Technical vs SPuL
 

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Check in by: 02-12-05 at 04:47 PM

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SPuL has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-12-05 04:18 PM.

Technical has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-12-05 04:21 PM.

uppin for more votes lets go.............................

Voted For: SPuL

I Guess His DickRyding On Strobe'll Never End, Once Again Homeboi Sufferin From Line Negligence
"Boy"Listen Man, "SP"Only "Advances" To First When Commencing About "Game" References
^^^^second line was good opner was gay
Ranked 1st In The Tourney Huh?...Dukes Was Prolly Lovin It...Felt No One Could Uncomfort Him
But How Could Dat Occur...Especially When He Can't Win A Battle When "Hotshh" Is Put On Him*
^^^^don't no what your talking about so i don't like the line
Listen Dude...I Been Checkin Ur Baby Pics....Leaves Me To Ask Who Could Birth This Foo?...*
"Junior" You On Virtue Dick Often...He Prolly Nutted More Times That Your Ghostwriter Wrote Fo You (ouch)
^^^^no need to talk about your own lines but it was ok
Me Get Murdered In TECHS(text)?..Dude Was Quick To Move To "Audio" When "Hotshhh" Ripped Ya..He's Ur Daddy
Dis Bitch Feels Sorry For Da "Troop"s So He Hopped On The "Jock" Of Superior Methods And Asked If Troop Was Happy(fag)
^^^^not bad but stop talking about shit that some readers wouldn't no about
5/10


Askin' me about "Ghosting", fuck, I write my own lines
Man, you'd only win if I wrote your verse... and you wrote mine
^^^^i nice lololol
My rhymes all break yo spine, man, you really got no chance
it's as 'bout as good as someone wit no legs tryin' to dance
^^^^wack
Lets get right down to facts, if you wanna get all "technical"
you throwin akward punches like the Pistons-Pacers specticale
^^^^not bad
When these fools step to me, it ain't gon turn out well
Cuz S, P, u, oh yea, bitch, here's yo L
^^^^kinda wackish
5.5/10

it was super close but i hated tech's style

This was feedback posted for SPuL
 

good battle...too bad SPuL up in my crew though
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coo coo uppin fo more votes yo....and if u dont understand the pucnhes just dont fuckin vote...simple

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Voted For: SPuL

damn bitchass spul isn't a bitchass at all :shcocked:

Technical:you tried to hard to get vocab points.
you lines were streched badly,the game boy advanced sp
thing was ok,but come on will you really say that in a battle?
be real,text is more complex,but it should be left to right
not left to right to middle to left again crap.

Spul:Your verse was dope,Tight flow
and the closer and similes were crazy.
The opener was dope also.
can't think of anything wrong right now.

winner/Spul jr.

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aiight 2-0 me. upp............................................... .................................................. .............

This was feedback posted for SPuL
 

was going to vote...saw something disturbing

tech its ok to put my name in ya verse once but twice?
thats a strech........im not his daddy
i beat him in THAT battle...
spul will own niggas...and he beat you in this
u tried too hard....

Voted For: Technical

Wow Both Yall Verses Wass Horrible Spul Some Ya Shit Didn't Rhyme And Ya Punches Was Homo..

Openor=Tech,Spul Openor Wass Retarded Said Man 2 Much
Punches=Tech,Had Harder Punches Wasn't Decent Tho
Personals=Tie Both Had Ok Personals
Vokab=None
Strukture=Spul Good Strukture
Wordplay=None
Closer=Tech,Ok Closer Spul Shit Aint Even Rhyme

Overall Technical Came Harder Had A Better Verse Than Spul And Had Better Punches Than Spul

/V Technical................

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^wow, you're a complete retard. How does "L" and Well not ryme? lmfao such a homo. kid go back to school or shiot fo reel. I don't care if you vote against me, but make it seem that you actually understood what goes on. ;) Kids like this are herb voters, but don't matter. 2-1 uppin.......

dam spul relax you still in the lead...jesus christ...lol and Kordozar how didnt i win vocab but wat eva man...uppin ^^^^^^^

Voted For: Technical

Technical came harder on dis one both had some good ass punches but spul you closer was kinda sorry i liked you verse doe shit was funny but technical punches hit harder work on you structure and both work on vocab doe dats all i can say

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^whoa?....2-2 already? wow...
i would've voted... but lucky we in
the same crew...cuz tech ur shit was
mmaadd ssttrreettcchheedd

lol homeboi i don give a fuck what you think skriptz cuz when we battle imma murk u too

Lol.......funny people these days...w/e kid.......

yea wat eva we'll see....uppin fo votes ^^^^^^^^^^^^

Voted For: Technical

not feelin spul to me ur juss whack wit many dickriders :thumbup: punches from spul weak try swingin its like u threw them at a ghost and ur personals they like where are they to much self glorification work on that thats why i give ur verse a 5.9/10

Techincal a littl more serious in ur verse ur punches n personals were pretty good all tho u can fix that structure i think you got this so i give ur verse a 6.8/10

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This was feedback posted for Technical
 

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Voted For: SPuL

lmao both came severely wack.. although i dont believe spul tried his hardest.. he came with a little harder punches.. and better flow.. and structure. omg tech work on that shit.. lmao.... weak attempts at personals by tech.. i gotta say spul wins this mainly due to the fact that his punches hit a little harder.. and his lines werent as long as my penis in the morning... v/spulio

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Voted For: SPuL

This battle was okay... I've seen alot more better lines from you spul then this shyt..

Technical: Dude, its called stretched lines!! Learn how to not use em.. i hate readin shyt like that, its hella hard to understand the lines.. and next time have better structure.. Your punches we're really hard to catch, n wen i caught em, they still we sorta wack, so elevate on that shyt..

spul: LoL, ur verse was pretty good, very simple, but still very creative and alil originality added to it.. You should try to use vocab, but for reg. battles like dis, it really ain't that much needed, especially wen ur punches are pretty strong.. All I need to say for you is think of more punches for futre battles..

vote: spul

^^^^^^dam ur record is fucked so dun talk homeboi...uppin

Voted For: Technical

A'ight this was a pretty tight battle...Spul...decent verse, you won on flow and structure..punches was nice, I saw a decent personal in there, some mulites...pretty good, not your best...Technical...stretched lines mess up your flow and structure...but damn...your punches and personals were hot shit...they were hittin hard, vocab was nice from you too...No hate, just honesty...return the favor in my Ol School battle...thanks.

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Voted For: SPuL

Wow.

Not the best battle I ever read I gotta say, But SPuL really did take this one.

He came with some nice punches, and that closer was dope funny. lol.

Technical, the whole appearance of yours, let alone the actual verse is just terrible. Punches were hella weak, and the closer, dont get me started on that.

Elevate Foo'.

SPuL, I'v seen you drop better, but this was nice.

Word. That. Is.

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Voted For: Technical

close yet weak battle

I Guess His DickRyding On Strobe'll Never End, Once Again Homeboi Sufferin From Line Negligence
"Boy"Listen Man, "SP"Only "Advances" To First When Commencing About "Game" References
decent wordplay aigh punch
Ranked 1st In The Tourney Huh?...Dukes Was Prolly Lovin It...Felt No One Could Uncomfort Him
But How Could Dat Occur...Especially When He Can't Win A Battle When "Hotshh" Is Put On Him*
started out good then blahh
Listen Dude...I Been Checkin Ur Baby Pics....Leaves Me To Ask Who Could Birth This Foo?...*
"Junior" You On Virtue Dick Often...He Prolly Nutted More Times That Your Ghostwriter Wrote Fo You (ouch)
decent punch
Me Get Murdered In TECHS(text)?..Dude Was Quick To Move To "Audio" When "Hotshhh" Ripped Ya..He's Ur Daddy
Dis Bitch Feels Sorry For Da "Troop"s So He Hopped On The "Jock" Of Superior Methods And Asked If Troop Was Happy(fag)
decent personal

Askin' me about "Ghosting", fuck, I write my own lines
Man, you'd only win if I wrote your verse... and you wrote mine
good punch
My rhymes all break yo spine, man, you really got no chance
it's as 'bout as good as someone wit no legs tryin' to dance
no just no blahh
Lets get right down to facts, if you wanna get all "technical"
you throwin akward punches like the Pistons-Pacers specticale
decent
When these fools step to me, it ain't gon turn out well
Cuz S, P, u, oh yea, bitch, here's yo L <<< PEEEP LINK!!!!!
weak

overall this was a weak battle tech had some stretched lines but was more consistant with punches spul had like one good punch then the rest of his verse was blahh, so close battle but vote/tehnical for bein more consistant

Voted For: Technical

Aight.... good battle yall... wasnt expecting it to be this good but it was aight.... here is the WICKEDEST breakdown:

Tech- you came pretty tight in this battle man... 1 thing tho, ya structure needs some work, to stretched... it was all that way tho so that didnt hurt ya flow too bad.. your punches hit pretty well through out the verse, personals were a little hit and miss tho.. would have liked to see better personals... vocab was good and not to simple which is a great thing... had some complex shit in there... some ok multis... all in all a pretty good verse on your part man.... good job... 7/10

spul- aight yours was aight too... the structure was tight, and the flow was flawless... punches on the other hand i think lacked... they didnt hit hard at all in my opinion... you did have good personals tho which definatly helps out a lot... you came pretty hard with the personals which i liked... your vocab left something to be desired tho.. some simple stuff that kinda hurt ya verse in the long run... multis were kinda nonexistant... all in all this was a good drop spul but i have seen better from you... 5.5/10

aight yall no hate to either battler here... this was a tight battle and both of yall came out pretty hard and i got MAD respect for that shit.. Tech i think won this on better punches and better vocab.... Tech work on ya structure tho dawg cause in some cases in real close battles it can mean the differance between getting a win or a loss... so up on that... spul like i said no hate at all man.. tight shit but i have seen you come harder man so stay up and keep doin ya thang... no advise really to up on shit except use better punches and vocab next time around... i think this might have been a case of underestimating your oponant... ... never do that yo... both of yall had a tight battle here....

VOTE- TECH.....

Good battle yall........................

Voted For: Technical

Spul:
ight yo man you did good on the minnor things like flow and stucture that was all tight....you did have good punchlines but like what the hell si the shit about ghost writing i know people say you got peopel writing for you but that line was dumb the closer was good but i jsut thought you didnt try hard ive seen way better then this..no hate

Technical:
ight yo you had the good punches but yo your flow was a lil bit off but i could just grab it by reading it more and the stucture was good tell towards the end, the end was horrible for stucture but i see how you had dope punches and vocab the line with hotshh that was ight but i like your opener alot..pz

Opener: Technical
Closer: Spul
punchlines: Technical
vocab: Technical
stucture: spul
flow: spul
creativty: technical
Vote: Technical

Voted For: SPuL

my vote is SPuL.

Tech, your verse was real hard to real. I mean seriously shorten yo lines man. No hate, but work on that. That shit fucked up yo structure soo badly. But the lines I caught were aiight. But try hittin' him wit harder personals and hard punches. Shit works nice. But what you did was aiight though. Not bad verse, but stretched lines fucked up yo flow and structure. But it was aiight try. Come harder next time.

SPuL, damn, it's like you did this shit quick cuz this ain't your usual shit man. But it was still nice. Vocab was basic as fuck. But yo punches you had some nice ones. That closer was ill linking back to this battle sayin' it was gonna be his loss. I liked that shit. And the opener gettin' on about the ghosting. Shit was tight wit the punches. You easily got that. Only thing you didn't beat him in was the vocabv.

Honestly I think SPuL killed this guy. I'd be amazed if he got even one vote, no hate, it just looks like a KO to me. but both keep elevating.

Vote=SPuL

Voted For: Technical

I Guess His DickRyding On Strobe'll Never End, Once Again Homeboi Sufferin From Line Negligence
"Boy"Listen Man, "SP"Only "Advances" To First When Commencing About "Game" References
Ranked 1st In The Tourney Huh?...Dukes Was Prolly Lovin It...Felt No One Could Uncomfort Him
But How Could Dat Occur...Especially When He Can't Win A Battle When "Hotshh" Is Put On Him*
Listen Dude...I Been Checkin Ur Baby Pics....Leaves Me To Ask Who Could Birth This Foo?...*
"Junior" You On Virtue Dick Often...He Prolly Nutted More Times That Your Ghostwriter Wrote Fo You (ouch)
Me Get Murdered In TECHS(text)?..Dude Was Quick To Move To "Audio" When "Hotshhh" Ripped Ya..He's Ur Daddy
Dis Bitch Feels Sorry For Da "Troop"s So He Hopped On The "Jock" Of Superior Methods And Asked If Troop Was Happy(fag)

I Rest My Case!

good drop, hard hits a few good punches, decent personals good flow and creativeness was preety good nice drop.... 8.0



Askin' me about "Ghosting", fuck, I write my own lines
Man, you'd only win if I wrote your verse... and you wrote mine
My rhymes all break yo spine, man, you really got no chance
it's as 'bout as good as someone wit no legs tryin' to dance
Lets get right down to facts, if you wanna get all "technical"
you throwin akward punches like the Pistons-Pacers specticale
When these fools step to me, it ain't gon turn out well
Cuz S, P, u, oh yea, bitch, here's yo L <<< PEEEP LINK!!!!!

this verse was lackin everything...
no good punches, a few played concepts, flow was aight, no real personals that stood out noting really good at all im dissapointed i thought u was better then that... this def aint no vet verse word...

vote TECHNICAL

Voted For: SPuL

That Game Boy line in the other guys was kinda corny and wasn't as effective witht the words out of order. His stuff was ok but alot of filller, filler, punchiline, and the last two lines throw the whole thing out of synch.

Spul came ok as well, but he had less filler in his set ups, and lmao at him linkin to this battle, that was nice haven't seen that in a while.

Spul had the edge cuz he stayed steady and didn't ramble