Os1ris vs xcell
 

Battle Rules:

5-10 barz
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
freestyle

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-12-05 at 11:16 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

xcell has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-12-05 10:24 PM.

u aint real u decive u make belive we aint goona postpone this shit
dont step into my zone ill whirl u up and drop u like a cyclone...bitch/
u cant see me like stevie wonder ill plunder* ya record
ya rhymes contain no texture i put u under pressure/
i dont even wanna acknoledge ya acsitense
i attack with percistense fuck u chump ill have ya head lump/
u stump my shits complex u under a vex im beatin u down till there aint nothin left u aint gonna get the best/
of me like estacsy so rest in peace

Os1ris has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-12-05 10:44 PM.

Xcell, don't come at me with anymore shit ill take the tech that i aim wit/
Draw a gun then chalk up the win as youre sketched on the pavement//
These readers think ur verse is stretched depressing and basic/
So if u left the game, bitch, you'd probably bless em like mase did//
I'ma be generic, even though i know against you that it's useless/
Shows that your girls face proves grocery bags have multiple uses//
Like masterbating on John Kerry your just cumin to lose playa/
And when people call you hard they really talkin about your avatar//
Just so you know the vets'll vote for me, and i know that you knew that/
I just wrote that last line so i'd get votes from the new cats//

shit man i fucked up i meant to put 150 minutes i ran outa time ya gota hot drop man...

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uppin uppin uppin uppin and awayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

can we get some votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^

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Voted For: Os1ris

Vote: Osiris

Whitewash...any votes 4 xcell in this battle r d/rides
Osiris take the double slashes of ur lines u look herbish

Xcell, don't come at me with anymore shit ill take the tech that i aim wit/
Draw a gun then chalk up the win as youre sketched on the pavement//
nice wordplay, gd flow, decent punch -8/10
These readers think ur verse is stretched depressing and basic/
So if u left the game, bitch, you'd probably bless em like mase did//
gd concept, decnt punch-7.5/10
I'ma be generic, even though i know against you that it's useless/
Shows that your girls face proves grocery bags have multiple uses//
lol,gd humour, deent diss, well set-up - 8/10
Like masterbating on John Kerry your just cumin to lose playa/
And when people call you hard they really talkin about your avatar//
meh..ok attempt at personal..-7/10[B]
Just so you know the vets'll vote for me, and i know that you knew that/
I just wrote that last line so i'd get votes from the new cats//
[B]decent closer, cocky n arrogant lol, no diss ho -7.5/10

xcell-elvate ur vocab.structure,creativity and flo..maybe write to abeat..

oh and RETURN THA FAVOUR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111

MOre VOTES weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ee

as i said in the last line u aint gonna get the best of me like this estacsy man i was so fucked up yo os1ris i wanna battle u when im not on somethin

uppin this bitch............................................. ......................................

This was feedback posted for Os1ris
 

u came harder & i like ur wordplay in this battle if i could vote on this u would win my vote cuz u hit ur opponent wit more of evathang

Uppin this bitch cmon yall vote ......^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Voted For: Os1ris

dayum this shit was decent...you have potential to be talented...only thing is...the // at the end of your verse...get rid of that..and try changin font to "arial" and centerin your shit....then you'd get more rezpekt...but you have dope Punches fam..shit was dope

xcell your shit was below average...the flow and structure was WIZACk as fuck.......dawg...you need to up your game on the realz....one

vote: os

Voted For: Os1ris

os1ris took this battle easy......
metas...o
punches/...o multis....none....
flow.....o
vote .....o plz return favor link in sig

uppin this bi ei itch ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Voted For: Os1ris

Os1ris i thought your verse was a good . it was a lil stretched and i thought you coulda shortened it up some but over all it was a good verse . you had basic vocab . it was effective though and i thought you really had good personals . my favorite line "I'ma be generic, even though i know against you that it's useless/
Shows that your girls face proves grocery bags have multiple uses//" haha that shit jus cracked me up... the john kerry line was sorta dumb i thought you coulda worded it better.overall alright verse ... nice win


x-cell. you need to elevate some more ou had a nice drop .. watch your spelling .existence.acknowledge and a few other words were spelled wrong. otherwise your punches coulda hit alot harder. and your coulda had some better metaphors. otherwise i jus don't think your on os1ris level. no hate jus elevate

vote//Os1ris