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BLACK vs Linguistics
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 02-25-05 at 06:58 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
BLACK has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-22-05 06:59 PM.
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Linguistics has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-22-05 07:03 PM.
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im bout to kill dis fool for talkin shit like he big time wit big ryhmes
im off tha dome, u give dome for a piece of tha pie i got bitches cuz im a pimp, u look like a chimp i'll stomp ya punk ass, have ya walkin limp look at how i do dis, u aint worth tha battle go to tha graveyard and pick a spot cuz when im done, u'll be goin there after dis battle |
blah a herb............
I dont gotta come hard, just to trash this herb take the BL off, add a W, and thats just word! got a death wish, commit suicide, gotta wittness here u like hustlers at mormon camps, have no buisness here ya toast kid, n' we know ya shits wack and ghost written cant be dope, cuz we know if its deicent, its mostly bitten cant say your witty or smart, dued you'll never be felt cuz u'r names black but its in white, you confusin' ya self havent even battled yet, so stop lyin, sayin u tight when u wanted to follow in my footsteps...... .....................but didnt know I was ridin' a bike |
This was feedback posted for Linguistics
good job linguistics... but then again, u really didnth ave to come hard
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oh fuck yall
......................................... go suck each otha dick and ling, i know u are JDOT. dont lie |
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Voted For: Linguistics
Ling Okay Man Like I Sad, You Got Potentila Nice punches In Here I Found Them Very Creative, This Is What I Like To See More Often Around Here Creative Ish, Any Way Your Vocabulary Is Still Fresh Like Always, One Thing Your Down Fall Is Structure Try And Work On That And Make The Lines Line Up So That Bars Match, Also Add Some Meta's In Here Man, Good Job...8.5/10 Black Okay You Came With Better Vocabulary But Worst Structure I Mean Come On So Newb Style, Try Line The Bars Up So The ymatch, Also Punches, Wow! It's Directly At Your Opponent, Meaning Peronals Basically Which You Had Less Of, Try And Do SOme Back GGround Checks On Your Opponent It'll Do You Good Man, Nice Job On Vocab Though...6/10 Vote-Ling Return The Favor Link In My Signature... |
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You Fucked Up Fool, I Voted On Two Of Your Battles, You AInt Return The Favor Yet
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upsy dazy again damn can we git some votes!.......
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Voted For: Linguistics
oh dear..... i find it a bit of an insult that i actually have to describe my vote but hear goes: Linguistics: opener was good, nice punch, hit hard. Closer was real good! nice way to end the verse, good metaphor in a hard punch. Overall, ya flow was good, structure was tight and the punches were consistently good throughout, with some good metaphors. Black: Opener wasnt really good, the punch wasnt making a lot of sense and didnt hit hard at all. Closer was even worse, stretched line, bad punch and wasnt hitting him at all. Overall you have a lot of elevating to do and attle some more newbies before you go at people more experienced, thats the best way to get better. |
Voted For: Linguistics
ok Ill break it down like this Black im bout to kill dis fool for talkin shit like he big time wit big ryhmes im off tha dome, u give dome for a piece of tha pie wasnt really felling that i got bitches cuz im a pimp, u look like a chimp i'll stomp ya punk ass, have ya walkin limp haha look at how i do dis, u aint worth tha battle go to tha graveyard and pick a spot cuz when im done, u'll be goin there after dis battle Didnt rhyme Linguisticks I dont gotta come hard, just to trash this herb take the BL off, add a W, and thats just word! lol dope] got a death wish, commit suicide, gotta wittness here u like hustlers at mormon camps, have no buisness here [B] na ya toast kid, n' we know ya shits wack and ghost written cant be dope, cuz we know if its deicent, its mostly bitten aiii cant say your witty or smart, dued you'll never be felt cuz u'r names black but its in white, you confusin' ya self haha good one havent even battled yet, so stop lyin, sayin u tight when u wanted to follow in my footsteps...... .....................but didnt know I was ridin' a bike ok Id have to say linguistics won this easy no offence black you need to elivate you displayed little wit, keep at it though. return the favour plz http://community.rapverse.com/showb attlethread.php?t=180104 |
my bad the link fucked up http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=180104
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y am i not winnin?
damn dickridaz. i won dis battle! |
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Voted For: Linguistics
damn...ling ripped it.......he had the punches the personals structure everything black u need to work on your structure first and your vocab and your creativity and complexity......try to make your bars match up and da syllabels in them match up.... linguistics return the vote me vs mista authentic....im up 2-1 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=180185 |
Voted For: Linguistics
I dont gotta come hard, just to trash this herb take the BL off, add a W, and thats just word! ^^^DATZ ENUFF RITE THERE FAM..... dis shit was real wun sided opener-ling structure-ling punchlines-ling creativity-ling personals-ling finisher-ling enjoyed-ling......black whut da fukk was dat fam lol i shouldn't really have 2 explain dis shit RETURN DA FAVOR LINKS IN MY SIG...or i will take away dis vote |
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