TennQuakes vs Acuity
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-14-05 at 02:14 PM

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TennQuakes has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-11-05 02:15 PM.

Acuity has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-11-05 02:18 PM.

yo yo check u need to stop lookin like lilo and stich u ugly bitch try yo luck and u will be founded in a ditch
i spit rhymes to damge yo frame im the newcomer but i kill yo brain aint no stoppin these rhymes i the new kid with any anger mangement problem that u can't solve
so i suggested u stay back or yo body will be founded in Iraq because yo action plus my solution equals yo death

[QUOTE=TennQuakes]yo yo check u need to stop lookin like lilo and stich u ugly bitch try yo luck and u will be founded in a ditch
i spit rhymes to damge yo frame im the newcomer but i kill yo brain aint no stoppin these rhymes i the new kid with any anger mangement problem that u can't solve
so i suggested u stay back or yo body will be founded in Iraq because yo action plus my solution equals yo death im the one who made u lose you health
need i say more my words are louder than yo actions

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Voted For: Acuity

what the fuck was this...this was one sided.....pucnhes personals, flow, creativity, wordplay, vocab and definitely structure goes to AC.....MISMATCH

This was feedback posted for Acuity
 

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This was feedback posted for Acuity
 

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Voted For: Acuity

Why did I keystyle ten on this bitch made wannabe, His rhymes are so fuckin wack
His structure weak like hes got depleted vitamin C, so its easy to break his back
TennQuakes sees me and gets "shook", and hes left confused and dazed
Look i dont lie: this punk ass herb posting battle callouts in the wrong place

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yo yo check u need to stop lookin like lilo and stich u ugly bitch try yo luck and u will be founded in a ditch

well acuity wins hands down, try not to have the lines so stretched though. Acuity had the better and some funny punches, and he had nice structure and decent flow.

Tenn: keep elevating your punches didn't hit that hard, concentrate on dissing your opponent and work on structure

So overall I voted for acuity

please return the favor please.

Voted For: Acuity

well this is an easy battle to vote on nah mean.
Acuity took this in every catergory i think. Tennquakes didnt come hard at all. his verse was way to juvenile n he aint really have no punches or multies or nehtin to vote on really. he just needs to get better so he can come harder
opener=acuity
closer=acuity
punches=acuity
structure=acuity
vocab=acuity
yall both need to work on ya flows tho, alot of acuity's punches were a real stretch to connect.
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Voted For: Acuity

LOL DO I EVEN NEED TO LEAVE FEED WTF LOL TENNN NO PUNCHES DISSES WERE WACKED AND PLAYED NO FLOW SHIT WAS WAY OFF STRUTURE IS HORRIBLE 1/10
ACUITY GOOD STRUTURE VOCAB COULD BE BETTER ON END WORDS FLOW IS GOOD PUNCHES AND DISSES WERE VASTLY SUPERIOR TO TENNS SHIT AND GOT YOU THIS EZ 7/10

Voted For: Acuity

i think acuity won because he had good vocab
harder hittin punches good structure
good multis and a great opener
tennquakes u had alrigth structure
u need a lot of work on ur vocab and on ur rap period
u had a bad opener
u had some good punches
overall both battles were alright

favorite tennquakes lines:
yo yo check u need to stop lookin like lilo and stich u ugly bitch try yo luck and u will be founded in a ditch
i spit rhymes to damge yo frame im the newcomer but i kill yo brain aint no

favorite acuity lines:
Don't understand why this punk stepping to me, I sed no fuck wasting battle credits
I'll "shake him in ten", leave debris, kids wack its fact know i've said it
Why did I keystyle ten on this bitch made wannabe, His rhymes are so fuckin wack
His structure weak like hes got depleted vitamin C, so its easy to break his back

return tha favor please
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