TheWackestMC vs Invektive
 

Battle Rules:

Crew Battle: The Establishment vs Nok Out Kingz

10-14 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dickriding
No Bullshit

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 02-19-05 at 11:18 AM

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Invektive has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-17-05 06:11 PM.

this internet thug sais he's "phat"....but please stop actin hard chubbs
ill run more laps around the wackest...than that guy in your avatar does
your skills are deflating every time you battle...so sit back and notice how
ima Establish a win....you said it yourself ....NOK truly is whats goin down
all of your writtens go unread....like neglected books...stay on the shelf
he even admits he's not good ....but honestly he's still overrating himself
kids the weakest ive witnessed...and still needs an hour to drop 6 lines
after this loss....he'll have to "Rebound" better than "Rodman's Prime"
Ko'ed by the only 2 decent heads you battled..and you think you still hot..why?
faggot..you could drink a Red Bull..just to give you wings...your still not fly
im your psychiatrist..thank me for the lyrical clinic lettin u know that u soft
and this faggot could never see female skin...even if HIS clothing was lost
you havent gotten better since you started...dont elevate..your shit falls
if i said you was nice...i'd contradict myself...cause your name sais it all

TheWackestMC has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-18-05 04:40 PM.

chea, chea, NOK IS IN THE BUILDING

he makin threats in his raps as if he'll do em
but you got transparent bars we all see right thru em
n nicca u dont see the green
u musta "lost ya mind" like they sent u to the guillotine
but you'll see him scream, when i wring his throat
im not cinnamon crunch but i bring the toast
so when ya team approach,u know i keep the neeners close
and that flow so dead a paramedic couldnt even see the pulse
i spit fire, yall mind will melt
rappin on pool tables, the only time ya rhymes r "felt"
u aint got a corporal clutch, maybe u grippin it spiritually
give him viagra for his verbs, cuz u impotent lyrically
supersoakers is the only time u squirtin at a car
u a drink servin nigga, KEEP WORKIN AT YA BARS!!....holla

++++++++++++++++uppin for honest feed++++++++++
reall good battle yall, dont sleep on it

uppin for the win.........................................

++++++++++++++++uppin for honest feed++++++++++
reall good battle yall, dont sleep on it
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This was feedback posted for Invektive
 

checkin polls nice verse tho............................

Voted For: Invektive

wow, this one was good...

Invektive man, SWEET drop.....
>this internet thug sais he's "phat"....but please stop actin hard chubbs
ill run more laps around the wackest...than that guy in your avatar does
-first line coulda been better, 2nd was nice 8/10
>your skills are deflating every time you battle...so sit back and notice how
ima Establish a win....you said it yourself ....NOK truly is whats goin down
-nice play on that link....8/10
>all of your writtens go unread....like neglected books...stay on the shelf
he even admits he's not good ....but honestly he's still overrating himself
-this line i liked, laughed, 8/10
>kids the weakest ive witnessed...and still needs an hour to drop 6 lines
after this loss....he'll have to "Rebound" better than "Rodman's Prime"
-meh, okay line. wanst feelin it too much 6.5/10
>Ko'ed by the only 2 decent heads you battled..and you think you still hot..why?
faggot..you could drink a Red Bull..just to give you wings...your still not fly
-nice puch....8/10
>im your psychiatrist..thank me for the lyrical clinic lettin u know that u soft
and this faggot could never see female skin...even if HIS clothing was lost
-haha, another nice one....8/10
>you havent gotten better since you started...dont elevate..your shit falls
if i said you was nice...i'd contradict myself...cause your name sais it all
-solid closer to a solid verse 8.5/10

overall: 55/70.....nice drop man, came way harder...punches and personals were way more effective, got right to the point, no wasted lines at all.....flow was great, vocab, average....but overall, you killed in this one man, best verse ive seen by you man

Whackest MC....i dunno man, verse looked a little lacking, for a crew battle
>he makin threats in his raps as if he'll do em
but you got transparent bars we all see right thru em
-not really sayin anythin here.....6/10
>n nicca u dont see the green
u musta "lost ya mind" like they sent u to the guillotine
-again, not even 'punchin' him here....5/10
>but you'll see him scream, when i wring his throat
im not cinnamon crunch but i bring the toast
-hahaha, nice bar here, second line, creative 8/10
>so when ya team approach,u know i keep the neeners close
and that flow so dead a paramedic couldnt even see the pulse
-this bar is useless...if hes dead, he has no pulse.....5/10
>i spit fire, yall mind will melt
rappin on pool tables, the only time ya rhymes r "felt"
-not bad.....6/10
>u aint got a corporal clutch, maybe u grippin it spiritually
give him viagra for his verbs, cuz u impotent lyrically
-got better near the end here....8/10
>supersoakers is the only time u squirtin at a car
u a drink servin nigga, KEEP WORKIN AT YA BARS!!....holla
-weak closer....6/10

overall: 44/70

v/invektive....for hardre punches/personals....complexity, pretty much every catagory, he took this one by far, whackest didnt really come too hard in this one

Crew vote removed

word......thanks for the votes......uppin for more...............

wow this is crazy, lol uppin for votes++++++++++++++++++++++

This was feedback posted for Invektive
 

Checking the polls on this. In my opinion Invektive owned this guy.

This was feedback posted for TheWackestMC
 

checkin' the polls, both raps are good, but he got good personals

how is it crazy? my verse was just a lot better than yours....i had better personals, metaphors, punches, structure......how is this crazy?

i used alot of the bars u used before lol and ur bars were mad stretched, n didnt flow very well in my mind i'll admit when i get beat but idk yall rap really weird on this site to me.

n erebody said i didnt come as hard as i usually do, i thought that was one of my best verses

Voted For: TheWackestMC

this was a really good battle, both came hard but WMC edged it out in my opinion with the punches.
breakdown
he makin threats in his raps as if he'll do em
but you got transparent bars we all see right thru em
+hot opener+

n nicca u dont see the green
u musta "lost ya mind" like they sent u to the guillotine
+ight punch, coudl've been worded better+

but you'll see him scream, when i wring his throat
im not cinnamon crunch but i bring the toast
+nice word play, good bar+

so when ya team approach,u know i keep the neeners close
and that flow so dead a paramedic couldnt even see the pulse
+hot bar, nice multies+

i spit fire, yall mind will melt
rappin on pool tables, the only time ya rhymes r "felt"
+one of the best bars in the battle+

u aint got a corporal clutch, maybe u grippin it spiritually
give him viagra for his verbs, cuz u impotent lyrically
+good vocab, hot bar+

supersoakers is the only time u squirtin at a car
u a drink servin nigga, KEEP WORKIN AT YA BARS!!....
+hot bar, my fav one in the battle, good closer+

Invektive
this internet thug sais he's "phat"....but please stop actin hard chubbs
ill run more laps around the wackest...than that guy in your avatar does
=ehh, wasnt feelin this, heard it too many times but ok=

your skills are deflating every time you battle...so sit back and notice how
ima Establish a win....you said it yourself ....NOK truly is whats goin down
=nice bar, brought back his own words to haunt him lol=

all of your writtens go unread....like neglected books...stay on the shelf
he even admits he's not good ....but honestly he's still overrating himself
=nice diss, a lil stretched tho=

he even admits he's not good ....but honestly he's still overrating himself
kids the weakest ive witnessed...and still needs an hour to drop 6 lines
=weak, could've been plenty of reasons for that^^=
after this loss....he'll have to "Rebound" better than "Rodman's Prime"
Ko'ed by the only 2 decent heads you battled..and you think you still hot..why?
=no, not good n stretched too=

im your psychiatrist..thank me for the lyrical clinic lettin u know that u soft
and this faggot could never see female skin...even if HIS clothing was lost
=wow this shit was a mouthful, but the concept was good so it was ight=

you havent gotten better since you started...dont elevate..your shit falls
if i said you was nice...i'd contradict myself...cause your name sais it all
=weak, real played n obvious, could've hit alot harder for ya closer=

invektive had better vocab and structure, and some weak attempts at personals but the wackest mc had better punches, multies, and much better flow.
so thewackestmc gets my vote
yall both came hard tho, good battle

lol.........kids these days............................

Voted For: TheWackestMC

damn, one of the bst battles ive seen in a while on here,nah mean.

ok here we go,
invektive's opener -was ok kind of corny but good diss
invektive's closer -ok personal, but it kind of doesnt work when dudes name is alread thewackestmc, nah mean
invektive's bes bar- all of your writtens go unread....like neglected books...stay on the shelf
he even admits he's not good ....but honestly he's still overrating himself
invektive's worst bar- kids the weakest ive witnessed...and still needs an hour to drop 6 lines
after this loss....he'll have to "Rebound" better than "Rodman's Prime"
lol could;ve used a better metaphor for rebounding, that was not a hot one dog.
so basically, u had some ok bars some wack ones n some good ones. good vocab n structure, but some bars sounded kind of forced,nah mean.

ok thewackestmc

TWMC's opener- good wordplay, hit pretty hard , nice set-up
TWMC's closer- again good word play, coudl've had a lot better set up tho, still hit kinda hard
TWMC's best bar- u aint got a corporal clutch, maybe u grippin it spiritually
give him viagra for his verbs, cuz u impotent lyrically
^^^that shit was hot, good vocab n set up
TWMC's worst bar- n nicca u dont see the green
u musta "lost ya mind" like they sent u to the guillotine
^^^wasn't feelin that too much, didnt really punch that hard if u feel me
basically twmc's had them punches, nah mean. invektive's verse was kinda labored or somethin, this was close,reaaaaal close. twmc had no personals really so that hurt him alot but invektives werent that great either
invektive didnt have no multies and twmc did.
invektive had good structure, but that dont get many points in battle, esp since i could read both easily.
so ima givin this to TWMC. HOLLA BACK AT ME...1.

Voted For: TheWackestMC

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NOK got this...uppin this shit...im up in my battle 3-1


NOK bitches.....

that nigga kesse is on yall roster u dickridin fags

Voted For: Invektive

this was an 1-sided battle all the way thru out:
opener: invektive
structure: invektive
multis: invektive
vocab: invektive
closer: invektive
invektive came harder & hit wit more punches then wack did; also no hating but wack u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes & betta structure ur verses
make sure 2 return the favor

Voted For: Invektive

TheWackestMC
he makin threats in his raps as if he'll do em
but you got transparent bars we all see right thru em
nah, gay punch here
n nicca u dont see the green
u musta "lost ya mind" like they sent u to the guillotine
what?, this punch was weak here…extend ur flow
but you'll see him scream, when i wring his throat
im not cinnamon crunch but i bring the toast
decent punch
so when ya team approach,u know i keep the neeners close
and that flow so dead a paramedic couldnt even see the pulse
no
i spit fire, yall mind will melt
rappin on pool tables, the only time ya rhymes r "felt"
self-glory, not a punch here
u aint got a corporal clutch, maybe u grippin it spiritually
give him viagra for his verbs, cuz u impotent lyrically
decent punch here
supersoakers is the only time u squirtin at a car
u a drink servin nigga, KEEP WORKIN AT YA BARS!!....holla
nah, punch was weak here



[size=6]Invektive
this internet thug sais he's "phat"....but please stop actin hard chubbs
ill run more laps around the wackest...than that guy in your avatar does
decent opener, punch was okay
your skills are deflating every time you battle...so sit back and notice how
ima Establish a win....you said it yourself ....NOK truly is whats goin down
good persona, punch was okay
all of your writtens go unread....like neglected books...stay on the shelf
he even admits he's not good ....but honestly he's still overrating himself
punch was good here
kids the weakest ive witnessed...and still needs an hour to drop 6 lines
after this loss....he'll have to "Rebound" better than "Rodman's Prime"
lol?, don’t like this punch
Ko'ed by the only 2 decent heads you battled..and you think you still hot..why?
faggot..you could drink a Red Bull..just to give you wings...your still not fly
nice
im your psychiatrist..thank me for the lyrical clinic lettin u know that u soft
and this faggot could never see female skin...even if HIS clothing was lost
okay, decent
you havent gotten better since you started...dont elevate..your shit falls
if i said you was nice...i'd contradict myself...cause your name sais it all
good closer

Overall this battle was one-sided
Invektive took this one, came harder
In the punches, the flow was good
And the structure was in place

TWMC…your drop was weak…the punches weren’t really hard here

This was feedback posted for Invektive
 

checkin the pollz...................................

word to the votes....except for the d/r votes that wackest received.....uppin

up................................................ .................

Voted For: Invektive

I gotta go wit invek

he makin threats in his raps as if he'll do em
but you got transparent bars we all see right thru em
NOT FEELIN THIS A WHOLE LOT THE TRANSPARENT THING IS DONE
n nicca u dont see the green
u musta "lost ya mind" like they sent u to the guillotine
I LIKE THIS GOOD PUNCH
but you'll see him scream, when i wring his throat
im not cinnamon crunch but i bring the toast
so when ya team approach,u know i keep the neeners close
and that flow so dead a paramedic couldnt even see the pulse
THIS WAS A NICE SET OF LINES BUT THE PUNCH WASNT STRONG
i spit fire, yall mind will melt
rappin on pool tables, the only time ya rhymes r "felt"
NICE PUNCH ON THIS ONE
u aint got a corporal clutch, maybe u grippin it spiritually
give him viagra for his verbs, cuz u impotent lyrically
THIS ONE WAS KILLER
supersoakers is the only time u squirtin at a car
u a drink servin nigga, KEEP WORKIN AT YA BARS!!....holla
THIS ONE WAS DECENT

overall good i just wasn't feelin some parts of the flo like the short to long lines and some of your punches lacked

this internet thug sais he's "phat"....but please stop actin hard chubbs
ill run more laps around the wackest...than that guy in your avatar does
THIS IS A GOOD PUNCH THOUGH I'M SURE SOMEONES SAID IT BEFORE STILL A GOOD OPENER IF NOBODY HAS
your skills are deflating every time you battle...so sit back and notice how
ima Establish a win....you said it yourself ....NOK truly is whats goin down
THIS IS A GOOD PUNCH USING HIS OWN WORDS AGAINST HIM
all of your writtens go unread....like neglected books...stay on the shelf
he even admits he's not good ....but honestly he's still overrating himself
ONCE AGAIN GREAT TWISTING OF WORDS
kids the weakest ive witnessed...and still needs an hour to drop 6 lines
after this loss....he'll have to "Rebound" better than "Rodman's Prime"
DECENT PUNCH HERE NOTHING SPECIAL THOUGH
Ko'ed by the only 2 decent heads you battled..and you think you still hot..why?
faggot..you could drink a Red Bull..just to give you wings...your still not fly
DECENT PUNCH BUT COULD'VE BEEN WORDED BETTER
im your psychiatrist..thank me for the lyrical clinic lettin u know that u soft
and this faggot could never see female skin...even if HIS clothing was lost
NICE PUNCH HERE
you havent gotten better since you started...dont elevate..your shit falls
if i said you was nice...i'd contradict myself...cause your name sais it all
DECENT CLOSER HERE NOTHING SPECIAL

i think invek takes this one because his punches in certain places made up for his punches in other places that werent as strong making him technically consisten while wack didn't have punches in some areas just clever metaphores, but this is a battle. Punches are the point. Sorry close battle though yall.

SOMEBODY PLEASE FINISH THIS DAMN BATTLE OFF FOR ME
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174830
me vs. mafia

I have other battle links but i just want this battle off my screen so bad this is the only link i'm gonna post. Somebody get this off my screen.

kesse is in our crew? i didnt know that......hes not on the roster.....oh well....uppin for one last vote

+++++++++++++++++++++++++++uppin++++++++++++++++++ ++ yall are some strange peeps on this website lol

Voted For: Invektive

punches......twmc
personals.....invektive...[would of won punches if everything wasnt a personal lol
multis...none
flow.....invektive
metas....tie..

vote....invektive.....[establishment]

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omg you guys cant be serious...................................uppin... .

LMAO at removing votes. 6-2 Invektive right now...

shut up ur canadian dont talk nemore........

this is extremely gay............ive already won twice.....you got mopped.....just accept it

u didnt win twice? what r u talkin about u only had one removed what u cryiin about

^ no...2 removed you hoe..........................fact is he allready won. We beat your crew 4-1 in battles. Ha.