.MixTape. vs ..Lyrical..
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 = KO

Minimum posts to vote: 150

Check in by: 02-13-05 at 08:21 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

..Lyrical.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-12-05 08:24 PM.

.MixTape. has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-12-05 08:25 PM.

My name is mixtape dont ever come at me sideways...
my niggas bust ya shit n leave u on tha driveway....
Like Rimi Martin We walk around tah metal detecters if u really want ya girl u betta pretect her like Fat Joe i Can see the crack in ya nose..
When My 9 hit ya mouth ya head be circlen tha globe I dont go that way So Keep ya Robe on Stay the fuck from round me While u put yo thong on...
Cant u see my Gat IS loaded N ill blast ya ass,Cant u see my rymes are sharp Like fresh Cut Glass...
im the one that put u in tha game,I reversed ya shame I gave u ya fame n fo damn sho Gave u ya name....
U owe me ya life so if u ant got that i take taht ice!...
I dont fuck wit dem Dudes we just coo touch me again body head Bangas Nigga fall in tah pool...
Like 50 cent I got the Magic Stick I at ya girls house 6:6 niggas sticken ya chick...
NIgga mug me again, IM gets the clappin when u nut yo girl like wht happend...

Voted For: ..Lyrical..

lyrical won this one

i feel it was one sided tho

lyrical
good punches
good structure
overall good drop
i aint mad at cha homie

mixtape
bad drop man
at first i thought u was gonna drop good
then i saw that structure and i was like damn
punches ok

ok.. thanks for ur comment... buh yea anyone else got a diff on dis? o well uppin on this thing...

ay good drop, ..Lyrical.. ................. anyways uppin his thing again...

good drop to u 2...uppin

Voted For: ..Lyrical..

ok, this was obvious

Lyrical...nice drop man

I can already tell, your drop will have no punches
Heard you rang the bell, I’m just following hunches
-kinda weak, but decent enough 7/10

Looka here kid, I don’t mean to shatter your dreams
Your career wasn’t meant to happen like AH teams*
-nice punch, creative, 8/10

Your just an ignorant bitch, who gets on peoples nerves
You can afford wins, your wack name is all you deserve
-haha, nice personal, had me laughing 8/10

Giving you a loss, in my view I’m glad, but yet your sad
You can’t even ‘son’ someone, even if you became a dad
-not bad, goes good with the flow 7/10

Said he’s gonna be a rapper, rappin without no damn beats
Thinkin you can spit, but you can’t be heard on the streets
-decent closer 7.5/10

overall: 37.5/50.....solid verse overall, nice play with the personals and punches, liked the ignorant bar the best, decent vocab, maybe up that a little, perfect flow, felt good on the eyes to read, keep elevatin man, solid spit, SOLID

.MixTape......eh

dont even really wanna go through it all, very hard to follow, i didnt know what you were rhyming half the time, flow was choppy as hell, no structure, all over the place, had few nice lines, gotta up the vocab alot though, add some more complexity, try flowing away from the use of "nigger", doesnt work when you use it that much,,,work on the opener and closers a bit more, first line was..weird
overall: 25/60

vote: easily goes to lyrical, nice drop man

Voted For: .MixTape.

i just wanted to see da polls on dis 1....................

Vote removed

^^^damn my bad on that....take dat vote away..i meant to press feedback...take dat vote away

uppin this............ thread come on people dont fall asleep yet....

uppin still this battle ant over...... come on people vote,....

uppin this shit

ok.. still upping this shit as well also so yea uppin again////

Voted For: ..Lyrical..

this was an 1-sided battle in my opinion of this battle:
opener: lyrical
vocab: ly
structure: ly
multis: ly
closer: ly
ly wins my vote cuz he hit wit more punches & came harder in this battle; mixtape u did good 2 but u do not need 2 stretch ur rhymes just work on ur structure & ur wordplay a lil bit more
make sure 2 return the favor

Voted For: ..Lyrical..

Yo i give dis 2 Lyrical because he came way harder and his structure wasnt all out of wack heres how im goin to break it down......

Opener: Lyrical
Structure: Lyrical
Punches: Lyrical
Personals: Lyrical
Wordplay: Lyrical
Multis: Lyrical but not much
Metas: None
Closer: Lyrical

Lyrical wins hands down......Mixtape i think u need elevation a lot or u should jus quit flat out......Pz RTF links in da sig

Voted For: .MixTape.

vote lyrical better flow better puches all around better

vote= lyrical

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ok.. who were u trying to vote for??? well if u were tryoing to vote for me then thanks for the vote uppin this...

uppin this already

uppin this.....

Voted For: ..Lyrical..

I can already tell, your drop will have no punches
Heard you rang the bell, I’m just following hunches
Looka here kid, I don’t mean to shatter your dreams
Your career wasn’t meant to happen like AH teams*
...funny punch , good opener too
Your just an ignorant bitch, who gets on peoples nerves
You can afford wins, your wack name is all you deserve
.....decent dis on him, ok bar
Giving you a loss, in my view I’m glad, but yet your sad
You can’t even ‘son’ someone, even if you became a dad
....nice line a lil played by now though
Said he’s gonna be a rapper, rappin without no damn beats
Thinkin you can spit, but you can’t be heard on the streets
....basic closer decent lines
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mix im not gonna post ya whole shit cuz ya struc is super fucked up
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Like Rimi Martin We walk around tah metal detecters if u really want ya girl u betta pretect her like Fat Joe i Can see the crack in ya nose..
When My 9 hit ya mouth ya head be circlen tha globe I dont go that way So Keep ya Robe on Stay the fuck from round me While u put yo thong on...
Cant u see my Gat IS loaded N ill blast ya ass,Cant u see my rymes are sharp Like fresh Cut Glass...
im the one that put u in tha game,I reversed ya shame I gave u ya fame n fo damn sho Gave u ya name....
...honestly this struc makes it hard to do a break down so ill just say dont quote other rappers, work on ya struc, and elevate a bit

v/lyrical

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