X-Cell vs EyeDEA
 

Battle Rules:

6 -
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-23-05 at 04:06 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

hurry up nd check in guy..................i dont got all day

X-CELL has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-23-05 03:38 AM.

EyeDEA has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-23-05 03:46 AM.

i kicked pounds ass off RV so goin aganist me not smart see
dwag u couldnt come acroos dope if u was bob marley
u have 3-2-1 post naw thats the count down till u die
if u cant spell how can u put together 6 line
i dont need any ideas to end ya shit
u like a kid u pretend ya sick

this bitch nigga is wack

In this battle your gonna drown submitting you too a lyrical Liquidation
Now take a paper and pencil…take notes on this textual education
You see my style is posieness,,………like a lethal injection
Lyrical ooze causing your rap crews……. to become X-Men
….I just ate you up….i eat kids like you more than weekly
……….That’s why you’ll find little pieces of you in my feces


look i aitn spit in a while so here goes nothing

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This was feedback posted for X-CELL
 

come on guys... u know u both can do better than this

STYLE:
X, u got a good grip, but was lettin loose in the end; EyeDEA, i read ur rhyme at least 6 times and stiLL cant feel it man

PUNCH:
X delivered some, EyeDEA was here n there, cant find nEthing exceptional tho

FLOW:
Eye ur 4th line is really hurting, if u were going more than half way with the "-tion" rhyming, u couldve considered sticking with it the whole way and worked on havin better vocab-built multis in all ur lines; X, again u died down near the end

TECHNIQUE:
X, u cant accuse someone of not being able to spell, then go ahead and not pluralize 6 lineS in the blow, its like getting people's attention to realize ur mistakes; Eye u stepped up here, but correct me if im wrong, is posieness an actual word? and the break in the 4th line, cant feel that either

S: X-CELL > EyeDEA (SLIGHTly)
P: =tiE=
F: =tiE= (1 of u couldve clinched this easily)
T: EyeDEA > X-CELL (again slightly)
OVERALL: i really dont know, honest truth ive read both at least 20 times and cant really feel it
VOTE: i think i woulda slanted towards EyeDEA, but even if i had 20 posts at the moment to vote, i stiLL might not vote because i cant do it for either side strongly.

Voted For: EyeDEA

flow- neither 1 of y'all really had a good 1 all the way
thru but eyedea was structured betta, which made
it flow betta
punches- x-cell & eyedea i feel sum of ur lines were
played, but i feel eyedea had more & they hit
harder
personals- eyedea had alot more that were alot betta,
while x-cell had pretty lame 1's & didn't form
2getha 2 well
multis- obviously, eyedea had more by his rhyme scheme
vocab- at the beginning eyedea had it but then
fell off close 2 the end; but both were
lacking & needs sum elevation
originality- sum of the lines from both of ya were
played out in certain areas overall
they r good verses
v/eyedea

make sure 2 return the favor

Voted For: EyeDEA

x cells flow fell off at the middle..way off...i saw some good attempts at punches but they fell off
eyedea maintaned his flow steady thru-out..punches on both sides were lacking..eyedea had some good words using high vocab but thats it in this battle...

flow-eyedea
punches-eyedea
wordplay-eyedea

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Voted For: X-CELL

good battle. nice verses from both.

X-Cell: opener was nice. Good metaphor about Bob Marley in a nice punch. Second bar was alrite, good punch, set up was a bit weak tho. Closer was cool, good metaphor, good punch, nice way to end the verse, but a little short. Overall the flow awas good, the structure was a bit funny but the punches on the whole were good.

EyeDEA: opener was ok. To be honest i wasnt totally feelin it. the punch needed to be harder i think. Secondbar was really weak, punch should have been harder. closer was real good, the best bit of ya verse by far! Overall some of your wording could have been done better but it flowed well and the structure was good. Come harder with punches all the way thru next time and you'll do a lot better

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Voted For: EyeDEA

when i read these i spit em out in my head to see if they flow and ide say over all this had the better content and wordplay decent verse ........vote eyedea..........holla back in song forums for the track "sick of this "gimme some feedback pz

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This was feedback posted for EyeDEA
 

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Voted For: EyeDEA

nothin witty in either verse, but eyedea had better structure and vocab... it just looked better, i went by that since neither felt like puttin anything into this battle.

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Voted For: EyeDEA

umm this battle was weak but.....thats what u can git outta 6 lines........lol

bot xcel....your structer was terrible...i dont understand how u decide to wright like that but n e wayz......your punches sucked and no multeis.......

Eyedea....yours flowed a lil better and had better structer........punches were ok...liked the vocab ....soooo......

v/eyeDEA