Tonyself Vs The Wig
 

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I was going to edit /\/\/\ with a link in the pic, but you have editing turned off... www.soundclick.com/destined2rhyme.

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a yo i give this to Tony
the beat was hot he had a good flow have nice punches

wig beat was to fast ur flow was to fast the ward r to clost

vote: Tony self

and here me therd http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178509

Not to be an ass and seem like I'm bitching, but isn't the point of a fast beat a fast flow? o_O

And what does "the ward r to clost" the words are too close?

The wig: Man right off the bat, you had a horrible opener... The beggining is supposed to draw you in, but you first line had the ending words of "unclearable/........undeniable/".. that sucks.. i mean, imma be frank in my opinions.. that was wack... and if the first line you spit is wack, then what am i supposed to think throughout the song.. i mean, ya flow was coo.. i couldnt understand wtf you were saying most the time.. i mean, on the real - this wasn't what i would be expecting for a battle track.. just wasent up to par.. it had a monotone sound to it, all the way to the end.. the same pitches over and over.. you gotta change up thruoughout the track......


TonySelf: Opening had me bobbin my head... nice flow.. Lyrics i coudlnt always understand em.. ya vocals are to low.. but there clear.. i guess if thats possible.. lyrically the ones i did hear,. you were decent.. flow was orginial ehyme scheme was coo.. lol "he calls himself the wig"..nice lil addition.. the beat was hot i liked it alot.. nice lil mellow joint.. aight.. i'd say this was around decent for a battle track.. around 6-7/10 in my eyes.. you didnt really need to come to hard in this round..


Verdict: I'd say this goes to tony quite easily.. the wig didnt bring much to the table at all.. tony brought (tome atleast).. a couple pluses to the table.. as where wig brought one element to the table.. My vote - TonySelf

this was close cuz yall both wack neither had any good personals or disses neither had any punches just a buch of shit talking nobody dropped not one line that hit this battle is garbage i really liked the wigs flow on this and his beat was dope as fuck tony also had a good beat not as good but decent and his flow was good but again not as good here both have good voices and good quality also i found the wigs shit more enjoyable by far his flow and presence drew me in more then tony and since i never heard the wig and i actually like some of tony shit that was hard to do the wig had a superior flow and a better battle verse tony shit was horrible he actllay talked bout the kids nuts twice balls harry and mary?what the fuck tonys verse was garbage as fuck my vote goes to the wig

vote-the wig

Forgot to give me congrats to Both opponents. (enygma ;) )

Thanks for offering.....I like mine with cream and extra sugar :thumbup:

*listening*

The Wig - Beat's kinda quick.....kinda like an Eminem beat. I spit kinda fast too, so I can decipher what you were saying. You mumbled a lot which is what took away from the effectiveness of your verse. Also didn't have the raw emotion of a diss track.....sounded more like a regular song. A lot of what I heard was just random gun talk.....like what you were gonna do to him and shit like that. You need to diversify yourself a little more and poke fun at him......maybe his name or his voice or some shit because that old "I'm gonna kill you" type shit gets old kinda quick.

Tony.self - Beat's a little 90's style type shit. Your voice kinda sounds like Scarface......the rapper. You could have probably raised your vocals a little. I had a hard time hearing all of your words, but I got the jist of all of your lines. You had the same problem The Wig did with the emotion, but you were much more diverse in what you were talking about abd I think that is why you won this battle....

Vote - Tony.self

thanks for the hate vote :thumbup:

o.k breakdown...


wig - hmmm beat was quick, but for the most part ya flow stayed with it but it did go in places to me, quality was o.k and your mic presense was o.k but not as gud as tony's. punches were pretty gud in places but just weren't consistant enough, not that great overall

tony - nice, intro and beat had me interested, flow was dope i like ur style, mic presense was also pretty gud throughout, but once again i didnt think that much of ya punches, some were gud but then they fell off abit, but overall you took this very comfortably, gud verse


vote - tony

ok break down
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The Wig
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Flow:6/10
Punches:6/10
Personals:0/10(none)
Enjoyment:5/10
Production:5/10

Notes:man you stayed on the beat you rolled with it....but you gotta prenounce your words clearer and you gotta actually diss him.......but it was cool......

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Tony.Self
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Flow:7/10
Punches:6.5/10(they were straight..nun too spectacular)
Personals:0/10(did u diss him at all??)
Enjoyment:7/10
Productions:7.5/10

Notes:This was overall a decent drop.......you easily took this....nice drop man....even tho i know i've seen better from u..........word keep it up man......~1

V/T.S

the wig was goin too fast and mumbling too much. tonyself had some filler like whoa but his disses were much more decipherable and harder. wig man you cant just talk shit, lol. tony had him on the beat tip too.

v-tonyself

um, i couldnt really understand mr. wig too much on the first run around but then the second i understood some...overall not that great....tony...meh....better....

v/Tony

Tony.self wins :thumbup: