C.A.L.I vs MC Firetruck
 

CRHYME SINDICATE (C.S.) vs. code steel (c.s.t.)


Battle Rules:

10 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

...goodluck.


S.V.

Minimum posts to vote: 650

Check in by: 02-19-05 at 11:11 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

lol at flow intelligents alais i owned him already with a keystyle ill do it again

MC Firetruck has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-17-05 11:00 PM.

damn daz you was gonna just let me go thinking you was flow huh?thats hocake shit but ill own you now;)

C.A.L.I has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-18-05 05:27 AM.

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It's not Intelligent to think I'm Flow or Daz, but no one told ya
So every personal you drop will be fake, like your persona
Seriously, I don't see how you can call someone a faker
When ya gangster style is on "e", even more than ravers
Think we fear you 'cuz you're 24 and caught a felony
While you beef with teens on the internet
When we called you a wigger you said "No homo, I'm Muslim" then you holla
At Tha Q tryin' to preach the bible… oooh, I'm telling Allah!
And about your arms - aren't tatoos a Muslim sin? Well I'm not too sure
But I do know you made "I'm not a Terrorist" when no one thought you were
And I'll stop there, I won't make a line about droppin' bombs
I'll just key fast, like what you clearly forgot to do for Ramadan
Your religion is non-violent, but you claim to hold tight heaters
Yet the only time you bare arms is in that wife beater
Another thing about it, and advice is why I mention it
But go get some sun, you're startin' to blend in with it!
And you're past the drinking age, hit the bars, I'm sure it will be ill
But instead of buyin' bottles you're getting' Biggie-sized refills
Your activity on RV is like ya figure, you're always around, dude
And you'll say my personals are played,

This aint spitting this pimping watch as i pound this whore
Used to be a 'Low Rider' no wonder his elevation is ground floor
You been Whipping herbs real vets no its easy to beat ya
Cuz you ride 'Socrates' dick harder then Philosophy teachers
Must be slap boxing cuz those punches is way soft
Why you make threads dickriding similar to gay thoughts? (link 1)
This dude lost before the battle started look at his nickname
If he a 'M.C'?' in a 'Firetruck'........ how he gonna spit flames?
No mention as a vet so a garbage ass alais suited him perfectly
The kids a groupie just look at the thread how he worships me!! ((link 2))
Easily kill him i remind him of (villians) the kids scared!
How bout you call in 'Soc' to wit you?
This 'Kid' is straight 'P' i can smell it like dogs in heat
Cuz like written calendars on jail walls his bars is weak/week
Funny how you claim you so nice tell everybody you dope
When your so wack you not only recycle lines
...............and thats just sad bro:(

Voted For: C.A.L.I

Haha...this was a funny battle...witty punches and personals from both heads...but CALI came harder with them. His personals wee hittin hard as hell...the Socrates and philosophy teacher line was dope...haha...CALI came wit a better structure, and flow...MC Firetruck...you had some funny lines...but alot of them were played though...your flow was off in places, your structure was a lil off too...you have potential though, bro, keep it up...no hate, but CALI gets this...return favor, links in sig...

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upppin pulls.......man this was dope....but im not sure who you are so im not gonna vote becuz EMPIRES shit can have all fake personals

^hes 9th degree foo everyone knows that..................................

Voted For: C.A.L.I

C.A.L.I

This aint spitting this pimping watch as i pound this whore
Used to be a 'Low Rider' no wonder his elevation is ground floor
^hehe,nice...

You been Whipping herbs real vets no its easy to beat ya
Cuz you ride 'Socrates' dick harder then Philosophy teachers
^loving that 2nd line,bleh at the first

Must be slap boxing cuz those punches is way soft
Why you make threads dickriding similar to gay thoughts? (link 1)
^haha@2nd one

This dude lost before the battle started look at his nickname
If he a 'M.C'?' in a 'Firetruck'........ how he gonna spit flames?
^nice wordplay

No mention as a vet so a garbage ass alais suited him perfectly
The kids a groupie just look at the thread how he worships me!! ((link 2))
^hehe,funny stuff

Easily kill him i remind him of (villians) the kids scared!
How bout you call in 'Soc' to wit you?

...just to make this shit fair!(link 4)
^personals keep droppin'

This 'Kid' is straight 'P' i can smell it like dogs in heat
Cuz like written calendars on jail walls his bars is weak/week
^good good...

Funny how you claim you so nice tell everybody you dope
When your so wack you not only recycle lines

..you recycle jokes!! (Posts 1&2)
...............and thats just sad bro
^hehe,dope ending

Tight battle once again: found good balance in your vocab,had flow on lock and structure was good. Strongest aspect about this were the hardhitting personals,some of the punches were a bit played (for instance the soft punches stuff) but you compensated that with the personals. Sometimes the set-up didn't work out so well but the 2nd line always hit hard. Good going!


MC Firetruck

It's not Intelligent to think I'm Flow or Daz, but no one told ya
So every personal you drop will be fake, like your persona
^okay opener but no punch...

Seriously, I don't see how you can call someone a faker
When ya gangster style is on "e", even more than ravers
^good good

Think we fear you 'cuz you're 24 and caught a felony
While you beef with teens on the internet

…does somebody lack self-esteem?
^hehe,funny shit

When we called you a wigger you said "No homo, I'm Muslim" then you holla
At Tha Q tryin' to preach the bible… oooh, I'm telling Allah!
^haha...nice one

And about your arms - aren't tatoos a Muslim sin? Well I'm not too sure
But I do know you made "I'm not a Terrorist" when no one thought you were
^okay bar

And I'll stop there, I won't make a line about droppin' bombs
I'll just key fast, like what you clearly forgot to do for Ramadan
^lmao...good stuff

Your religion is non-violent, but you claim to hold tight heaters
Yet the only time you bare arms is in that wife beater
^nice

Another thing about it, and advice is why I mention it
But go get some sun, you're startin' to blend in with it!
^cool bar

And you're past the drinking age, hit the bars, I'm sure it will be ill
But instead of buyin' bottles you're getting' Biggie-sized refills
^okay okay

Your activity on RV is like ya figure, you're always around, dude
And you'll say my personals are played,

'cuz you keep giving us more reasons to clown you.
^haha...dope ending

Level was pretty much the same,had tight personals and good punches in there but you kept on using the religion thing which got boring after a while. Vocab was good,not too complex but not basic either,flow was good and structure was nice.


Both were a good read to me but I was feeling C.A.L.I's drop a bit more...MC Firetruck, your shit was fire but too bad you used those religion lines a lot. This was very close and tight battle, one of best I have seen recently!

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nice vere c.a.l.i you killed him :thumbup: thats another wi for c.s

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp so i can k.o this damn herb

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...checkin' the polls gentlemen...

nice work battlecats. good shit cali.........lets get these votes in.

^^^UPPIN'!!!^^^


...the super...c.s.

Voted For: C.A.L.I

C.A.L.I - Nice fucking drop. You really hit hard here. Good personals with links that made me laugh when I read what you wrote. Good structure the verse flowed good with great vocabulary. Some solid punches in there...This was good...

This dude lost before the battle started look at his nickname
If he a 'M.C'?' in a 'Firetruck'........ how he gonna spit flames?

Good drop, you came quite hard. 9/10


MC Firetruck - Good spit too man. Didn't come quite as hard as C.A.L.I and part of the reason is that your first couple lines were proven wrong because he knew you weren't Daz and so on...You had some pretty good punches a good flow and a good structure...your best line was definately...

Think we fear you 'cuz you're 24 and caught a felony
While you beef with teens on the internet

…does somebody lack self-esteem?

got me laughing...nice drop 9th...8.5/10

close battle. good verses.
vote: C.A.L.I.

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Checkin the polls.................................
Just curious :D

Voted For: MC Firetruck

i guess mc firetruck is 9th degree..... but damn Empy got killed on some real shit....

the battle is like:
This dude lost before the battle started look at his nickname
If he a 'M.C'?' in a 'Firetruck'........ how he gonna spit flames?
This 'Kid' is straight 'P' i can smell it like dogs in heat
Cuz like written calendars on jail walls his bars is weak/week

vs.

Seriously, I don't see how you can call someone a faker
When ya gangster style is on "e", even more than ravers
And I'll stop there, I won't make a line about droppin' bombs
I'll just key fast, like what you clearly forgot to do for Ramadan
Your religion is non-violent, but you claim to hold tight heaters
Yet the only time you bare arms is in that wife beater

and than there was like 2 other bars that were decent by firetruck, while Calis other ones were pretty wack or talkin about shit from before i was even here, which is really stupid for a battle, cuz even wendy jokes wouldnt be as old as the shit ur tlakin about..... u had like 6 different bars with the same punch, which was that firetruck dickrides soc...... we get it after the first one...... i think CALI seriously lost this shit horribly bad

only good CALI bar was the spittin flames/firetruck one

v/firetruck/9th? (too many stupid links too for me)

ahhh......... i dunno if Firetruck and 9th degree are the same, but there IPs dont match, i can tell u that....... but i still voted thinkin that it was 9th since u sed he was

^your a straight fag and no 9th has more then one comp and we got beef and you vote aganist me?fucking kids on rv is fags 9ths shit had no flow shit was way off streched punches were mad played and i only had one line bout him d.ring soc homo the other line said hell need his help if you followed the links youd understand the personals stupid fuck stay out my threads fag

haha, just cuz we battle it doesnt make it beef...... ud have beef with the whole damn site than... i still voted like it was 9th.... ur shit was stupid, u had a link about a thread made by 9th in september of last year... that is stupid, and was a bad bar..... and u had lil forced wordplay and multies to make it sound better, or that it flowed... but come on, wat does this even mean: "This aint spitting this pimping watch as i pound this whore" ....... that is stupid line.... oooo wordplay with the pimpin and whore, and multies with the pimpin and spittin is wat u might say, but its a horrible filler and setup..... w/e...... i dould care less..... lmao, at ur votes by red bull and DQ like those should ever count... even LE is alil iffy but i think he mighta voted fair....

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^^^UPPIN'!!!^^^


s.v..................crhyme sin

Upping........................................this

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hahah your verse was on fire haha that shit made me laugh the low self esteem part was crack'n me up haha but yea both your versus was st8 so no hate to either


meta's//fire
punches//fire
structure//tie
personals//fire
appeal//fire
wordplay//tie

overall this was a good battle .. but mc firetruck yours jus made me laugh it was witty as hell man keep that shit up...

nice drop cali i thought yours was ill but it didnt pack the punch that firetrucks did ...

if i could vote//MC Firetruck


return the favor n check out my battle

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ya name is da worst......but u won dis battle so i dont know how ur down 3-1...just dat nigga pic alone is a hard hittin personal lmaooo

^your gay and no his shit is wacked stop wit the d.r please homo uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppppppppppppp

Haha, you're mad because they think I won. Up....

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damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
entertaining battle

How come nobody wants to vote? Oh well, upping...

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ROFLMAOOOOOOOOOO....................and i'm gone:)

i'd vote, but cali has me blacklisted, and you won....and REDBULL is cali's D/R...all these herbs are, except the few who voted you, because you clearly won this..1

Well don't be afraid to vote, people. If it's honest and explained then he can't do anything about it.

It Is Honest And No I Dont Have D.r Kid Had Madd Streched Lines And Played Ass Punches Shit Was Fucking Horrible And Fluid I K.oed You And You Tryied To Cheat And Pm For Votes And You Got Nerve To Say I Got D.r Your A Proven Fucking Cheater Bum Bitch Anyways Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

Voted For: C.A.L.I

Lemme break this battle down:

Opener: Cali, MC's was alright but didnt hit as hard.
Closer: Cali, It was so good, plus MC's wanst hard at all.
Punches: Cali, Overall harder punches than MC.
Personals: MC, Even tho he might not have hit hard, he had a lot.
Metas: Both, I think it was about even in this area.
Multies: Neither, I didn't catch any.
Vocab: Neither, Nothing really stood out.
Flow: Cali, MC's lines were extended too long in places
Creativity: Cali, For the links, MC...I wasnt feeling the pic

Overall:

MC - Like I said, I dont like when kats basically post their opponents picture up and rap about it. Battle your opponent instead of their pic. All you do is look around in it looking for insignificant items such as a fast food cup which could have been from anywhere, and tie it into the verse. "Cali, you got a map on your wall, is that cause you dont know Geography"...its just gay. Also your lines were really stretched, try fixing that next time and also try elevating your vocab to make your overall verse more effective.

Cali - Good drop son, those links were funny...you obviously did some researching for this one. You could have used some work on your vocab, but your witty punches kind of made me forget about it. Next time all Id have to say for elevation is try to throw some multies into your verse to make it look more tech. You already got the wordplay down, it'll just be the icing on the cake. Good job on this win.

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checkin the pollz.................................

Actually Cali, your verse wouldn't be 100% garbage if I was 9th Degree.

ah... yet again another CALI dr'er votes and isnt usin the persons pic and using links from other threads in ur battle like the same exact thing..... :nonno: