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Blac-Out vs MC IgGY
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 02-19-05 at 02:40 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
MC IgGY has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-19-05 02:11 PM.
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Blac-Out has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-19-05 02:12 PM.
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Iggys one of the wackess mcs of plenty//
Fuck punches, ill spray wit da semi, until da clips is empty, ya Dig me?// Dis nigga try dissing me, fuck it, hes a bitch to me// Ill grip da heat, cock It back, clap, and then hes history// Listen to me, dis niggas a fuckin amateur// I got da hammer tucked, step to Blac-out, then Ima damage ya// Rv'll just laugh at ya, the way you gotta knock-out// You beatin me? That’s like, Not seein a new cd of 2pac out// So chill, your battle record of wins getting to 10-is-rarely// Hey Strobe!!!! Dig up a whole, add this nigga to RV's Cemetery// And remember………..da names blac-out, so get it right and keep it right// Before I get da heat, and feed it, so you definitely wont be able to speak it right// |
ur gona get dropped harder than snow in a flurry
My punches hit you right between the eyes, make ur vision go blurry against me your require a higher level of writing even if ur words were fire, you still wouldnt beat me fighting you could concrete my Carters 50 feet deep in water and not keep me under blac the buster aint seen these keys like he was Ray Charles This fool is iron and im air cuz he gettin rusty this wasnt a battle all u did was make my shoulders get dusty this fool couldnt be hot if his last name was stove im a eagle, this lil kid is a baby dove ill reconstruct his complexion, destruct all his sexual sensation , and ill end this lyrical discrimination I'ma use white out to get ur flowless blac ink out |
Voted For: Blac-Out
Breakdown... Name:BLac-Out Verse: Iggys one of the wackess mcs of plenty// Fuck punches, ill spray wit da semi, until da clips is empty, ya Dig me?// Dis nigga try dissing me, fuck it, hes a bitch to me// Ill grip da heat, cock It back, clap, and then hes history// Listen to me, dis niggas a fuckin amateur// I got da hammer tucked, step to Blac-out, then Ima damage ya// Rv'll just laugh at ya, the way you gotta knock-out// You beatin me? That’s like, Not seein a new cd of 2pac out// So chill, your battle record of wins getting to 10-is-rarely// Hey Strobe!!!! Dig up a whole, add this nigga to RV's Cemetery// And remember………..da names blac-out, so get it right and keep it right// Before I get da heat, and feed it, so you definitely wont be able to speak it right// Need/Don’t need to work on:wassup bro, i think that you need to work on your structure as do i...other than that keep droppin them... Stats... Punches:5/10 Metaphors:3/10 Wordplay:0/10 Structure:2/10 Personals:3/10 Total:13/60 Percentage:21.6% ---------------------------------------------------- Name:MC IGGY Verse: ur gona get dropped harder than snow in a flurry My punches hit you right between the eyes, make ur vision go blurry against me your require a higher level of writing even if ur words were fire, you still wouldnt beat me fighting you could concrete my Carters 50 feet deep in water and not keep me under blac the buster aint seen these keys like he was Ray Charles This fool is iron and im air cuz he gettin rusty this wasnt a battle all u did was make my shoulders get dusty this fool couldnt be hot if his last name was stove im a eagle, this lil kid is a baby dove ill reconstruct his complexion, destruct all his sexual sensation , and ill end this lyrical discrimination I'ma use white out to get ur flowless blac ink out Need/Don’t need to work on:Sup playa....overall i think you need to rethink how you write i mean "under and Charles" do not rhyme...just keep tryin fam... Stats: Punches:2/10 Metaphors:2/10 Wordplay:0/10 Structure:4/10 Personals:2/10 Multies:0/10 Total:10/50 Percentage:20.0% Return the Favor in the sig against J DOT...personally i think i won...good battle fam..pz.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Blac-Out
IMO blac-out took dis 1 hands down....he had better vocab a more complex verse and harder hitting punches....i was feeling his verse a lot more...iggy you have to get ur punches hitting a lot harder..you have to throw a lil creativity into it instead of the original shit.... my vote goes to Blac-out....... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: MC IgGY
not bad not bad. Blac-out defintley took this battle in the flowing aspects of it. But i think that overall, with punches, wordplay, (not structure), this was taken by mc iggy. hottest bar i think is... This fool is iron and im air cuz he gettin rusty this wasnt a battle all u did was make my shoulders get dusty you need to work a lil bit on your flow though, looked more like a 5th grade poem (structurally) but, yea you took this. YA OUT! |
Voted For: MC IgGY
ya my niggs you both suck... fuck 50 characters... |
This was feedback posted for Blac-Out
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Voted For: MC IgGY
i think mc iggy won because he had good vocab really hard hittin punches good structure good multis and a great opener blac-out u had good structure u need a lil work on ur vocab u had a pretty good opener u had some good punches overall both battles were tight favorite iggy lines: This fool is iron and im air cuz he gettin rusty this wasnt a battle all u did was make my shoulders get dusty this fool couldnt be hot if his last name was stove im a eagle, this lil kid is a baby dove favorite blac-out lines: Listen to me, dis niggas a fuckin amateur// I got da hammer tucked, step to Blac-out, then Ima damage ya// Rv'll just laugh at ya, the way you gotta knock-out// You beatin me? That’s like, Not seein a new cd of 2pac out// So chill, your battle record of wins getting to 10-is-rarely// Hey Strobe!!!! Dig up a whole, add this nigga to RV's Cemetery// return the favor link in sig thx |
This was feedback posted for Blac-Out
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props to blac-out... 1 of the better drops ive seen on this site since ive been here. "snow in the flurry"? i didnt know that was hard at all. PUNCH: most lines were hittin on pointe for Blac-Out, u gota watch out tho man, MC IgGY is stiLL snowing on u... FLOW: awesome job by Blac-Out awesome job by MC IgGY makin it obvious that there was an awesome job by Blac-Out TECHNIQUE: Blac got up and personal at times, the Pac line is tight, "against me you require a higher level of writing"? "rusty and dusty"? MC ur rhymes were predictable, and that only means taht people have seen the words too many times together, freshen em up a bit. n by the way, stove n dove end in the same 3 letters, but they sound distinctly different, "oh" and "uff" respectively. ur last 2 lines seemed like a late attempt to rhyme for the last time, didnt quite do it for me. S: Blac-Out > MC IgGY P: Blac-Out > MC IgGY F: Blac-Out > MC IgGY T: Blac-Out > MC IgGY OVERALL: Blac-Out > MC IgGY, MC u got some good shit, but need more time spent working on puttin it all together VOTE: cant yet again, but obvious whos got my vote |
umm ok, uppin for more votes people
comon ima return da favor |
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This was feedback posted for Blac-Out
checkin polls aight battle could've been betta
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Voted For: MC IgGY
Mc Iggy- Verse was nice...so was your punches....Had some nice sick azz personals also....Structure was decent...easy to read n all...but overall your won this with a better overall verse and punches...8.6/10........ Blac-Out- your verse was nice a little, but your punches really didnt seem to connect hard enough...your structure was layed out nice...but you went weak on punches thats all...5.9/10....... V/ Mc Iggy make sure 2 return the favor |
Voted For: MC IgGY
eh this battle was ok bad structure from both re-think it blac out was just talkin about guns thats thinkin inside the box you need to connect wth punches since you live far appart from each other you aint gone hit em with bullets yea mc iggy had better everything my fav line was blac the buster aint seen these keys like he was Ray Charles v/mc iggy return the fav link in sig |
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