$^Ost-rich^$ vs Da_Throwdest
 

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Check in by: 02-14-05 at 02:09 AM

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$^Ost-rich^$ has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-13-05 08:22 PM.

Da_Throwdest has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-13-05 08:32 PM.

Yo, I'm a suicide bomber, who'll kill yo family with minute decibles//
im incredible, with the stealth of one white guy in the middle of Cuba's festivels//
roasting you like testicles on a blue flame , with a fat person next to it blushin' and sweating with shame//
running through the window screaming that Ostrich's the loudest//
and the fact that he just merkd some shit they call Da_Throwdest//
sorry chief, but you need some information//
and it's easier to beat you then Muhammod Ali at Operation//
inflamion hurst when you don't follow the rules,
i asked more ten lines max.//
and you gave me another bubble gum shit by Ja-rule

Da_Throwdest has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-13-05 08:51 PM.

drastic spits hit ya chest, quit kid ur powerless
rip dome's off necks, leave red fluids, drippin' like rusted shower heads

"Shit's U" a real bitch, feel this, this is my show so i'ma steal it
ya style resembles having sex with condoms, cuz i don't feel it

u don't have nebody u can run 2 in a crew, so hopeless
wanted people 2 up ya weak verse b4 ya even post it

ya lucky i spit 1st, cuz i react sick causing static
Take-In-Line's like ya a starving crack addict

ur age u can't fade, i stole the spotlight like snatching lamp shades
fill ya camp up with grenades, the only time ostrich is sick with aids

so Supreme Killin' ost-rich with "Flow's of Gleams"
Cuttin him "Short" of "Threads" like seems of jeans

as a kid & now u have always been an usual square
i run more "Circles" around ya, then "Def" kids playin'
"Musical Chairs"

this was an ok verse i wasn't trying my hardest but o' well

uppin the votes people

uppin uppin this 4 votes c'mon people get in here & vote

uppin uppin this 4 votes c'mon people get in here & vote
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uppin uppin this 4 votes c'mon people get in here & vote

uppin this 4 votes by y'all c'mon on it'll b off the screen afta ya vote who won this & it hits 5 votes u feel me

Voted For: Da_Throwdest

this was a straight verse... throw had a waay betta verse than ostrich tho. ostrich's verse was more self glorifying than anything else... it was odd... throw's verse had waay betta punches like the seams of jeans line. his multis and rhyme scheme put this verse above ostritch's too... just the overall punches and wordplay made throw the winner
V/Throw

Voted For: Da_Throwdest

i vote for.....da throwdest...........ost-rich ya verse wasnt dissing it was just more of a story.....D-t came with some punches....weak battle over all but d-t just came as hard as e needed to...

good lookin out y'all i appreciate the votes & also i feed off ur constructive criticism i was given but i'm uppin this 4 more votes

Voted For: Da_Throwdest

Eh..throwdest got this battle won yo..

punches- throwdest had more in my opinion. ostrich that Ali line is played as fuck..u just worded it anotha way..cant do that and slide on RV man..

personals- none..none of yall really had any honestly..

wordplay- ostrich had betta wordplay..

multis- be serious..throwdest whole verse was full of these..lol

closer- both was whack as hell..throwdest ur shit was played as fuck homie..you know how much people have used that line in like less than a week?..wow..too played homeboi..and ostrich..any thing with ja rule in it is whack..no hate..but where did ja rule come into this anyway?..whack..

but my vote goes to throwdest for his punches.

...nuff said...

Return The Fav..its in front lines verses celerity..

Voted For: Da_Throwdest

$^Ost-rich^$

Yo, I'm a suicide bomber, who'll kill yo family with minute decibles//
im incredible, with the stealth of one white guy in the middle of Cuba's festivels//
^self-glorificaiton: bleh

roasting you like testicles on a blue flame , with a fat person next to it blushin' and sweating with shame//
^okay okay

running through the window screaming that Ostrich's the loudest//
and the fact that he just merkd some shit they call Da_Throwdest//
^decent

sorry chief, but you need some information//
and it's easier to beat you then Muhammod Ali at Operation//
^not feeling 1st line,2nd's good

inflamion hurst when you don't follow the rules,
i asked more ten lines max.//
and you gave me another bubble gum shit by Ja-rule
^uhm,doesn't do the trick

Used self-glorification here and there,some decent punches but no personals.Some of ya shit didn't really make much sense,structure can be better but vocab's good. Flow was okay, just try to get some hardhitting creative lines in there...no hate...


Da_Throwdest

drastic spits hit ya chest, quit kid ur powerless
rip dome's off necks, leave red fluids, drippin' like rusted shower heads
^okay opener

"Shit's U" a real bitch, feel this, this is my show so i'ma steal it
ya style resembles having sex with condoms, cuz i don't feel it
^nice line but don't rhyme with same word!

u don't have nebody u can run 2 in a crew, so hopeless
wanted people 2 up ya weak verse b4 ya even post it
^decent bar

ya lucky i spit 1st, cuz i react sick causing static
Take-In-Line's like ya a starving crack addict
^hmmm,not really feeling it

ur age u can't fade, i stole the spotlight like snatching lamp shades
fill ya camp up with grenades, the only time ostrich is sick with aids
^okay, bit played but good

so Supreme Killin' ost-rich with "Flow's of Gleams"
Cuttin him "Short" of "Threads" like seems of jeans
^aight aight

as a kid & now u have always been an usual square
i run more "Circles" around ya, then "Def" kids playin'
"Musical Chairs"
^good closer

Not best battle but you stayed more consistent with the punches and tried a few personals. Wasn't always that creative, had some played shit in there but you took this battle because the other cat dropped quite weak. Flow was good,structure was okay but vocab could be slightly better. Just try more creative things in next battle...