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my 1st shit, werd
werd. i just wuz gittin tired of not havin no audio shit, so i recorded this last night wif my lil bruthaz ps2 hedset shit. its tha only song i got on there rite now "KOOL VERSE" werd
www.soundclick.com/koolcolb feedback i left... http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=174863&page=2 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177466 werd |
nice flow........h8 the beat....some nice lyrics..a bit of gat bussin talk...try 4 more complex rhymescheme...nice lyrical content..not bad man lookin forward 2 hearin sum of yo proper shit str8 up...-7.5/10 leave feed on ma track wid nitro in songs...Peace
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NWA beat nigga, watchu no bout dat
dis was short but sweet simple said |
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NWA = my gods thanx fo tha feedback both yall, werd |
beat is ehh.. I dont like it
Quality - was bad Voice - Really cant judge cause how it sounded Lyrics - were cool Punches were eh.... Flow was ok but bland like you were reading it off paper Decent track not mixtape type tho |
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Bad quality homie, you need to get a better mic cause we have no way to tell if you got any skills withn tha voice... flow wasn't really that good homie, you need to work on this ... try memorising the lyrics you are gonna be spitting and concentrate on the performance instead of reading it and getting it down...I went thrue the same dawg... it will come along
just my 2 cents aight return tha crits plz: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177309 peace DraXe |
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yeah i'll check that out. and i dunno wut u talkin bout, of all my rap i got this memorized tha best. lol, i aint c nuthin wrong wif tha flow or quality, lol, thanx fo tha feedback anyway, werd |
You know this song right her.e.
THATS GANGSTA lmfao at this track.....this shit was accually good for ur first audio...on some old skool shit...ud be hot on an old skool beat...ur quality aint that bad either...u shuld start doin audio |
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yo mayn, i appreciate tha feed. werd 2 old skool, ima old skool kinda mafucka, u no. and yeah, ima start doin alot of audio now, wen i git a chance. werd homey |
dope shit, homie, especially fo ur first audio, make more shit
i thought his flow was tight....also, i thought the quality was fuckin dope for a ps2 headset |
dude, for yo first audio this is very nice. Lol did yo mom yell at all that killing shit? ;) lol tight shit. drop more yo pc
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LOL, naw , i wuz home alone fo awile, she dont even no i recorded shit, lol. thanx fo tha feed yall, werd |
like everyone sed this was a dope audio for ur first one, but obviously u needa get more on a track next time...... but this was pretty dope, and nice quality for a headset or w/e... kepp this up
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man that is about as phat as ma mamma, and I aint just sayin that..that bitch is like 500 pounds, good 4 ur first one, really good man
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That was a cold beat kinda played but ya kno, but like the guy said you need to get a better mic. Do that and then we will be able to really hear what you are saying. The sound quality sucked
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flow was aight on this beat...lyrics were not bad...i think the delivery could be upped a lil more dont sound to confident...have a old school feel to it...wasn't feeling the echo effect...overall for a first joint its not a bad track...keep doing ya thing aight...
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lol, thanx fo tha feed yall. and yeah, ima try n git a better mic. and Tmka"D", it sounds a bajillion times betta wif tha echo than wut it did b4 i put tha echo in. lmao @ Ministry, lol, werd
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basically fam....keep doin your thing props |
The beat is dope ....ITS FUNKY ITS FUNKY
wird....but yo dont do echos....and shit.....just keep your voice how it is..it would be mad beter kinda short but nice.......lyrics was str8t.....kinda off beat in some spots.....but good...... PLEASE drop feedback on any one of my tracks...thanks |
i wasn't feelin the beat, but thats cause im a producer..................flow was good, but you seemed to lose your wording sometimes. other then that it was on, from what I could hear. i understand that your mic was from a ps2 so its kool. The lyrics had potential though.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179543 check me out too |
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