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Anyways Hit My Soundclick Calam Used This Beat From Another Perspective I Had Good Feed On This On Rm As Well As Out Here Lady Fiya Liked It Just Wanna See What Yall Think I Left Feed On Diabolics Track The Come Back


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Beat was nice ass fuck, where could I get it

anyway flow and voice was ok....lyrics were cool.... emotion was nice sotry and shit was nice

keep this song

EDIT: I listen to the song agian and found some flaws in the seocnd verse, ya flow went off, and ya voice kept changing its tone

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-listenin....

wow..nice deep flow..thats on point this time around good shit be...lyrics are dope be..fits good wit the chorus son real nice drop...i like the beat as well its hot..wow..on a serious tip i think this the best track i've heard from you so far...keep this up son...iight return the favor..

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1987808

1ne,...

no...shit was aiight..no hate...but umm this shit would of been hot if

1. You sound like you was talkin..instead of rappin
2. your production...your voice was too loud...it overpowered the beat and thats not good to do on a beat like that...you should of put more emotion into it and lowered your voice

other than that..this was a hot track fam

keep it up...

I'll edit this with feed in a couple of minutes...soundclick's being a bitch, if you say like me, i'll slap ya..:)..lol
EDIT::: this track was one of your best,if not IS your best...i love the beat, nice delivery on this one as well, and good lyrics, you definitaly got a lot better, stay up.1

lol.. you stole my song -_-.. hoe ;)... but its all gravy.. i thought shit was strait.. i still think my verses was better =P.. na j/k lol.. good shit tho -1

Seems Like All Good Feed On This One Thanks For The Feedback So Far I Got A Dynamic Mic Best I Can Do On A Shure58 Till I Get A Mic In Stereo My Voice Is Deep So Im Stuck Like This Though Lol

lyrics = dope....flow could have been better in my opinion....i liked the 2nd verse better lyrically....i just felt it more...emotion was pretty good.....dont know what more to say...so that is all

your qaulity is a lil better but kinda bad still

style needs work still but you finding it tho...
emotion is mad dope,,,,you got emotion yo....

1st verse..
lyrics was good, emotion was great, shit was done well, the only thing i wasnt feeling was how you ended that verse...shit could have ended alit better...like i was like"WTF happened why he stop?"
but all in all pretty dope....not the best ive heard form you but decent enufff

2nd verse....
flow was not as good as before...dont like how you used the same word hella times to end a line... you kinda fell off beat in certain spits......lyrics where defenetly as ghood as before, you need to write more yo, dont just finish this shit with a BLAH verse, take time yo....once again i wasnt feeling how you exited this verse either yo


good song but some minor flaws yo.......stay up and elavte your style.....it will come yo,,,,you almost got it

Yo i was definetly feeling this song... The voice for the most part was good, but at some points it seemed wierd, i dunno why... The lyrics were dope, but the thing i felt the most in this was the emotion... The emotion was dope all the way through, you really felt or still feel this girl, and i can tell... Flow was on mostly, i only saw it fall off once or twice... Sounded like the chipmunks though, on the chorus, good job tho...

8/10.

Was pretty good shit man.. Sort of like an underground spill your guts type track.. You pulled it off pretty well I guess.. You sound like an emotional wreck at times though lol..

Sall good.. Tracks on repeat.. Just remember to try that sterio technique with your shure that I told you on aim and you should sound better..

^thanks Nos I Will Do That Too Senser Told Me That Before But I Forgot Think I Was Drunk Or Some Shit Lol But Good Look On All The Feed So Far

Your vocals aren't smooth so it sounds too lound over the instrumentals.

Ok, on the real man I'm not hatin, but I don't know what the hell these other people are hearing, you do not ride the beat for nothin, you rhyme like Silkk The Shocker back in 98' man, your flow is all off the beat. I've listened to your other stuff and this is about as close as you've come, but your jus spittin, you're not stayin with the beat. Seriously work on that, pace yourself.

Keep at it though

^thank you for you hate no go die silk aint rhyme on beat he went 4 times platinum!!fucking idiot go die bitch and stay out my thread especially since i heard ya soundclick and you fucking suck dick

listenin...
beat is dope, i got it also haha
voice is pretty coo
lyrics were nice
flow and delivery is pretty decent
i think only thing wrong might be the quality, would sound ALOT better if upped, no hate tho haha its all good
keep droppin!

well beat is coo nahmean...yea i would agree wit the other homie about being on beat nahmean...but u know what this just might be your style so i aint gonna knock it...delivery could be better and emotion is aight lyrics are aight ASwell for this beat...props on work keep doin your thing..keep it moving

Yeah that's why I'm more involved in the industry than you are :rolleyes: because I suck.........right. Silk Went platinum because No Limit was the "in" thing at the moment and he had alotta guest features.... You just don't know how to take criticism and everytime someone says somethin you don't like, you take it overly personal. Go campaign for your RV Award some more, cuz I won't bother givin you feedback anymore since you act 10 years younger than you are.

^hahaha Your In The Industry You Gay Fag Im Involved Way More Then You Know Im Meeting With Exes Bout Record Deals For A.i Your On Rv Doing Nothing Hahaha Like I Said Set Thet Battle Up Or Stay Out My Thread

LMAO @ you and A.I. gettin a deal, son I got an interview with def jam plus I'm signed to another label, I don't have time to battle cry babies so pz

^your Lieing And Your Scared Of Me Set The Battle Up Or Go Die Faggot

The beat is tight...nice sample on the hook...you still use dat off low but it really hurt you on this track IMO...your emotion was good but wasn't used right...you was overemphasizing alot of times....emotion is always good but if its undisciplined it jus seems like ya yelling for no reason.....you shoulda been more melodic instead of beig more intense but it was a decent track with some touching up it could be ill.

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...444#post1994444

^battle me bitch and stop ducking me faggot

Typing as I listen: Not big on the "beat". That high-pitched voice shit went out in like..01. The music is fine - the vocal sample laid over it sounds cheesy and plaid - that's what I don't liek about it. Your flow on the first verse is off. Same as it's ever been on every track I've EVER heard from you so it wasn't a big shock - especially since you only have one flow. Second verse's flow is even more off than the first and your deliv sounds whiney. I hate syl stretching and you use it on every line. It's a sign of amatuer deliv imo. Sounds liek you're trying too hard. Track's lyrically on, but the deliv was boring and borderline repulsive since it had the same miss-flow on every syl-stretched line. Not for nothing man, but I just dont' feel your style at all. Nothing personal - just speaking my honest feelings on it. Seems like you never corrects it's glaring flaws and you have no diversity at all. Same shit every track. Here's where you cry about my feed. 1

^your fucking garbage still mad i gave you that loss kid you fucking suck stupid nerd if you dont like my style why you post in al my threads?to leave hate feed you dumb fucking loser nerd homo and your fucking garbage wack i beat you in text and id own you in audio quality dont mean shit you dont get deals on quality fag you get deals when your nice and you suck period............

^^:sigh: Like I said:



Ain't hate son. I explained exactly why I didn't liek your shit - where as you leave feed (like your above cry-fest of a post) and don't say shit. That's the difference between hate and honest feed. Hurt your feelings?? awwwww.....

BTW - how'd you beat me when you yourself admitted that you told dudes to vote for you? smh...

In any case, I ain't gonna sit here and slapfight with someone who works at Wendys. You up your tracks for feed then get pissed when you get it. If you don't like my feed then dont ask for it. On the other hand, if you got all giddy and one of your man-boobs popped outta your brothers borrowed wife-beater - then feel free to drop a callout to which you'll QUICKLY get your shit smashed. Uno.

Remember what happened last time you were beefing in this forum cali? -- You've been warned again -- If you don't like the feedback put the person who left it on your ignore list and forget about it, if this shit continues Im closin threads again.

C.A.L.I the battle is up go check in, and thanks for the name-callin jus shows how mature you are to take criticism

^i checked and will own you momentairaly in the am anyways seven how do i add people to my ignore list?can you please post here or pm me how to do it. thank you.

Go to user cp... scroll down, Under miscellaneous it says Add Buddy/ignore list... click that and the rest should be pretty self explanatory.

I have heard this beat before i could put money on that lyrics were good overall some aight flow quality much more improved i liked it real clear (and that was lo-fi!) u've upped ya game on audio since i first used to peep ya shit...definite improvment good song but well done you've now rattled my brain as to where i've heard that beat before...

yo i dunno if i already left feed but meh
beat is iight
flow is iight
lyrics are cool
quality could be fixed but thats not a probleme
not the best ive heard from you but still good man
good drop

please dont do like others,return the favor please:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...394#post1998394

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