Escobar vs EyeDEA
 

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No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-24-05 at 02:37 AM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

i will ecpet once oyu do....................................

hello
except it..............so i can post my verse ...........

Escobar has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-24-05 02:16 AM.

EyeDEA has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-24-05 02:25 AM.

QUIk spit.for this alias name changing bitch

My tongue moves like hindu belly dancers performin tantra
I'll blurr you vision like slow setter speeds on the camera
fuck you up,……And get all up in that ass like colon cancer
My mental blows will hit you in the dome like clenched fists
Because my Telepathy Bench presses more than a forklift
You thought you had me hemmed up against the ropes back to the wall
I got more Punches than an Boxer and now its time to take the fall


look fuck this battle becuase this niggas got more name changes then i got wins..

my record is 9-1

lmao that was wack................................

Voted For: Escobar

easy easy.. Result came wit harder punches.. no personals really from either.. but structure and flow go to result.. damn eyedea.. change ur name cause ur nothing like him.. u came pretty wack.. with played punches.. lmao result came with that comical shit.. and actually had me laughing.. and i read his verse to a beat.. soo although some of ur lines are stretched it still flowed.. but this wasnt a very good battle to read.. neither came with anything special result just had enough to win tho.. no hate elevate..

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Voted For: EyeDEA

eye you took this easily better punches metas

result your structure was nice but i wasnt feelin the "punchlines?" "when i say whack" questions before the lines are whack

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Voted For: Escobar

STYLE:
EyeDEAs done an alright job, nothing out of the ordinary tho; Result, u got a lot of arbitrary words in ur piece, and when they're not forced, they dont really pack much

PUNCH:
Result, ur close to writing a book explaining each of ur punches, figure out what ur hittin ur opponent with, and cocentrate on that; EyeDEA ur punches were almost there, but stiLL rather weak

FLOW:
Results got good beginning, seems like ur verse got cut off n never got a closer tho; EyeDEA's toying wit a 7 liner but i dont think u quite made it, i also suggest extending the word "tantra" to spit as a 3 syllable word like "camera"

TECHNIQUE:
Result u needed to end off with an explosive punch, that wouldve given u the edge, but wit ur current closer its like a slap on the face... ur own face; EyeDEA ok job, lines were somewhat played out

S: =tiE=
P: Result > EyeDEA
F: EyeDEA > Result
T: EyeDEA > Result
OVERALL: u both need to work on better wording to deliver clean but hard punches, urs edged him this time Result, but just barely
VOTE: Result

Voted For: Escobar

OK EYE GOOD FILLERS LOL THAT WHAT I GOTTA SAY CUZ YOU HAD NO FUCKING PUNCHES AT ALL WTF PERSONAL IS MADD PLAYED SINCE I LOOKED IT UP AND YOUR BATTLING VIRTUE EVERYONES USED THAT SHIT VOCAB WAS GOOD SET UPS AND WORDINGS WAS GOOD ALSO STRUTURE AS WELL BUT PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AINT EXIST AND THATS WINS BATTLES3/10
RESULT YOUR SHIT WASNT MUCH BETTER BUT YOU HAD SOME PUNCHES AT LEAST EVEN THOUGH THEY WASNT HOT NO PERSONALS EITHER STRUTURE AND FLOW OK VOCAB GOOD BETTER PUNCHES WON YOU THIS BUT BARELY 3.5/10
BASICALLY YOU BOTH SUCK BUT WHILE EYE HAD NO PUNCHES AT LEAST RESULT HAD SOME

Voted For: Escobar

punches-result
persnals-result
metals-none
flow-tie
stuck-tie

result came a little hard on the punches and a lot harder on the persnals eyedea had hardly any unches that landed no persnals so my vote gose to result

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Voted For: EyeDEA

hell yeah u get my vote...cos ya verse kept on flowin and the punches came way harder....i loved ur wordplkay they werent all that authentic but decent...ya verse was well structured too..opner and closer were decent too...uhhmm result...u gatta work on ya punches and wordplay...structure woulda been iight but u just didnt get it...props to both but this dude gets my vote for a more entertaining and direct verse...


holla!!!

Voted For: EyeDEA

OK you got this win only becuase your structure...everything else was even...

IDEA,,,that shit was the wackest shit i have heard in a minute....but your strucutre was alot better than his...and your flow was constant...probably woudl have been a better audio verse rather than text............pretty decent shit tho..........work on your metaphores...and personals...becuz those are what wind battles....then after that work on punches...vocab i good

Result>.if you would hav just kept the structure how it is it would have been alot better and eaiser win for you........becuase you had the advantage by just a lil bit...but that centering your text shit is mad newbish.......thats why yiou loose

you guys are fucking lucky i need battle credits ...or else i would have never voted.....fucking newbs.....and RESULT stop changing your name your confusing me nnow....lol

Voted For: EyeDEA

OK. i havent been on RV for about 5 months so my voting might be diff then others

i feel that eyedea won becuase his punchlines where amazing and he actaully wanted ot win this. rather than loose. he tried and put alot more effort into this battle. if this where a face to face battle eyedea would have won. if this were a topical text battle result would have won. but they both had diff. styles and they where both real dope. i woudl ahve to say the best ive heard in a while. although i havent been on RV for a long time.lol

punches:eyedea
metaphores:eyedea
structure:result
wordplay:na
intro:eyedea
vocab:result

eyedea wins by one point.

^^^^^^^^ fuck you bitch. i one this shit. fiar and square in every fucking catogory dumb fuck take your ass back to where the fuck you came frim hoe,,,UUUPpinnn for voters........

Voted For: EyeDEA

if your battling escobar why does his name say Result? but anyway if i knew you where this wack eyedea i would actaully dropped a verse agianst you. your lucky i was too lazy. but this battle was weak but i like how he made fun of Result becuase i guess its true he does change his names alot. that right there was the best personal out of the whole battle if not the only personal. also you guys both had stupid or dumb punchlines. i liked results structure better i like how you put questions and shit but you had no personals and your punches wear soft and didnt reall hit. also your vocab needs some work. but this was inded a weak battle. eyedea we should battle again looser
but i vote for eyedea i guess

Voted For: Escobar

i think you win this because yoru punches where mad hitting, shit was mad dope yo

VIRTUE, that was mad dope like damn i didnt think you had that in you, i thoguht you where just a topical writer nice shit yo
i see we need to battlle yo so i can own you
goood shit tho yo i liked it alot

EYEDEA, ok this shit was kinda wack seems like you just BLahed this battle, should have took more time out, but decent i will battle you if you want. but just elevate alot yo.

vote=virtue

Voted For: Escobar

yo you took this no problem good shit

you coudl have tried better but shit was good yo
i liked almost all of your lines....lol you must be the best on RV

eyedea wtf , where you talking about, well im not sure but youl oose.....

good battle kinda...one sided all the way