buck.shot vs Lord.Wun
 

Battle Rules:

2-4 lines
good luck
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

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DQ'ed - more than 5 active battles open

Lord.Wun has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-20-05 04:26 PM.

Buck.Shot has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-20-05 04:34 PM.

Droppin-Acid-Spits...Crack-Ya-Ribz...Lord's Packin Clips...Smack Ya Lipz..
Buck's Gotta Michael Jackson Flow, His Premature Shit's Only Attractin kids..
Xzibit's Gotta new Hobbie..Fuck Pimpin a ride...Now He Pimpin a Verse..
Too Late...Theres An obvious explanation..why his moms layin in a herse

[center]Kid ya like a bee, you sting once then you ''Fall''
Ya couldnt ''Land a punch'' against limbless kids in a Brawl
Fuck an encore from you, but they will be ''Clappin'Tho''
Whats ya ''Occupation''? ...Suckin' At ''Rappin Hoe!''

Explanations...
Bee's sting you once, then die after they sting you...
An his Occupation says ''Rappin Hoe''

Voted For: Lord.Wun

I think i'll go wit Lord.Wun

[center]Kid ya like a bee, you sting once then you ''Fall''
Ya couldnt ''Land a punch'' against limbless kids in a Brawl
AMPUTEE LINES ARE DONE NICE SET UP
Fuck an encore from you, but they will be ''Clappin'Tho''
Whats ya ''Occupation''? ...Suckin' At ''Rappin Hoe!''
NICE PERSONAL PUNCH LACKED

Droppin-Acid-Spits...Crack-Ya-Ribz...Lord's Packin Clips...Smack Ya Lipz..
Buck's Gotta Michael Jackson Flow, His Premature Shit's Only Attractin kids.
MJ LINES ARE PLAYED BUT I LIKE THIS ONE NICE MULTI
Xzibit's Gotta new Hobbie..Fuck Pimpin a ride...Now He Pimpin a Verse..
Too Late...Theres An obvious explanation..why his moms layin in a herse
UNLESS YOU'RE XZIBIT I DON'T THINK YOU SHOULDVE USED THIS ONE BAD PUNCH

I gotta give this one to Lord. Wun cause there wasn't much room for battlin in 4 lines so his multi plus funny punch really stood out. Tip for both though, get off the gangsta shit and quit wit the mj lines they're done along with the amputee lines unless they're exceptional.

Voted For: Lord.Wun

i dunno, pretty easy battle

Lord Wun....
>Droppin-Acid-Spits...Crack-Ya-Ribz...Lord's Packin Clips...Smack Ya Lipz..
Buck's Gotta Michael Jackson Flow, His Premature Shit's Only Attractin kids..
-okay multies...decent punch 7/10
>Xzibit's Gotta new Hobbie..Fuck Pimpin a ride...Now He Pimpin a Verse..
Too Late...Theres An obvious explanation..why his moms layin in a herse
-okay, little weak 6/10

overall: 13/20...solid 4 lines, came hard in the first line, lttle weak in the second though, but you came harder and first punch landed.

Buck.Shot
>Kid ya like a bee, you sting once then you ''Fall''
Ya couldnt ''Land a punch'' against limbless kids in a Brawl
-opener, okay, second line, played 6/10
>Fuck an encore from you, but they will be ''Clappin'Tho''
Whats ya ''Occupation''? ...Suckin' At ''Rappin Hoe!''
-not even really a punch....5/10

overall: 11/20....man, didnt really try in this one eh, only 4 lines so i can see why, but you were pretty weak on the punches, and wun's were a bit better, so he takes it

v/Lord Wun

Vote switched

LOL...
Right, okay, uhmmmm

lol, thats all i can say...


Uppin for real votes

Voted For: Lord.Wun

hmmm close battle... imma give this to lord becuz of his first 2 lines they were funny... your multies were decent but you fell off on your last line...

buck... your lines were good flow was on point but your vocab was a lil too simple.. and your lines were more played than lords...

both of you had some decent punches in there but lord gets this bwecuz of his multies and a harder punch...

there sint much to explain in this battle becuz it was only 4 lines osi t was kinda hard... f u want a more explained vote then pm me and i will gladly do it... no hate


stay up

wat da fuck ahhaha damn.....'nuff katz voted on this shit already....

Voted For: Buck.Shot

ha easy win .... lord.wun what the hell was the hearse part? haha your shit dosent make sense it was lame and un creative alright wordplay though


meta:bs
punches:bs
everything else...bs

i'd make the whole list but its pretty fuck'n obvious


no hate though


lord wun u def need to elevate

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are you kidding me? lord wun had nothing on that sting line haha he owned his whole drop in one line

LOL ^^

My thoughts eactly

An that one kid said ''stay off the gangsta shit''.....what was gangsta about my verse?

each line was either a punch or personal, his shit was uhmmm, well let me see, useless boring fillers with no hard hitting nothin basically, an if he gets the win, I RETIRE

Voted For: Lord.Wun

this battle was 1 sided & here's my opinion:
opener: lord.wun
vocab: lord.wun
structure: buck.shot
multis: lord.wun
closer: lord.wun
lord.wun came harder & hit wit more punches den buck did; nice flow from both but lord had da betta wordplay
make sure 2 return the favor

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^^^^^^^

You cannot be serious?

Fuckin damn, lol, how is that verse better?

its all played out shit, an he opener was self gloryfing, uppin FOR REAL VOTES

Voted For: Buck.Shot

lord wun....
Droppin-Acid-Spits...Crack-Ya-Ribz...Lord's Packin Clips...Smack Ya Lipz..
Buck's Gotta Michael Jackson Flow, His Premature Shit's Only Attractin kids..
mike jackson lines gettin played....wasnt feelin the set up at all...........

Xzibit's Gotta new Hobbie..Fuck Pimpin a ride...Now He Pimpin a Verse..
Too Late...Theres An obvious explanation..why his moms layin in a herse
set up again was lacking....punch was ok...hit decent


Buck.........
Kid ya like a bee, you sting once then you ''Fall''
Ya couldnt ''Land a punch'' against limbless kids in a Brawl
set up was nice....punch landed

Fuck an encore from you, but they will be ''Clappin'Tho''
Whats ya ''Occupation''? ...Suckin' At ''Rappin Hoe!''
ehh decent punch here....set up was ok...this was just an ok bar....


overall i had to go with buck because his set up lines were way better....and his punches landed better than lords....theres not a whole lot more you can explain when theres only 4 lines.....buck took this with better set up, harder punches

omg @ lord being up 4-2........damn that was unexpected

^^^
Thank you, at least somebody aint cheating on here

Uppin y'all

Dopeman i wasn't talkin about you bein on that gangsta shit i was talkin bout the other dude and if you have any more questions you can address them to me

shit, now that i read it again, im kidna leanin towards you buck.shot, i just kinda voted quick, ya know? i think lord wun's second bar just totally ruined his whole verse....you can have my vote changed if you want...

^^^
Your a complete jackass.....
So is Black an so is da throwdest, none of them fools can explain why Lords verse was better, but no, if you wanna change the vote, do it yourself, i'm confident i'll stay get the win, cause if these people have any sense what so ever, they'll see my verse was clearly hard hittin, because i actually had punches an personals

i know thats what im sayin now, up to you if you wanna change the vote, i didnt get your closer at first, thought it was just a filler, seemed played, but then i went back and read it, whatever man, just tryna be nice

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Voted For: Lord.Wun

both yall had sum good shit, but ima have 2 go wif lord.wun just cuz of them multies. both had good flow, good structure, no hate buck, they both wuz kinda short tho. werd

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Uppin for some votes.....................

HONEST VOTES THAT IS

Uppin for some feed y'all............
and a vote too
HONESTY

Uppin for honesty an no cheating dick ridin votes..

well to be honest i didnt cheat....i came from a different site..and the way i get votes is

Vote on a battle and tell them to return the favour and drop an honest vote?

pretty fuckin simple dont you thinK? instead of all this bullshit about me dickriding..i dont know half these fuckin kids im new here...so what the fuck.........i cant eve fuckin win a battle or try to be fair without fuckin niggaz hatin on me..trust if i was cheating..the battle would of been over by now.....

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