatin me is like Shady wuz witout the Aftermath........Blah
the kid misses "light" and lacks to deliver the Punches
DIDNT RHYME......5/10
Overall:22/40

X-Cell i think u didnt come hard enough some of ur stff didnt even rhyme......u could be pretty good wit a little more elevation and help on rhyming....no hate.....Pz