lyricalflowz vs Skriptz
 

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Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-18-05 06:14 PM.

lyricalflowz has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-18-05 06:37 PM.

This was feedback posted for lyricalflowz
 

Nice Punches Lyrical Flow.


Good Drop From Both Heads


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word...im tired now...headache all day...uppin this

Voted For: Skriptz


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Voted For: Skriptz

my vote goes to skriptz cus it waz more creative and it waz funnier his punches hit harder and he had a good flow nice structure vocab cud use sum work
Lyricalflowz- structure was good punches were decent cuda hit harder den wat dey did doe

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Voted For: Skriptz

i think skiptz won because he had good vocab
really hard hittin punches good structure
good multis and a great opener
lyricalflowz u had good structure
u need a some work on ur vocab
u had a pretty good opener
u had some good punches
overall both battles were pretty good

favorite skriptz lines:
Only time when your punches are runnin, is when they were flee
…………Get off 2Pac’s dick. cuz, you’re just a fake-ass wannabe*
……I’m going to win this battle, so let’s get this shit out the way
My punches will smoke you like cigs. and be put in the ash tray*
Let me just tell you this, you’re finished before I even begin
…& You can tryout for a herb crew, and you’ll never get in

favorite lyricalflowz lines:
Skripz aint a star, I spit 'unique' like it was written on mars
You'll only bless the mic, if you take advice from your avatar*
I'll rob ya jewelry, guess ya can say i stole your shine
Havin 'more letters' is the only way ya name is 'bigger' than mine
Ask peeps if they heard of skriptz they'll all say No!
Only one accomplishment, and even that was a long time ago**
return tha favor
link in sig
thx

This was feedback posted for Skriptz
 

Voted For: Skriptz

Skriptz - Allright, this was a good verse. Nice solid structure that flowed great. The punches were solid, hit hard and were funny as shit. Good personals too. You came pretty good in this battle. My favourtie line was...

Only time when your punches are runnin, is when they were flee
…………Get off 2Pac’s dick. cuz, you’re just a fake-ass wannabe*

^ Yep, good shit. Nice verse...7.5/10

lyricalflowz - Good verse as well. You also had a solid structure with good flow. The punches were there and connected allright. Not as hard as Skriptz though. You didn't have as many personals as him either. Don't get me wrong your verse was good just really played. Seen the closer used by Socrates before...and the punches thing has been used countless amounts of times. Your verse...6/10

Vote: Skriptz

lol @ red bull...thanks uppin

This was feedback posted for lyricalflowz
 

i think LF got this one, but it was close...but i aint guna vote on this, cause me and skriptz got history...


good drop both yall...was feelin em both, it would be a hard decision anyway

Voted For: Skriptz

A'ight in all honesty this was a close battle...both came dope wit some nice punches and personals.

Lyrifcalflow...you need to work on flow and structure. Alot of your punches are elementary, your vocabulary is weak, and you need somethin a bit more creative. I liked how you included his avater, that was pretty good, but just keep workin at it, and you will be dope.

Skriptz...not the best I have seen from you, but still dope. Flow and structure is on point, and you came wit some witty punches and personals. Close battle...but Skriptz takes it. No hate, return the favor links in sig.

omg...mayn...opening..shit...

Voted For: Skriptz

LyricalFlowz
hmm not bad i seen some ncie lines at most parts but you didnt really use any metas to complete your personals well i didnt see them maybe if you did try making it more obvious cause you probably used hard words that didnt quite work but other den the lack of metas the verse was not that bad the rest was ight
no hate

Skriptz
i liked the way you used lots of metaphores in there and created tight punches with a few personals but there wasnt much comedy in there but it wasnt bad the stucture was decent and the flow was great but what most stood out were the punches probably peace

opener: skriptz
closer: lyrical
punches: skriptz
personals: skriptz
stucture: tie
flow: tie

vote/ Skriptz

aight...uppin this

Voted For: Skriptz

gotta go with skriptz

lyricalflowz....alot of played shit in there, like your closer, the 'bigger than you line', boxing gloves one.... weak pucnhes too...like the tool shed one and even the opener was a little dull....overall, not bad of a spit, but you need to come out harder against he's skriptz, more creativity and complexity, better thought out lines....flow didnt go so smoothly throughout your verse...and you could up the vocab a little

skriptz....took this one all the way, little sloppy on the flow i thought near the start, but thats about it, nice punches, opener and the ash tray ones were the best....so overall: better punches, couple harder personals and complexity...

v/skriptz