X-CELL vs Pounds
 

Battle Rules:

8-10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
pink slip battle who ever loses can NEVER battle on rv again

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-24-05 at 11:32 AM

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X-CELL has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-21-05 12:36 PM.

Pounds has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-21-05 12:56 PM.

(I WROTE THIS TO THE "TILL I COLAPSE" BEAT FROM THE EMINEM SHOW)
i drop "POUNDS" like jared did,gettin rid of this kid is imperative
i make u run like mascara did,take 2 steps like ciara did/
its a must,i look at him with uter disgust,ya got no purpose
abolshin u is a service,u know that i know that ya nervous/
im gonna end ya shit, u aint legit, u soo corny
the only time u come hard is when u honrey
u not talented just quit, ya flows put together poorly/
i feel possed like pacs right next to me
pound it really is best ya leave im comin so agressivley/
this pussys beat down take a seat now/

Upppppppppppppppppin..............................

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Voted For: Pounds

Breakdown...

Name:Pounds

Verse:
since he 1st registerd he put his album as his own team
no release date set 4 pen 2 pad must ran out of ink
his onli decent bars camr from wen he drew a prison image
lives on rv,wen he gets da boot hell b on da street like evicted tenants
and hes made up neva had sex,from a place dat doesnt exist
used 2 human handjobs YEA!! wen a manican beats his dik
had 2 watch discovery chanell just so he can get some heart
his line count down 2 his death so at da end of his verse his funeral starts..

Need/Don’t need to work on:um...nice drop fam...work on making those punches hit a little harder, other than that its straight.

Stats...
Punches:6/10
Metaphors:6/10
Wordplay:0/10
Structure:7/10
Personals:7/10
Total:28/50
Percentage:56%

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Name:X-Cell

Verse:
IP:


(I WROTE THIS TO THE "TILL I COLAPSE" BEAT FROM THE EMINEM SHOW)
i drop "POUNDS" like jared did,gettin rid of this kid is imperative
i make u run like mascara did,take 2 steps like ciara did/
its a must,i look at him with uter disgust,ya got no purpose
abolshin u is a service,u know that i know that ya nervous/
im gonna end ya shit, u aint legit, u soo corny
the only time u come hard is when u honrey
u not talented just quit, ya flows put together poorly/
i feel possed like pacs right next to me
pound it really is best ya leave im comin so agressivley/
this pussys beat down take a seat now/

Need/Don’t need to work on:sup dawg, um...i think you need to work on connecting with your punches...dont use fake punches...they dont relate to anybody which makes it a fake verse...no hate fam..."keep ya head up"

Stats:
Punches:3/10
Metaphors:0/10
Wordplay:0/10
Structure:3/10
Personals:3/10
Total:9/50
Percentage:18%

RTF in the sig against J DOT...no hate to any of these competitors fam...pz...

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i destroyed this kid what u smokin?

No you didnt, uppin 4 more votes.

You about 2 leave tha site 4 good

who ever loses dosent leave the site they cant battle anymore

What!!pink slip means you have 2 leave and since this a pink slip battle when you lose you have 2 leave

If you dont know what a pink slip battle is then you dumb as hell

Uppin more votes, don't sleep on thiss battle.

Voted For: X-CELL

i think pounds took this one with harder punches. they werent that hard, but i think he came harder with em in this battle. even tho yo structure was not good, and u need to work on that, i still managed to understand ur verse, and some of tha shit u had in there, and i think u came off harder. and ur verse was also more interesting.
xcell,-u had a good verse, but i think u should really work on coming harder ,and thinkin of better punches, and personals. ur punches were manageable, but ur personals seemed played, and incomplete. i think u should work on that. i did see good structure in yo verse. no stretched or incomplete bars, which was good, but i still think pounds came off harder...NO HATE fam...just keep elevating...

and plz RTF on this http://community.rapverse.com/showb...=177888...cause i took my time out to vote on this....and plz make it explained...

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my bad...i'll get that switched right now..............

uppin.............................................

Voted For: X-CELL

yo that was some good shit u had the best punchlines and multi's and references in there u gots my vote

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Voted For: X-CELL

this is an eazy battle 2 figure out who won:
opener: x-cell
vocab: x-cell
structure: x-cell
multis: x-cell
closer: x-cell
x-cell wins my vote cuz he came harder & was more prepared 4 this type of battle; while pounds u need 2 elevate in ur wordplay & rhymes
make sure 2 return the favor

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upppin and please leave good feed back we had 3 votes disqualifed so far all
honest votes returned

This was feedback posted for X-CELL
 

i dont really know how to vote here....
i thought both of you came equally as good....which wasnt even that great....
xcell had better flow
pounds had better punches
it could really go either way?

Voted For: X-CELL

excel won the battle he had punchlines that hit nice flow was not choppy and structre was good no lines were streched
the words you used could have been a little more complex but it was okay my favorite line was when you said i drop "POUNDS" like jared did,gettin rid of this kid is imperative
i make u run like mascara did,take 2 steps like ciara did/ that line was fire i read it to the till i coaplse beat it was really good yo man are u signed if not you really should be i wanna do an open mike with you hit me up nigga your all aroung verse gets a 9/10 from me

pounds alot of your bas didnt rhyme you had a couple of ight lines but u didnt come reall prepared your verse gets a 6/10 from me keep workin nigga

upppppppppin......................................

to the top bitches................................

Voted For: X-CELL

close battle imma break it down...

x-cell...

i drop "POUNDS" like jared did,gettin rid of this kid is imperative
i make u run like mascara did,take 2 steps like ciara did/
^^ good opener alryyt punch 6.5/10
its a must,i look at him with uter disgust,ya got no purpose
abolshin u is a service,u know that i know that ya nervous/
^^ couldav been better 6/10
im gonna end ya shit, u aint legit, u soo corny
the only time u come hard is when u honrey
^^ kinda simple and played... 5.5/10
u not talented just quit, ya flows put together poorly/
i feel possed like pacs right next to me
^^ not really feeling this one really... 5/10
pound it really is best ya leave im comin so agressivley/
this pussys beat down take a seat now/
^^ doesnt rhyme and weak closure... 4/10


ok your verse wasnt that great.... your punches were played i think you had one decent punch in it and that was it....your flow was really good though... your structure was ight... vocab was good... you just lacked the punches...

overall ill give you:27/50

pounds...

since he 1st registerd he put his album as his own team
no release date set 4 pen 2 pad must ran out of ink
^^ good opener didnt really rhyme though... 6/10
his onli decent bars camr from wen he drew a prison image
lives on rv,wen he gets da boot hell b on da street like evicted tenants
^^ is it a personal... explain your personals ppl wont know other wise... 6.5/10
and hes made up neva had sex,from a place dat doesnt exist
used 2 human handjobs YEA!! wen a manican beats his dik
^^ played punch but it was aight... 5/10
had 2 watch discovery chanell just so he can get some heart
his line count down 2 his death so at da end of his verse his funeral starts..
^^ not feeling the closure at all... played concept... 5.5/10

i thought your verse had some creativity in it... if u came harder with your punches then you wouldav took this one easy... your flow was aight but some of yer lines were a bit stretched, structure was good but you need better concepts for your punches...

overall ill give you: 23/50


v/ x-cell.... he had better concepts to his punches... flowed better... better vocab... but you both need to elevate a little...

no hate...

to the top.............................bitches........... ...........................................

uppin bitches...

vote u cock docters its time to put the last nail in his coffin

Voted For: X-CELL

lol you get this one cuz yours actually rhymed... pounds yours didnt rhyme man your structure was ight though .. but the nitty gritty//why is this shit a pinkslip? you both need to elevate no hate

metas//were there any? ok there were x-cell
punches//for jus plain rhym'n his shit x-cell
appeal//none
wordplay//pounds
structure//pounds
rhym'n//x-cell

vote//x-cell only cuz his shit rhymed ha both you got possiblities but no pink' slipp'n til u actually can serve it up hot ha

return the favor

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Voted For: X-CELL

aiight fam this was an easy battle to vote on...you got him easily

your structure wasnt better but you had much better flow

your punches hit harder and you had stronger multi's thats why you had the advantage in this battle

your similies....None.....

personals pounds had the better personals

overall i give this to X-cell...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175438

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uppin.............................................

Voted For: X-CELL

pound your fucking syllabal count is horrid shit is way off flow is horrible shit barely rhymes at all strutucre is ok punches and disses really were weak you need to drop much harder then that in battles to win your shit had no creativity and shit was played in other places no hate you just dropped a overall weak ass verse 3/10
x cellyou got good flow here and a nice syllabel count on it but your strture looks bad still it was easy to read punches and disses were weak but slightly better then your oppenants were and that gave you the win in my book 5/10

uppin.............................................

uppin.............................................

Voted For: X-CELL

x definatly won this he just came harder all the way around he had way better punches multi's and a decent vocab but the other cat just didnt come tha hard his punches were weak and his shit just didnt flow right

Voted For: Pounds

I Liked Both Verses But..

Punches And Personals Went To Pounds...Wordplay Went To X-Cell So Did The Vocabulary..But Overall Pounds Verse Was More Complex And He Got My Vote..

lives on rv,wen he gets da boot hell b on da street like evicted tenants
and hes made up neva had sex,from a place dat doesnt exist

^^^Nice 2 Lines...Sealed The Deal For Me..

This was feedback posted for Pounds
 

uppppppppppppppin.................................