Indeph vs Rising Sun
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-23-05 at 06:47 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Rising Sun has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-20-05 06:49 PM.

I don’t need to grapple to have assholes baffled
Cause like 33 on the Magic
You about to face an up “Hill” battle
I’ll rattle your hood as I send hilarious bomb threats
To every nefarious project in the USA
Please do be-have, or I’ll coerce you bite the curb
Like I’m a “neo-Nazi” Edward Norton
To support abortion, “14 years ago” I would been a Conservative
Your mom said “I can’t believe I gave birth-to-this”
With a multitude of purposes, I’m a rising-sun like Amaré last-night
You couldn’t be “bright” even if I shined a flash-light
The only time you get “in deph” is when you look up Spark Notes
Like Afghani women, you’re a human cargo
And you’ll always remember-me as your ultimate rap enemy
Like the death of JF Kennedy
Your death will remain mysterious
Cause you winning will never happen
Like a Lebanese dating a Syrian
I’m surrounded by millions like Prince Williams
In extreme shame you about to lose, that’s your fate be
Cause basically your rhymes like the NBA East
“Coming lackadaisically”

Indeph has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-20-05 06:52 PM.

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Voted For: Indeph

Rising sun- Punches was "eh" ok, but played. Creative, but weak at the same time. Flowed was choppy, stretch lines man. Wordplays was good.


Indeph-Lmao, Punches was decent and very much effective. Flowed nice. Wordplays was good. Meta'z was tight!. Nice personals with punches in the same line.


Overall=Nice spit from both heads. Rising sun, Your punches came out weak. Wordplays from your half was good. Indeph your punches was very decent and creative. Wordplays was tight, with decent meta'z. Flowed nicly. Personals and decent punches on the same line, tIGHT!. So my vote goes to indeph for harder punches and best flow with some personals and wordplays

upppinnnn for votes pls...........if you Private Message me...I promise to return the favour with an HONEST vote

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Voted For: Indeph

Homie,your skills dont increase,like if I multiply by one..
your name is like steps,the way I'm bout to rise and son..
I'ma rip you head to stomach,and just cut the rest with
my tounge,and like your avy,a win won't touch your record.
Fuck this shit,I'm giving permission for this bitch to bite.
So at least I can hear a couple good disses that isn't mine.
I'ma leave aftermath problems,I'm like a federal bomber.
homie think he got a shot,cause he named after medal of honor.
Now my mission is to make rising sun see in a different light.
so I'ma take away ya joy,but you can still do the dishes right.
you know deph,but you got No crew,no talent and no rep..
What the fuck is up with all them No's,are you kanye west?

Indeph you had some hard hitting punches and some amusing personals. I liked the way you flowed and your structure was beautiful. I laughed pretty much throguth your whole verse. my favorite line was.

I'ma leave aftermath problems,I'm like a federal bomber.
homie think he got a shot,cause he named after medal of honor.


I don’t need to grapple to have assholes baffled
Cause like 33 on the Magic
You about to face an up “Hill” battle
I’ll rattle your hood as I send hilarious bomb threats
To every nefarious project in the USA
Please do be-have, or I’ll coerce you bite the curb
Like I’m a “neo-Nazi” Edward Norton
To support abortion, “14 years ago” I would been a Conservative
Your mom said “I can’t believe I gave birth-to-this”
With a multitude of purposes, I’m a rising-sun like Amaré last-night
You couldn’t be “bright” even if I shined a flash-light
The only time you get “in deph” is when you look up Spark Notes
Like Afghani women, you’re a human cargo
And you’ll always remember-me as your ultimate rap enemy
Like the death of JF Kennedy
Your death will remain mysterious
Cause you winning will never happen
Like a Lebanese dating a Syrian
I’m surrounded by millions like Prince Williams
In extreme shame you about to lose, that’s your fate be
Cause basically your rhymes like the NBA East
“Coming lackadaisically”

Rising son improve with everything. Ya flow was off and your structure was wack. Look at my battles and you'll see some good structure. You lack any personals and you lack any hard hitting punches. Your whole verse didn;t make sense and wasn't hitting right.

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Voted For: Indeph

vote indeph:

reason being, rising sun's rhymes were broke.
you had good plot, and aight punches...you
just worded them horrible. i thought you were
topical? idk, but indeph came good in the beginning.
his ending slipped. the kanye like was aight, but
i wasnt feeling the closure, but needless to say,
indeph still took the W. ok battle. - my opinion.

vote: indeph

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Voted For: Indeph

Basically i'm going to keep this simple because this was VERY one-sided...

Indeph you lyrically murdered Rising Sun...you showed some good flow and had many punches closer good opener good line about medal of honour dope wordplay...also flow and structure on point very decently layed out verse...too easy.

Rising Sun you been here for a year...the way that verse was layed out was poor at best...punches when there was one was played rhyming scheme was wack...basically dawg you need to keep improving because despite your time here...your not at the level i think you'd like to be...go back to FL and work on ya skills there for a while then make a return and prove us all wrong...

V/Indeph...3 days for RTF...(Start: 5/3/05 End: 8/3/05) Or ima remove this vote

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Voted For: Indeph

aight, shit was close....
Rising:
ya had some real hard hittin punches, strcuture was all over the place, that could be a fault i suppose, but my structure is fucked too, so yeah, but ya had some decent stuff, few lines were just not very nice tho...that prince william line wasnt up ta much, wasnt feelin the closer
on the whole, ya structure an flow was real off in this battle, it was hard ta keep up with the flow in my opinnon, creative in lines, but you just wasnt consistant, seemed like there was too many fillers

Indeph:
sick stuff, opener wasnt all that much, the mdeal of honor line was the highlight of this battle, nice wordplay off the name an used it as a punch/personal too, that defines battle rap right there, that line had everythin in my opinnon
flow was right on point throughout, much more consistant verse, closer was nice too, flow wasnt there for the opener, but i was feelin the idea, nice stuff indeph

you got my vote

RTF With an honest vote in my battle with Black Queen, or any other battles ya see floating around

Peace out