Tmoney vs Valor
 

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Check in by: 02-14-05 at 01:55 AM

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Tmoney has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-14-05 01:30 AM.

Valor has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-14-05 01:44 AM.

lets get 1 thing straight your not real/
your just like my brothers hot wheels/
im burger king and your dairy queen/
cops cant find your body on the scene/
stay outta my zone this is my throne/
you bout to get owned cause ur all alone/
i'll cut through u like a warm knife through butter/
how can i battle u if all u do is stutter/
a mirror shattered in your reflection/
i'll terminate you like arnorld won the election/
now it's time for me to put this battle to rest/
dont be forgetful and leave your vest or catcha bullet in the chest/

blah i dont do text, but oh well here yall go


you name yourself ''money'', ........but your no vet
the ''T'' is from booty, ...the reason your on the net

your a poor excuse, and your style is mad played
it's people like you who make people like ''tha quo'' seem less gay
so let's all say yay, to this kid making rv seem like herbs
and give him props for being a head canidate for computer nerds

i litterally destroyed you like the impact when a fat dude had farted
i dont even do text...
but im glad i got to merk you before you even started

Voted For: Tmoney

niether person did too well, but Tmoney had better punchs by a little bit so I'm going to have to give him the vote

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Voted For: Valor

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both votes will be deleted thanx....

upping
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This was feedback posted for Valor
 

Valor I can tell that you don't do text...Just checking the polls.

^^^^^nope ima poetry legend....

anyways upping for my quik win

^ Yes you are very dope at poetry. If you are wondering who this is...

...it's Red Bull.

upping number 3.....

vote peeps........dont be lazy:)

Voted For: Tmoney

i think tmoney won because he had alright vocab
harder hittin punches whatever structure
alright multis and a ok opener
valor u had alright structure
u need some work work on ur vocab
but i know u dont do text
u had a pretty whatever opener
u had some alright punches
overall both battles were pretty bad

favorite tmoney lines:
im burger king and your dairy queen/
cops cant find your body on the scene/
stay outta my zone this is my throne/
you bout to get owned cause ur all alone/
i'll cut through u like a warm knife through butter/
how can i battle u if all u do is stutter/

favorite valor lines:
your a poor excuse, and your style is mad played
it's people like you who make people like ''tha quo'' seem less gay
so let's all say yay, to this kid making rv seem like herbs
and give him props for being a head canidate for computer nerds

btw can u return the favor
by voting on my battle against LA
link is in my sig thx

^wack.....


i merked this full easy

can i plz get a real vote?

upping this

upp up and away.................vote vote vote vote vote

This was feedback posted for Valor
 

Whooooooooooooo Valor In Text?

Tight~! Nice Drop.

Voted For: Valor

you name yourself ''money'', ........but your no vet
the ''T'' is from booty, ...the reason your on the net
so let's all say yay, to this kid making rv seem like herbs
and give him props for being a head canidate for computer nerds

vs

nothing

this battle here was okay, Tmoney ur drop was wack...
punches werent there, structure was good, vocab needs
improving, overall you need to elevate...........................

Valor your shit was okay here, punches were harder than
T's...structure was blah...the flow + structure was good..
and the vocab was okay here, overall you had a good drop

Voted For: Valor

HAHAHAHA OMG THAT WAS WACK TIMONEY JUST LIKE MY BROTHERS HIT WHEELS WTF IS THAT SUPPOSE TO MEAN I FEEL DIRTY AFTER MY MIND HAS BEEN POLLUTED BY YOUR WACKNESS ITS LIKE A VIRAL INFECTION IN MY EYES DESTROYING MY BRAINS YOUR LIKR A EVIL TEXTCEE OF WACK SHIT STAINS DESTROYING HIP HOP:(ANYWAYS PUNCHES AINT EXIST DISSES WERE HORRIBLE AND NOT CREATIVE AT ALL YOUR STRTURE LOOKED GOOD BUT FLOW WAS WAY OFF SHIT WAS CHOPPY AS FUCK IM BURGER KING AND YOUR DAIRY QUEEN WTF IS THAT SHIT MAKES NO SENSE AT ALL WTF IS THAT NO SENSE+NO LYRICAL SKILLS AND NO TALENT=A WACK ASS VERSE 0/10 SHIT WAS HORRIBLE PLEASE GO DIE NOW AND DONT DARE SAY ITS A HATE VOTE CUZ I DONT EVEN KNOW YOU YOUR JUST SO FUCKING WACK ITS HORRIBLE NO DIE!DIE!DIE!
VALOR WASNT TOO GREAT BUT AT LEAST FLOWED AND MAD SENSE STRUTURE COULD BE BETTER WAS STRECHED IN PLACES HERE PUNCHES WERE DECENT LIKE I SAID AT LEAST THEY MADE SENSE DISSES WERE NOT TOO CREATIVE BUT OK AND HIT PRETTY DECENT VOCAB WAS ALSO SUPERIOR TO HIS HERE BASICALLY YOUR VERSE IS AIGHT BUT STANDING NEXT TO THIS VILE BUCKET OF WACK SALIVA MINKEY NUT JUICE IT LOOKS DOPE 6/10

Voted For: Valor

valor got my vote just for haveing a more elavated flow ulike t money who was just kiddie "I buger king your dairy queen" that line was horrible.

you both suck but never the less valor won
yea i said u both suck and if you think u can beat me try

Voted For: Valor

this was a 1-sided battle all the way thru out:
opener: valor
structure: tmoney
vocab: valor
multis: valor
closer: valor
valor wins my vote cuz he came harder & hit wit more punches in the battle; tmoney u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes & work on ur wordplay
make sure 2 return the favor

This was feedback posted for Valor
 

LOL, The word OWNED Comes ta mind, nice drop Famlay

Just checkin the polls

LOL!!

He has actually has 1 vote!!!!!

How did that happen?

^^ Lmao Fo Real Dopeman


Anyway Uppin This For The Famalay

Voted For: Valor

tmoney put down the pen you suck....valor .. eh alright drop your structure was waaaaay off but it wasnt bad ... coulda used better vocab n shit . but otherwise decent win


valor //metas,punches,opener,closer.personals...everything


tmoney...you didnt have anything ...elevate

vote//Valor