Buck.Shot vs MaRVJay1009
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/r
No Hate Votes

An Strobe Told Me Ta Make This Rule, Because I Currently Have 5 Open Battles, He Stated Ta Make This Rule An He Wont DQ Me If People Complain
But I'm Sure Thats Cool With You

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 02-25-05 at 12:18 PM

Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in.

Closed - Expired / old battle win

i dont give a fukk how many battles u got open....lets go

lol, aight, its just that i was dq'ed from 2 battles wednesday night, an strobe told me ta put that in the battle rules for future refrence, but accept an then i'll accept....

Buck.Shot has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-25-05 11:39 AM.

Kid Tried ta Make a name for himself, By Dissin Vets
There was no Rhyme scheme, just Cussin, Like lyrical Terrets
Yeah Sho'..He's Talented, For a Fuckin Retard
I seen more ''Marvellous'' Things at An Alabama Junkyard!
Just lookin at this Kat, i know why they call it ''Queens''..
Cause they all ''Ridin More Dick'' than Russian Teens
I'm Crushin-Ya-Dreams, like I clutch at Mics
This faggots more Pussy than a Set of Twin Dykes
Kids like a Bike, Always Gettin ''Rode''
When it comes ta skill, Ya dont know where ta go...
..................Like bein Lost on a Crossroad!
I feel like am bein Followed, an this Kid Is my Stalker
Him n his Crew Play ''RV Star'' wars like they Luke Skywalker!
Fuckin Shit Talker, I'ma take a bite out the Big Apple
Homo trynna ''Touch on me'' Like a Wrestling Grapple...
Kids got an AssHole as ''Open''as a Quarrey
So i'ma end this battle By FUCK YOU, An i'm so sorry........
:D

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-25-05 11:58 AM.

look....

Listen bitch how u spittin sick? you just da make alot noise.....
u scared of guns u'll neva BUCK.SHOT(s) & u neva SHOTTaBOy
day u were born u wasn't his father joy,u fag datz extra scary
i thought u got "threatened by a person on trial" how u "LEFT Da JURy"
u aint sick with flows n lines..but since u a foe of mine.....
ima put ya "brain in ya mouth" bet dat a really "blow ya mind"..
nigga u suck ya current punches r probly in my oldest ryhme...
by da time "jamall borrow" get out maybe dis hoe could "shyne"
u so weak ,im so street but its no need da squeeze da heat..
he's a "hi-jacker" he dont steal planes just "smoke weed & beat his meat"
ya bars suck "sit down" bitch clown..u cant "stand" marvjay's..
how u say u a vet..when ya losses r "40" datz my grandma age
im laughin bitch..u talk a "whole" lot but u aint "half" as sick....
u left THE JURy when u found they were battlin the establishment
cuzz u know i was gon merk you yeah ur just a scary bitch...
ya moms a feen she everyday she go see ya OLD NaME....
which is DOPEMaN..4 dem white & gold grams..OH DaMMM...
marvjay ya rv buddy's told ya ass pleez dont provoke fam....
ya thug image i find it fake..and how ya ryhmes is great?????
dem shits like da "front of gay club" nun of ya "lines is str8"....


.....he put unlimited lines so ima keep goin....

they were all u rite u is weak!..y waste time & write 2 a beat
out of your 56 wins...50 were noobs only on dis site 4 a week
u aint in worth it ur da worst bitch u should glad i take da time
u dont keystyle u like dat "nas song" u need a "book of ryhmes"
ya moms is a horny hoe..but last nite she wanna call me tho..
like jay ur da "17836786th" man im bringin 2 da "maury show"

lol....i dont if ya'll watch dat...nuff said

Damn, i want a rematch after this, cause i forgot ta delete unlimited lines, so its hardly fair... lol

but still it was an alright drop, some useless things that could be considerd fake personals, but still, nice shit, uppin y'all.....

lol only reason i spit dat much cuzz i aint know how much u was gon spit................

lol its aight, it was a nice drop, proppz too ya, but an its my fault for being dumb an forgettin the line limit lol, but i still want a rematch yo......

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

O SHIT...Good battle

punches- marvjay barely edged out with tis sick line yo:
ima put ya "brain in ya mouth" bet dat a really "blow ya mind"....
nigga u suck ya current punches r probly in my oldest ryhme...
and buck shot...that bicycle line...is played as fuck homie..

personals- tie...they both had some decent personals flowin for them..

wordplay- i liked marv jay's wordplay better..he executed his shit better.

structure and flow- Buck had this yo..marv jay ur structure was off in this battle..but Buck's was easie to read.

vocab- none really stood out in this battle in my mind..

closer- lol...

ya moms is a horny hoe..but last nite she wanna call me tho..
like jay ur da "17836786th" man im bringin 2 da "maury show"
VS
Kids got an AssHole as ''Open''as a Quarrey
So i'ma end this battle By FUCK YOU, An i'm so sorry........

^^man i liked marv's closer betta...it was funny..but dope urs was aite...but not better than marv's..

vote- marvjay1009

aight uppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnn 4 more votes

Yeah what jackass said ^^^^
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lmaooooooooooooooooo fukkin homo

hahahaha
it was a joke kid.....................

but uppin

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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

checkin votesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

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1 vote??? whuts good rv

damm niggaz is really not tryin da vote on dis shit

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

check out dem pollz..naw sayin.....

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whut da fukk is good

Obviously not this battle because nobody wanna vote

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uuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnn damm 1 fukkin vote

rv's freestyle king??????? lmaooooooooooo

No, I'm RV'S FREESTYLE KING

Every rhyme i ever wrote was a freestyle, i dont pre-write, so i declare myself the freestyle king :D

Battles gettin slept on tho'....shit is whack as hell

Upping this here y'all..........
what some brothers gotta do ta get some damn votes round here

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

"okay since niggaz dont wanna return da favor and vote on my battle...im force da get my vote taken away...ya niggaz is da worst and hnic ur trash--feedback from MaRVJay1009"


Well, preciate tha vote and all that even if a nigga is trash...like u said, but b-4 u go bitchin about a nigga not votin on ya battle and what not, u should look and see it takes 300 posts to vote on ya battle...and we ain't got 300 between tha two of us...lol

what does that have too dom with our damn battle ? ^^^^^

^^^ Cuz man, the cat u battled posted that quote in my battle thread complainin that we didnt come and return tha vote

well when i voted on ya battle i had like 3 open battles...and a few of dem u had enuff post 2 vote but ya niggaz chose not 2 but wanna uppin ya battle all da time and dont vote on shit so i will get my vote taken away

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

you won this man barely but ill give it to you multis were better opener and closer were better

hey buck man what the fuck was that

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

finally another fukkin vote

that vote is not gonna stand ^^^
are u on drugs?
da fuck kinda vote was that
he voted against me in every battle with feed like that ^^