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Linguistics vs ma$term!nd
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Linguistics has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-24-05 08:36 PM.
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ma$term!nd has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-24-05 08:43 PM.
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im that lonely flower that CREEPED-FROM-DA-CRACK,
im INCREASING-MAH-STACKS, you CHEAP-AND-JUST-WACK, naw i take that back, you half DESCENT-IF-THAT, they be like fuck it, aint no BRINGING-HIM-BACK. dont worry bout living i got CROOKS-THAT-ILL-KNOCK-U, that keep 'TOASTERS' dat wont COOK-UP-YA-WAFFLES, wont 'spare-ya-vest' they 'tear-ya-chest', now the cops LOOK-ING-4-FOSSILS, whoever said you was dope a 'LION KING', they prolly LOOK-LIKE-MU-FASA, ya girlfriend...body hairy...she prolly LOOK-LIKE-CHEW-BAKA, 'bitch-im-da-best' 'initial-ya-chest' so its no questions WHO-SHOT-YA. |
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ya names Ma$term!nd..?, what u expect me to fear ya and...... u could use the ! mark, still dont mean we gonna hear ya to dumb to understand, so dued i'll s-p-i-t...s-l-o-w-e-r cuz hes on vaction from reality, but dued the trips over u herb man, i'll own ya, cuz i'm the best of the vets he always lookin ova my sholda........... ............so i spit in the wind, and step to the left for real, this kid aint worth it, cuz man i'll always be iller so i aint waist a good closer, so this last lines a filler |
Voted For: Linguistics
meh horrid battle.. neither side came hard at all linguistics has a couple nice punches in there.. but that closer was weak.. it was played honestly... and other dude needs to try something besides multi's.. it sounds bad when thats all u got in a battle.. but ur closer was nice.. so overall this was a close battle ling ling just takes it cause he had more consistent punches.. that is all.. |
Voted For: Linguistics
Alright Punches Goes To Ling, He Came Decent And Hard With Em, His Structure Was Messed Up Though But Better Then Other Dudes Structure, Your Vocabulary Was There Pretty Good Man Dig This Verse, Try Working On Your WordPlay And Try Not To Force Your Lines Man, Over All Pretty Decent Verse 9/10 Mastermid Damn! Nicely Done Coz, Punches Wow! It Was Cool, Multi's Was Your Upper Hand Here Though It's What Helped You To Get A Little More Points Then I Would Of Gave You, Structure Is What Fucked You Here Man, Tottaly Chaotic Try And Work On That A Little, And Your Vocabulary Wasn't To Decent...8/10 Vote-Ling Return The Favor Lin In My Sig Man |
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Voted For: Linguistics
Ok you win Nos this shit was decent your personals where dope and your closer was dope and that spit in the wind line was dope, i just dont understand why you had to make an alias....but your structure was your downfall and that SPit Slower shit was dope.....you mad murked this kid yo Masta..you had mad multies but they hwere allwack your whole verse was eack you need to up your game yo you also need to desperatly work on yoru structure ummmi would give more feedback but theres no use in that vote=LIng |
I'm not Nos.......................................lol
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i know who you are???????and thats word yo...............
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and believe you me your not NOS .......llol
i know who you are tho hit me up on AIM QuesLyric |
Voted For: Linguistics
im that lonely flower that CREEPED-FROM-DA-CRACK, im INCREASING-MAH-STACKS, you CHEAP-AND-JUST-WACK, naw i take that back, you half DESCENT-IF-THAT, they be like fuck it, aint no BRINGING-HIM-BACK. NO, NO PUNCH AT ALL, BUT YOU SHOULD JOIN THE MULTIE LEAGUE THOUGH dont worry bout living i got CROOKS-THAT-ILL-KNOCK-U, that keep 'TOASTERS' dat wont COOK-UP-YA-WAFFLES, wont 'spare-ya-vest' they 'tear-ya-chest', now the cops LOOK-ING-4-FOSSILS, SEE THIS IS A NICE VERSE, BUT NOT A NICE BATTLE VERSE, JUST FOCUS ON ADDING PUNCHES AND PERSONALS TO YA VERSES YOULL BE AIIGHT . . . . ya names Ma$term!nd..?, what u expect me to fear ya and...... u could use the ! mark, still dont mean we gonna hear ya GOOD PERSONAL BUT KINDA WEAK PUNCH to dumb to understand, so dued i'll s-p-i-t...s-l-o-w-e-r cuz hes on vaction from reality, but dued the trips over DOPE, I LIKE THIS BAR u herb man, i'll own ya, cuz i'm the best of the vets he always lookin ova my sholda........... ............so i spit in the wind, and step to the left ANOTHER FUCKING SICK BAR, GOOD for real, this kid aint worth it, cuz man i'll always be iller so i aint waist a good closer, so this last lines a filler EVEN U KNOW THIS WAS LACKING LIKE YA STYLE LINGUISTICS, U AINT NEED A DOPE CLOSER TO TAKE THIS, U GOT IT, MASTER, JUST WORK ON YA PUNCHES AND CUT BACK ON MULTIES, JOIN THE LEAGUE |
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Voted For: Linguistics
haha, linguistics, you take this, i dont really have to break it down at all.... mastermind....just because all your punches are multis, doesnt mean your going to win....cause they were weak as hell and played to the bone...but it was a good attempt at multis and it flowed pretty nicely...little off in some places..gotta work on structure an makin some effective punches/personals ling, nice punches and shit, but you gotta up the complexity a little, coming a little to weak but it could just be this battle...opener was good...flow and structure was decent...vocab, elevate on that a little an you should be good v/linguistics |
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