Effect vs Buck.Shot
 

Battle Rules:

16- UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-16-05 at 09:51 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-16-05 08:52 AM.

Buck.Shot has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-16-05 09:00 AM.

Kids a 'Brit', now everybody laugh at his Spit..
Cause i seen harder shit at a Pre-teen Mosh-Pit..
Kid stop-it, who you foolin?, your fuckin whack.....
Get outta Line i'm snappin ya spine an you'll be walkin like a Hunchback
I dont know where you get it from, but your Elevated?
Like a newbie graphix head, Your ''Effects'' aint even Rated..
Ya seem ta be Hated, an you stay gettin Owned...
Its like you sold ya soul, An your constantly 'Boned'..
Kids been whored so much, you would think he was Rich..
Everyone you ever dissed sonned you, but i'm the BITCH?
When i say run, you do a Hundred Laps..
Eatin 'Tortilla' is the only time you have 'Hot (W)raps'..
See battlin you it aint much of a Fight...
Like a construction worker bein fired, you should 'Leave the Site!'...
Ya flows aint 'Tigh't, But i suspect thats why your a 'Whore'
Kid even called me his 'Teacher' i was his MSN Mentor!

Blah, good luck Sinner you homo :D

Explanation is prolly just the last line, cause everythin else is kinda basic an simple too figure out..

But yeah, when he had the name Sinner, he added me ta MSN askin me ta help him with Multies, an everythin else, Thats why i said he called me teacher.....

If ya dont understand any of the verses, dont vote

Uppin y'all

Peace

good luck to you to bitch.................................... :laugh:

Voted For: Buck.Shot

yo buck took this one all the way his punches hit way harder than effects did and his multi's set his punches up good he also had a nice personal and some decent vocab and he was a lil bit creative with his verse but effect didnt ave any punches but he did have a few multi's decent vocab and both of your structures was aight that my vote holla at ya boy

whatever that was a dick rider vote... fuck that I did have punches dumass.. ^^

Your flow was too basic an elementary ^^^

Even a herb could see that, with a record of more losses lol....

Its aight kid, you tried playin with the big guns an got a foot in ya ass, shake it off, elevate, an TRY USING PUNCHLINES

Uppin folk

Peace

yea stop the swaying you had alot of weak punchlines dopeman and your stucture was terrable compared to mine upping this shit ignore the dumb voter.

This was feedback posted for Buck.Shot
 

omg buck shot took this. He had an actual verse. dayum your text flow is nice Effect but your verses were played and you don't even know this cat in life. Don't judge someone wif something you don't know. Dayum but I ain't gonna vote cuz he'll prolly dq it. and besides no one will return da favor. Bu buck shot took this. lol.

Weak puncher or not, i had punches, an structure dont win you battles
The lines do, an mine were personals mixed with metaphores, yours were..........Gangster wannabe disses

Uppin y'all

This was feedback posted for Buck.Shot
 

checking polls............................effect spff

Thank you, thank you.....

Outcome was inevitable tho'...
i could have typed

''Yo look at me, i'm a black man on the internet!''
an i had this shit on lock

Uppin for votes y'all

Uppin.........

Honest votes will be returned by both of us

Peace

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This was feedback posted for Effect
 

u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes & use a lil more wordplay but keep at it u'll get betta ova time

Uppin.............................................

Voted For: Buck.Shot

I DUNNO...this was a close one, but i think buck took it. buck, u had a nice drop. yo punches connected and yo metteas was clean. that torillas line was nice. extremely play'd, but u worded it coo....yo structure was on point, and i was feelin yo whole verse...flawless...keep elevating fam
effect- u made this one close. u came harder with personals i think, well, not really, because most of em couldve been directed to anybody u face, but still nice. but i think u should work on consistency, and shit. u kinda started off wack, but then u picked it up near tha end, and thats why u made this vote a lil easier for me...NO HATE tho, just keep elevating fam...
overall-this was a close battle. dope came off, and i think he got tha vote w/ more consistency...keep elevating yall

PLZ RTF on this battle...
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=177504
and plz make it explained, cause i took my time out to explain this and vote on this....

keep elevating

~1~

Appreciated, i voted on your battle with class.sic lol, you lost that in my opinnon, sorry, but i always vote honestly

Uppin folk

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This was feedback posted for Effect
 

uppin.............................................

Voted For: Buck.Shot

haha, funny battle....

Effect...
>your not dope when ya rap you sound like the pope
ya prewrite text and even when you do you choke
-okay second line, hit decent 6/10
>can't spit on a microphone your words are useless
I reck your raps and leave ya bitch mouth toofless
-nice pucnh...7/10
>your rhymes are corny like they make retards horny
you just bore me and everyone who reads ya storys
-nah, weak....4/10
>Im gonna bust shots straight through hittin ya crotch
make your heart stop then throwin in away in da docks
-another weak one....4/10
>ya fake you think ya tupac but your more clown possy
don't act tuff and bossy bitch I will make ya a pussy
-threatning him? nah....4/10
>girls walk away from you because your an ugly ass
everyday u must get trashed a rapper wid no cash
-huh....weak attempt at personal 5/10
>spendin ya whole time here like your a waste of time
afraid to commit crimes this bitch don't have no mind
-okay, 6/10
>he likes to talk shit but when he does he gets whipped
destroy cut up ABUSED! like he was an iraqie terrorist
-not bad, prolly your best bar 7/10

overall: 43/80....pretty simple verse, not really and creative, complex ideas happening here, lotta played shit, vocab pretty simple and plain weak attempts at punches and personals, all-in-all, gotta elevate this shit man...closer wasnt bad, same with the 'toothless' bar

Buck.Shot...not bad man
>Kids a 'Brit', now everybody laugh at his Spit..
Cause i seen harder shit at a Pre-teen Mosh-Pit..
-not bad, first line coulda been better....7/10
>Kid stop-it, who you foolin?, your fuckin whack.....
Get outta Line i'm snappin ya spine an you'll be walkin like a Hunchback
-haha, nice punch 7/10
>I dont know where you get it from, but your Elevated?
Like a newbie graphix head, Your ''Effects'' aint even Rated..
-another decent punch 7/10
>Ya seem ta be Hated, an you stay gettin Owned...
Its like you sold ya soul, An your constantly 'Boned'..
-okay....6/10
>Kids been whored so much, you would think he was Rich..
Everyone you ever dissed sonned you, but i'm the BITCH?
-nice personal....8/10
>When i say run, you do a Hundred Laps..
Eatin 'Tortilla' is the only time you have 'Hot (W)raps'..
-haha, i laughed at this one 8/10
>See battlin you it aint much of a Fight...
Like a construction worker bein fired, you should 'Leave the Site!'...
-got good at the end here....8/10
>Ya flows aint 'Tigh't, But i suspect thats why your a 'Whore'
Kid even called me his 'Teacher' i was his MSN Mentor!
-haha, good closer...8/10

overall: 59/80....pretty solid, you took this one all the way man....little c hoppy for flow in some places, but still easy to read....couple weak lines but had some strong ones too, last 3 bars were decent, flowed nicely....vocab was better....you 'sonned' this guy like the rest man, haha

v/buck.shot

Uppin y'all.......................................

Uppin

Honest votes will be returned

Peace...

Voted For: Buck.Shot

Yo dis goes 2 Buck he came a little harder wit da punches and personals heres how it really goes down......

Opener: Buck lol
Structure: Effect
Punches: Buck
Personals: Buck
Multis:Buck
Metas:None
Closer: Buck

Onesided battle here as u can tell but no hate Effect u jus need to elevate a little........RTF links in sig.....Pz

Uppin y'all.........

I'ma hit ya battle up sometime in the near future blkaze

Uppin

Voted For: Buck.Shot

Buck.Shot
Alright FIrst Off Your Had Some Decent Punches In Here That Helped You Out Alot, Personals Wasn't Good But It Was There, Meta's You Had Em' You Could Add Some Multi's Here To Help You Out But Other Then That Your Strcture Was Horrible No Hate Try To Line Up The Bars So They match Like Effects Structure, OverAll I'll Give You An 8/10

Effect
Alright First Off Your Structure Was Decent You Also Had Better Vocabulary But I Don't Think It Helped Coz Punches Is The Main THing Which You Lacked So Try And Get That Up, Personals No I Don't Think They Helped You Need To Change Your Rhyme Scheme, Overall Your Verse Was Only Good With Vocab And Structure I'll Give You An 6.5/10

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