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Kester vs LyricalFlowz
Battle Rules: 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate Votes Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 02-16-05 at 05:53 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Win by forfeit http://community.rapverse.com/showt...503#post1974503 |
lyricalflowz has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-13-05 06:05 PM.
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Kester has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-13-05 06:08 PM.
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Kester has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-13-05 06:09 PM.
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Ha Ha Rap's Capitol Nice line Man, Anyway I'll Spit Soon, I'm Out For Now Kid, One |
I'm Punching Throught This Kid's Lyrics As If They Was Water That Precious Record Of 25-5 Will Soon Be 25 To A Quarter* Leave This Cat Beat To Death Like In The House Of Slaughter He Merk Me?Mexicans Better Of Hoping Bush Open The Border* His Imagination Is Bigger Then Cartoon Flicks He'll Never Ko Me Slamming Him Against The Wall Now He Looks Like Wet Balogne To Beat Me This Kid NeedsA Miracle By God Better Get Spritual His Elevation Is Parallel, So He'll Never Beat Me Doing Lyricals He's Illiterate, Told Me To Set Up A Battle, Then Went And Created It This Kid Wouldn't "Cum" Hard If His Bitch Stripped And He Masterbated *Quarter=25 So It'll Be 25-25 *Hispanics Want The Border Open, Like Bush'll Do That Ha Still Don't Understand?? Don't Vote |
Voted For: Kester
kester gets my vote in this one lyrical man you had some good punches but i think that kessers was better, only by maybe one blow ya feel. multie go to kesser punches =kesser meta4=kesser structure=tie flow=tie kesser gets vote Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Kester
punches-kester persnals-kester metals-none flow-kester (lyrical u had none) mutis-none vocab-kester kester wins lyrical u came weak u can do better kester came nice had good flow punches and persnals lyrical had n flow some punches and like 1 or 2 persnals but kester came a little harder Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for lyricalflowz
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Wasn't really feelin lyricalflowz "capitol" line.... Thats another fact for you to establish is a hot closing line but it doesnt really rhyme with stick at all. Kester takes this one but I'm too much of a newbie to vote. I felt his punches more.
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Voted For: lyricalflowz
I'm Punching Throught This Kid's Lyrics As If They Was Water That Precious Record Of 25-5 Will Soon Be 25 To A Quarter* ^^no this was weak n a trerrible opener Leave This Cat Beat To Death Like In The House Of Slaughter He Merk Me?Mexicans Better Of Hoping Bush Open The Border* ^^koo concept, badly worded 2nd line though His Imagination Is Bigger Then Cartoon Flicks He'll Never Ko Me Slamming Him Against The Wall Now He Looks Like Wet Balogne ^^very wack.......... To Beat Me This Kid NeedsA Miracle By God Better Get Spritual His Elevation Is Parallel, So He'll Never Beat Me Doing Lyricals ^^nope..... He's Illiterate, Told Me To Set Up A Battle, Then Went And Created It This Kid Wouldn't "Cum" Hard If His Bitch Stripped And He Masterbated ^^this is ther most played concept around...do not use it anymore.... . . . I'ma Take this cat to the Candy Shop too meet 50 "Bungee jumpin" is the only way you can "hang" wit me ^^eh, ok but weak opener........ You the type that'll talk shit, and then be by my side Your styles older than the rumours of tupac being alive ^^i liked this its a decent punch.. I see your battles, I skip them, cuz they just bore me You losing this battle is like your poem; A True Story ^^nicely worded it connected well..... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=176492 You're meant to be broken, so I relate you to a bad rule you wouldn't be the 'biggest' if you were raps 'capitol'(capital) ^^ok not bad.......... My punches are like leeches with the way they stick your whack; now theres another "fact for you to establish!" ^^decent closer.. . overall imma vote for lyrical cuz his punches were better.. flow was on point for the most part, 1 personal was decent.. mainly he takes it for a more consistant battle verse.... |
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Voted For: lyricalflowz
LF-i was feelin yo drop more...i think u came harder with tha punches and i even seen a couple of metaphores in there, which had me suprised. u came with more creativitie, and originality in yo verse, and thats what made me wunna give u my vote. Cekret-coo name, but i think u lost this one fam. i think u shouldve came just a lil bit harder, then u wouldve had my vote. ur drop was a lil too boring for me to get into to. but i htink u still came hard wit punches, and good wordplay, just up yo vocab a lil fam...NO hate THO...u haad a nice drop...but LF came harder overall-keep elevatin yall. this was a close one, but it just gota go to LF...NO HATE... and plz RTF on battle link in sig against DT..too many good battles gettin slept on... ~1~ |
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