Medicine Man vs lilrenegade89
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-18-05 at 04:54 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

lilrenegade89 has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-15-05 05:00 PM.

Medicine Man has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-15-05 05:01 PM.

post your verse first aight

i will post as soon as i can proly today aight

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y u tryin to rap Medicine Man ta think about it i didn't think indians can/ sorry to be dissin ya man/ but u ain't got a fann/ no 1 will miss u so ill just stick ya ass in the van shoot some lead in ya head n bary your balls in the sand./ rip u took peices then take ten of your vikes/ fuck your whole tribe by the end of the knight/
yea im a knight in a indian fite/
bows and arrows/hoes an scare crows/
dis light weight with sick flows
i take you out with a lance...pin ya to the wall and hang you up by your pants. why is every1 round me be takin a stance/ must all be part of that indian dance

don't you bitch out bitch

i am waitin for your verse to come togther

so hurry up your thoughts and put it down on paper and post your shit

ur dumb as fuck u can't see the other ppls verses u gotta poast it's a blind battle
i already poasted

oh you did aight then i will get mine in some time soon aight then

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aight look

i got you high off of the fumes i put out
n when the flames start risen your gonna mis type ya mouth
my thoughts are sporadic n my time is unmatted like a crackhouse
he's impatient like a horny prostitute about to get a shot down south
no not that im up and standing wit my fist by my face
n his lines are tragic like a retard goin through a deadly maze
i punched him in the mouth wit a hook
n the rhymes are corrupted like nun reading a horror book
ok im done n thats all ima going to put, oh wait i gotta finish em off
cause hes lyrikal dominational crook, n i put him in cuffs as if i were a cop

ok thats it vote on up

uppid for votes

uppin for some votes people
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votes boiz plz ill drop 1 on ya battle no matta who ya vote for

Voted For: Medicine Man

ight here's my vote on who won in my opinion:
opener: medicine man
vocab: medicine man
structure: mm
multis: lil renegade
punches: mm
personals: mm
closer: mm
this battle was won by mm cuz he came harder & hit wit more punches; lilrenegade ur lines r 2 stretched out & u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes
make sure 2 return the favor

uppin for more votes people

jus write who you think should win will be good enough

Voted For: lilrenegade89

Renegade again wit the mults hot
metas-coulda done a lil better but overall hot

MM

Great metas but your flow was of that of a virgin rapper! elevate but keep sprit in ya rhymes

overall Renegade took this

Voted For: Medicine Man

vote goes to...............the man .....cuz u had proper punches wich actually made sense here.......... yo the otha kat...need 2 elevate aiight,...wack rhymes.......good flow man.......ova here............ return the favour in my below battles......aiight ...

uppin for some more votes people

votes are really needed

Voted For: Medicine Man

Aight.......
M.M, ya flow was decent, punche an personals wernt creative as they could be, but your still getting the hang of this site, so that can be forgiven, structure was dope, nothing was stretched, just work on connecting punches better an the rest comes with eperience......
6/10

Renegade, i couldnt even read your flow, it was all fucked up, work on the structure, but what i could read of it, it wasnt all that, ya lacked everything basically, an i'm not trying ta hate, just work on ya structure an how u prent your flows, check other emcees battles for tips, an prezent them like the rest of us

M.M Got this

Return the fave in any of my battles ya see floating around

Peace

uppin for some votes people

i gotta get this battle overwith already

Voted For: Medicine Man

LOL......you owned dis renegade...LOL yeah no doubt u got tha win:O

Voted For: Medicine Man

whoa, medicine takes this, straight up... you owned this battle lol, nice, good stuff yo... nice meta's... thats what helped you win this man, but you still gotta elevate if you gonna drop like this and take on beter mc's, renegade, fix your structure, it's hard to know whats going on yo, but ya, shit was ok I gues, no real hard hitters, not much connected, average noob battle here, kk

v/ MM