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Spektikul vs Mimesis
Battle Rules:
6 - 14 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 600 Check in by: 02-27-05 at 09:11 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Spektikul has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-23-05 01:35 PM.
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*Walks to computer. Sits down in chair. Cracks fingers. Looks at Mimesis. Begins typing.* yo yo......... You decided to quit ducking, fucking kid lost track of times Had so long to spit, you could have pre-writ a hundred lines My rhymes mean shit to me, you know Im better-so your pissed Cause in your sig im number one, you didnt even make the list Your as shitty as your city, your name makes me think man-he-sucks You got no respect, just like Phoenix has got no Stan-ley-cups Your fifteen years old, finally growing some hair on your body Reason your "still devilish", because your that far from "godly" We gotta history and its a mystery...you call yourself a Vet-er-an Getting a newb DQ'ed for too many ups, one of your better wins Mimesis asked if I was gay, I said that shits not in my interest Then I look at you and Hopesfall, an see your prolly into incest You dream of BJ's and cream your PJ's, your dreams about to shatter Your about as useful as a guy in a wheelchair...owning a ladder ...dont understand punches, dont vote... *Pushes away keyboard. Brushes off shirt sleeve. Turns computer off* |
Mimesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-05 12:40 AM.
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Ill cut ya neck, this sluts a mess...the fag just struck the deck
Plus, I aint even being a racist when i start sayin fuck a Spek You suck at text.. Ill ignite you, but bitch,ur just a dyke dude Your only One Of A Kind.. cause nobody wants to be like you Tight dude? Your cooked in the war.. bitch looks like a whore I mean.. who the fuck takes pride in losing the Rookie award Gotcha booked to soar.. how u still think your bound to boast When even the pen in ur avatar is heading out of your posts How about u roast.. turned to hoe.. i got you burnin that slow But, Spek was aledgely good.. and the world turned into a plateau I attack foes.. ditch your cane, u runnin shit?, ill splinter ur brain Cause how the fuck u get blown away by the winds of change? Im rippin you mayne.. Seriously.. im homing in to missle ur shit Cause im known to spit official art.. you just have artificial spits Peep his custom title and sig for a few more of my personals.. If you dont get one of my punches.. either pm me or dont vote.. |
Ehh.. Whatever..
I posted my verse twice.. I type them up in Microsoft Word so i can save it up.. I must have accidentally pasted it twice last night.. I dont remember doing it, but whatever.. S'all good, though. |
Voted For: Mimesis
Mim-Punches was good, very effective. Flowed nicly. Multi'z was good. Wordplays was decent and good. I've gots to say your punches and wordplays is the only thing that stood out in your verse. Personals and with punches connected, succesfully. Spek- Aiiight, Aiight. Good punches, little bit of wordplays. Flowed nicly, No multi'z. Personals you had was good. Personals with punches "eh" good. Overall=This battle is good, both spitted hard decent verses. Punches from mim, was decent and nice wordplays with personals was good. Flowed nicly and decent multi'z. Spek your verse was good, punches was good. No wordplays in my opinion, no multi'z. Personals was good with punches. Alright, in my eyes i think mim won this, decent punches hit harder. Spek your punches was good and very much effective, it's that you kept talking about he was pre-writing and ducking. Thats all. Although mim came from different angle. So i give this to mim for harder punches, and flow and good ass multi'z. PZ |
nice drop...uppin...........
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^ Word.
You too.. Uppin this madness........ |
Uppin this insanity..
1-0 Me. WORD SNUPS! ................................ |
lol ^^^
uppin this once again... |
This was feedback posted for Spektikul
Polls decent battle both had good drops i think spek won because his punches were dope as hell no hate mimesis ya verse was decent to.
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^ Lol @ me blacklisting Kordozar..
I know you claim to be his "little brother" but i think your full of bullshit :thumbup: Ill blacklist your alias now. Get out of my battles fagboy. |
Cmon, somebody vote up on this shit..
Word..... |
Mim...I got Strobe to fix your huuuuuuge verse, lol.
Uppin............ |
^ Lol..
Thanks yo.. Uppin for some madness.. |
The ratio of upping to voting is quite unbalanced...
...lets get this party started ya'll. Fucking vote. Upped. |
This is getting be to supremely gay.
Uppin for votes. |
Votes - 1
Spektikul/Mimesis Uppings - 11 UPPING #12!!!!!!!!!! Fuck...you'd be crazy not to vote on this shit.... |
This is our 13th up...
still with 1 vote...wtf... |
Numero cuatorce up.
Wordness. Vote up.. UHH. |
This was feedback posted for Spektikul
spek had better punches mime had better rhyme
punches > rhymes |
uppin #15 yall...
whut whut!? Vote bitches!!!! |
Uppin #16......
Gay........ |
Upping #17..........................................
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Upping # 18.
WORDNESS. Vote up like voters.. |
Upping #19............................
Its funny cause you and I have both voted for ppl and asked to return the favor.... |
Yeah.
Everybody is being gay. At least my post count can go up.. |
Voted For: Mimesis
Your fifteen years old, finally growing some hair on your body Reason your "still devilish", because your that far from "godly" ^^^this hot line of spek's vs.... You suck at text.. Ill ignite you, but bitch,ur just a dyke dude Your only One Of A Kind.. cause nobody wants to be like you Im rippin you mayne.. Seriously.. im homing in to missle ur shit Cause im known to spit official art.. you just have artificial spits .....these two. of mim's mim also had more wordplay How about u roast.. turned to hoe.. i got you burnin that slow But, Spek was aledgely good.. and the world turned into a plateau ..... which i like more than metaphors of spek VV You dream of BJ's and cream your PJ's, your dreams about to shatter Your about as useful as a guy in a wheelchair...owning a ladder and...... Your as shitty as your city, your name makes me think man-he-sucks You got no respect, just like Phoenix has got no Stan-ley-cups ...wordplay punches are much better than metaphors, u gotta have a helerious one or somin just off the chain for it to match up wit wordplay. `` som im goin wit- mim cuz more wordplay and havin two quotables to one from speck, eventhough spek that line of yours was the hottest of the battle, but u didn't have enough lines like that to win. nice battle from both besides gay metaphors. return the vote, i'll post the link in a sec. |
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...997497&posted=1
ya return wit some useful votes, both verses need some critism |
Aight..
Ill vote up in a second. Thanks for the vote yo. |
Uppin......
*Takes back godly line* *Gives Mimesis the win on a fancy Platter* ...lol j/p, gotta wait until whats done is done... |
Voted For: Mimesis
mimesis took this one imo....he had plent of multis and kept a consistency to his battle verse...spektikul your punches werent hitting az hard as mimesis' did..if you would of said more like u did n ur last bar you could have took this one..also the line about him being far from godly was good too but it just didnt quite do it vote....mimesis Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppiddy up up.......
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Uppin this madness.
Vote up hoecakes!!!!!!!!!!! |
Uppin this for more votes..
We'll return the favor honestly.. |
Of course we will return the favor...
Except the ppl's battles that we voted on do not return them... Upping. |
Voted For: Mimesis
Spektikul You decided to quit ducking, fucking kid lost track of times Had so long to spit, you could have pre-writ a hundred lines wack My rhymes mean shit to me, you know Im better-so your pissed Cause in your sig im number one, you didnt even make the list weak personal Your as shitty as your city, your name makes me think man-he-sucks You got no respect, just like Phoenix has got no Stan-ley-cups fuck no Your fifteen years old, finally growing some hair on your body Reason your "still devilish", because your that far from "godly" meh... setup was wack, punch was decent We gotta history and its a mystery...you call yourself a Vet-er-an Getting a newb DQ'ed for too many ups, one of your better wins lmao... nice personal Mimesis asked if I was gay, I said that shits not in my interest Then I look at you and Hopesfall, an see your prolly into incest nah You dream of BJ's and cream your PJ's, your dreams about to shatter Your about as useful as a guy in a wheelchair...owning a ladder wack Spektikul, the majority of your verse was pretty weak. Also you had a couple of fillers in there. For instance, your first bar 2 lines was a filler. You had like one or two decent--ish lines & the rest of your verse let you down. Mimesis: Ill cut ya neck, this sluts a mess...the fag just struck the deck Plus, I aint even being a racist when i start sayin fuck a Spek nah You suck at text.. Ill ignite you, but bitch,ur just a dyke dude Your only One Of A Kind.. cause nobody wants to be like you yea, decent Tight dude? Your cooked in the war.. bitch looks like a whore I mean.. who the fuck takes pride in losing the Rookie award lmfao Gotcha booked to soar.. how u still think your bound to boast When even the pen in ur avatar is heading out of your posts nah.. i've seen to many punches like this How about u roast.. turned to hoe.. i got you burnin that slow But, Spek was aledgely good.. and the world turned into a plateau no I attack foes.. ditch your cane, u runnin shit?, ill splinter ur brain Cause how the fuck u get blown away by the winds of change? nah Im rippin you mayne.. Seriously.. im homing in to missle ur shit Cause im known to spit official art.. you just have artificial spits decent Decent verse, all in all. Nothing to quote but definatly a better verse than spek's. vote: Mimesis Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. Crew vote removed |
^ Thanks for the vote.
Uppin this insanity.. Word. |
Voted For: Spektikul
i would vote, but i cant, so i'll up it........... Vote removed |
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