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Es`An`Ef vs Linguistics
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 02-22-05 at 04:23 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Linguistics has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-22-05 03:54 AM.
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c'mon dued r u gonna check and man...........................?
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hello
well check. so that was my checkin i wish you good luck |
Es`An`Ef has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-22-05 04:15 AM.
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OK there i did it. but is it 6-10 lines or unlimited lines.?
and let me no when you are gonn drop your verse we can do a blind spit where we both post up our verses in 30 minutes yes or no |
battlings just not your thing, u need a change of heart
linguistics to advanced for u, go back to language arts I'm just the best, u need a hard lesson not to step to vets how can u handle linguistics when u mispronounce S and F saw my post count, thought he'd win, just a newbie chaser must be from oklahoma, how hes loosin sooner than later no one knows u, and no one cares, so I wouldnt boast please kid, I got more lines in this battle than u got posts so if u need some help, bite off me, thats all i can suggest like your apostrifee's, I'll always be elevated above Es'and'Ef |
OK this kid keeps making new aliases
This kid thinks he a veteran...he got shit bent like a curb How you figure this? When you keep making aliases to be portrayed as an herb* Kid your wack, there’s no way you can compare to my lyrical style So keep searching…and making threads to be a myrical child** So fuck this kid, and his RV name changing gimmick Because in this scrimmage I surpass all of your limits real fast KEystyle all personals are true, he said he ddint have an alias on Rv* then he said that he as a alias * OK he made a thread about a miracle child or some stupid shit** just a real fats verse |
well i thought you said you didnt have an alias....fucking liar.
i told you i didnt want to battle you if you had an alias |
I havent been on Rv since it started....................
so i dont realy have an alias but i do..................but its just a battle mayne chill........ |
man what other site where you on?
and what is your other alias. |
Voted For: Linguistics
easy battle gotta go with linguistics...his verse was just superior to yours man....his punches had more creativity/complexity, they hit harder, better wordplay and vocab....nice flow, kept the structure consistent, nice plays off the name...personals were okay, could be better, but overall, he took this one saw my post count, thought he'd win, just a newbie chaser must be from oklahoma, how hes loosin sooner than later -fav line, i laughed, es an ef.....you gotta elevate alot....not really any flow to it, and structure was lacking....were you did attempt punches/personals, they were ruined alot by your wordplay and vocab choices....the opener coulda been worded better....dont worry though man, just work at it, elevate, no hate v/linguistics |
Voted For: Linguistics
man this was sad shit your way better than this linguistics don't be battl'n these newbs c'mon where is your pride..unless he called u out but anyway this is no knowledge you took it easy metas punches,wordplay, structure,everything went to linguistics es n ef nice verse your structure is wack but you didnt have a chance lyrically on this one he owned you no hate vote//linguistics no hate return the favor |
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This was feedback posted for Linguistics
Just checking the polls... Linguistics should win this...
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Voted For: Linguistics
Ling Alright You Had A Decent Verse Here, But I Don't Think Your A Vet, You Seem Like You Got Potent You Had Some Decent Punches, And Some Decent Personals, You Could Fiz The Structure Up A Little, But Other Then That, 8/10 Es Okay Your Verse Was Just Plain Out Whacked Kid, You Need To Elevate On Structure Personals And Punches Coz They Just Wasn't There, Also Throw In Some Multi's That'll Help Alot Read Some Battler Overall 5/10 Return The Favor |
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Voted For: Linguistics
Linguistics structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay was pretty good.. most of your punches connected.. you had pretty nice personals as well.. Es`An`Ef structure is good.. flow is pretty nice.. no multis.. most of your wordplay was complete garbage.. none of your punches connected.. you attempted personals, but they came out like ass.. Overall both had a good structure and flow.. neither had multis.. Linguistics had better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. Linguistics gets my vote in a landslide.. VOTE - LINGUISTICS Please hit up the link in my sig.. |
Voted For: Linguistics
linguistics~nice opener, your flow in this verse was good to read, nice wordplay here, good usage of personals on his name, i like the linguistics bar you used, nice,lol...overall good verse, you stayed on point straight thru and didnt fall off...good job.1 e's an ef~ok, you had a decent line here or there, but you failed to prove anything you were saying, you could have used links, or made even more punches out of your personals with better wordplay, nothing really stuck too far out tho for me, you seemed to use some filler and your structure was off in parts, no hate at all, just work on elevating, overall good job both, your verse just wasnt enough to beat your opponent..1 |
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