J DOT vs Class.Sic
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Same Shit...

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 02-19-05 at 06:49 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Class.Sic has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-19-05 06:19 PM.

J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-19-05 06:20 PM.

U a bitch, u kno it, I kno it, now RV gon’ kno it
U on that hoe shit, 4 real, now its time to expose it
Aint no need to spit back, I already merked u once
When u were ‘Lyrical Havok’, now ima serve u son
While u switchin yo names, u shuld be focused on rhymes
Hocus pocus, look, Sovereigns back one more time
We all kno this is yo life, and u still come up shorter than elfs
...u leave, just to come back and introduce yoself
U rap skill less…. rather brainless, u just a lame
U wuna clap at JDOT….nigga say my name
…..Da beef done arose, now its time to attack
‘Establish’ hot barz from Dot, but please, stay to tha back
tha end is near, time to expose u clearly
put a microphone in yo head and u still wouldnt hear me


30 min drop...yo shit prewritten, u spit that to me on friday...but w/e, no proof to these people....


HONESTY IS THA BEST POLICY

Quick Update:


who believes him? anybody?



wtf...cant handle your own battles without trying to expose my alias or having someone else battle for you...wuteva...check.



Put this king in the ring, dont expect any punches...
Not swing or a fling, from any of his newb bunches...
At ease, ill NOK his eyes out till he look Chinese...
Have ya ma askin "Can I see your Green Card Please"...
Dark Ass Cat, from the dwellings beneath my Charles Scwab... *
When you at BAT, it aint the plate, but askin for the MANs Job...*
Know whats hopeless, your dopeless, your lifeline is comin up ropeless...
Kid like Bush, runnin his country into the ground and sayin "Were makin pro-gress"...
Only came coz the best left his crew, place i didnt want to inhibit...
but do me a favor and dust off your ankles like a museam exhibit...

*BAT and MAN, batman, and him being dark
*Charles Schwab is a sole company...

HA! now my record will go back tha same....lol...dumb fuck. i merked u...yo shit was stretched...lets get some votes on this...

only thing you have on my is alias's for which i dont even care about and RV ALREADY KNOWS...

Voted For: J DOT

yo j dot you win nuff siad...

i shoudlnt even have to ezplian my self.....like CALI said you are one of the doper kids on RV that is about to come up yo


j dot.....nice shit structure was good flow was on point...shit was kinda weak in some areas but you made the differnce with your personals.........if you had a real COMPITITION then this would have bee n alot btter.....becuase htis kid is a newb...he actaully bolded some one words to make his bars work....lol
but yeah some shit was dope.///the AUDIO line was nice


SOVERIGN......nice shit but wack at the same time...your structure was mad weak yo...youve been on this site for along itm now and your shit is still wack yo.....try to stay with one name or just be more consistant in battling yo...
but good for a newb..........stay up and elevate....
onelove yo

vote=j dot

Voted For: Class.Sic

Dot, ya verse was weak too start off with, but it got better, the opener was lame as hell, maybe would have worked in audio, but not in text...
Dot, i've seen better, ya flow was kinda basic, but a few nice personals, no real hittin punches, but the personals was nice..

Sic, ya verse was dope, Nice mix of personals n punches, an you used multies, which is always a good sign, much more creative in your vocab too, i say you took this, an my vote goes too ic

No hate tho'...i was just feeling sics verse,

Peace

Oh return the fave too y'all

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i saw that one comin..."yo"..that was a given......"yo"

What are you talking about?
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This was feedback posted for Class.Sic
 

Damn!

J-dot Got


Zzzzzziiiiiiiizzzzzzzzzzlllllllleeeeeeee.......... ....................

This was feedback posted for Class.Sic
 

good use of multi's Class.Sic

i aint gonna vote, cuz j dot likes to be a bitch
and remove votes...but good drop though Class

This was feedback posted for Class.Sic
 

Checking the polls................................

Sean thats a bitch ass dickriden vote and you know it.

No offence ta J-Dot, cause i dont have nothin against him, but the whole rhyme scheme was way too basic, an i expected alot more, if it wasnt for the few personals he had, i'd say it was a newbie verse

Thats no hate J-Dot, i just saw alot better from you man

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

jdot-i'll have to go with you on this one. i thought your vocab was alot better. and that your rhymes and flow were very structured and put together. you kept up the attack the whole way through and played off his name i liked the line "Hocus pocus, look, Sovereigns back one more time" it made me laugh but yea you had good punches through out the whole thing

class.sic
i guess i was expectin a lil something more than what you dropped. your whole structure was off. alright punches sorta middle schoolish though but no hate you kept it st8 through your battle but j-dot jus had ups on you on this one

vote//jdot

lol...vocab....hahahaha your hella dumb...ok ok ok...point out some words in his verse that made you go to the dictionary....lol

aiight uppin for votes............................

Voted For: Class.Sic



Openor=J-Dot Had Multies And Punch
Multies=J-Dot^^^ Explains It
Personals=Tie Both Ok Multies
Strukture=J-Dot,Class Wass Stretched
Punches=Tie,Both Had Decent Punches
Vokab=None
Closer=Tie Ok Closer Fa Yall...

J-Dot Came Harder In Thiss Cus He Had Better Punches And He Had Some Ok Multies/Personals All In 1 Bar..

/V J-Dot Rtf.................

Vote switched

Uppin for votes...................................

^well, im up 2-1, once that vote gets switched...good look on all tha feed, and tha votes...RTF will be comin soon

Uppin for votes...................................

yo this was no D.R J dot came mad beter
plus this CLASS SIC nigga is wack....plus a biter...plyus j dot had way better structure
and that is where he one in my opinion....

uppin this shit for you guys

uppin 4 votes...................................only reason im losing is coz of my structure...

Voted For: Class.Sic


Class
Alright You Had A Decent Verse, I See Alot Of Personals in Here Some Good And Some Alright, Vocabulary Was Nice, One Thing Is Your Structure Needs Work, You Had Some Decent Punches Here, Some Multi's Not To Much But SOme Was There, Towards The Eding It Got Better, Which I Find Good But It Usualy Starts Of Good Ends Bad, Anyway, You Had A Nice Flow I'll Give This Verse A 9/10

J Dot
Alright You Had An Alright Structure But You Had Whack Vocabulary Some Basic Ish, You Need To Change That, Also You Need To Put Meta's In Here, Coz Your Killing Your Own Flow, It Wasn't All That For Serious, It Was Decent Though,
Personals You Didn't Have To Much Of It Which Ate Your Flow, Also Your Punches I Didn't Feel Hard, I Feel Like I Heard This Before but I'm Not Sure, Anyways You Get An 8.2/10

No Hate
Vote=Class

This was feedback posted for Class.Sic
 

Polls,elivate yall 2 both verses were laking real punches

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

u deff got this, but i fort class was nok aswel? anyway nice drop.

wow...uppin this battle? dude is wack.......................

Voted For: Class.Sic

Class.Sic takes this one but this was a close battle

U a bitch, u kno it, I kno it, now RV gon’ kno it
U on that hoe shit, 4 real, now its time to expose it
THERE'S NO PUNCH HERE
Aint no need to spit back, I already merked u once
When u were ‘Lyrical Havok’, now ima serve u son
NICE PERSONAL BUT THERE WAS NO PUNCH
While u switchin yo names, u shuld be focused on rhymes
Hocus pocus, look, Sovereigns back one more time
ONCE AGAIN NICE PERSONAL DECENT PUNCH
We all kno this is yo life, and u still come up shorter than elfs
...u leave, just to come back and introduce yoself
NICE PERSONAL GOOD LINE
U rap skill less…. rather brainless, u just a lame
U wuna clap at JDOT….nigga say my name
NO PUNCH JUST AN INSULTING SET UP THAT WASN'T CREATIVE
…..Da beef done arose, now its time to attack
‘Establish’ hot barz from Dot, but please, stay to tha back
DIDN'T SEE THE PUNCH NICE WORDPLAY WITH ESTABLISHMENT
tha end is near, time to expose u clearly
put a microphone in yo head and u still wouldnt hear me
OK PUNCH OK CLOSER

it seems to me you got so caught up in having beaten him before that you filled your verses with that and forgot the punches and metaphores

Put this king in the ring, dont expect any punches...
Not swing or a fling, from any of his newb bunches...
DECENT LINE WEAK PUNCH
At ease, ill NOK his eyes out till he look Chinese...
Have ya ma askin "Can I see your Green Card Please"...
ONCE AGAIN DECENT LINE WITH A WEAK PUNCH
Dark Ass Cat, from the dwellings beneath my Charles Scwab... *
When you at BAT, it aint the plate, but askin for the MANs Job...*
DECENT PUNCH OK LINE
Know whats hopeless, your dopeless, your lifeline is comin up ropeless...
Kid like Bush, runnin his country into the ground and sayin "Were makin pro-gress"...
THIS WAS A GOOD LINE WITH A NICE PUNCH, BUT PRO-GRESS IS PUSHING IT
Only came coz the best left his crew, place i didnt want to inhibit...
but do me a favor and dust off your ankles like a museam exhibit...
BAD PERSONAL OK PUNCH

It seems to me that j dot did more bragging about beating classic then he did punching. Maybe i missed something but this is my vote no hate to anyone.

Voted For: Class.Sic

Class.Sic got this one.

Basically killed it in punches, whereas J DOT mainly used filler and setups.

Class.Sic, nicest line:
At ease, ill NOK his eyes out till he look Chinese...
Have ya ma askin "Can I see your Green Card Please"...
REal Dope, nice Punch, good personal and flowed well

J DOT, nicest line:
tha end is near, time to expose u clearly
put a microphone in yo head and u still wouldnt hear me
Even though that didnt really make that much sense, Speakers would have been a better word to use. but Good idea.

This battle was pretty nice, J DOT, you just need to work on using punches, Class.Sic, your lines still come a little stretched.

But Nice tho, Props to both.