Skriptz vs Buck.Shot
 

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No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R Votes
No Votes From Ya Groupies

An Strobe said.....
In Order for a battle ta not be closed because i currently have 5 open battles, i gotta state that i cant be dq'ed for that rule :D

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 02-25-05 at 09:29 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Buck.Shot has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-25-05 09:09 PM.

Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-25-05 09:11 PM.

This kid aint no ''Real'' emcee, he's a Whack ''Shady''
He was Conceived by Bobby n Whitney, the Boys a Crack Baby
Yeah you do hate me, But i Wonder Why?
U Just a fuckin herb that buzzes around rv like a Housefly..
We all know you gonna Deny, but kid you do Cheat
Couldnt ''Serve'' Ya ''Punces'' for Lunches as Hobo 'Meat'
It aint that you Untouchable, its nobody wants to Touch
your on every thread like my shadow....
.............................Obsessed much?

Ah, this kid is battling me again… be he’s still a non-vet
Said he has skills… to bad it hasn’t really been found yet
You’re far from dope, man… so you might as well quit*
I told him that his punches were chappy…
……………………………… so he went on and licked his lips
He thinks he’s a textcee… shit… I’ll smack you with a MIC
Threw his punches in the air… and he thinks they took flight
I’ll slap this bitch around… and watch this homo get pissed
Said he’s coming at me with punches… that never even exist

Key’d

*his other name was Dopeman

don’t get it? Don’t vote…

Ah, this kid is battling me again… but he’s still a non-vet
Said he has skills… to bad it hasn’t really been found yet
You’re far from dope, man… so you might as well quit*
I told him that his punches were chappy…
……………………………… so he went on and licked his lips
He thinks he’s a textcee… shit… I’ll smack you with a MIC
Threw his punches in the air… and he thinks they took flight
I’ll slap this bitch around… and watch this homo get pissed
Said he’s coming at me with punches… that never even exist

Key’d

*his other name was Dopeman

don’t get it? Don’t vote…

w/e...uppin this

Voted For: Skriptz

omg.. i hope that verse really wasnt key'd.. cause if it was. i feel bad for dopeman.. i mean skriptz u had dope punches the whole way thru.. i liked the chapped lips line.. it was pretty nice dope man u need to learn what a REAL punch is.. cause dawg.. ur whole verse in that was filler.. u really only had 1 nice punch that battle.. skriptz is just on a much higher level then u no hate.. u just gotta elevate man.. both had nice flow the whole way thru.. neither had alot of personals.. both had nice structure.. just the witty and creativiness gives skriptz the win.. pz..

This was feedback posted for Skriptz
 

skriptz fucking owned this battle....dopeman was wack in this....

This was feedback posted for Buck.Shot
 

checkin polls.....NOK hoes....if u not wit it get filled wit holes...

ohh, that was dope...lmao...j/p

good shit yall...just reading shit...no comment really. just keep elevating...and yall structure both fell off once, but it was still a close battle...

~1~

This was feedback posted for Skriptz
 

Skriptz won this easily...........................

What suprize that Skriptz dickridin ho'z say some bullshit like ''Skriptz won an he won because i suck his dick on AIM''

Uppin for votes

i wasn't even on aim the other day...mayn shut up...

gettin more loses than your wins..ur pathetic...

Voted For: Skriptz

Buck-

Aiight mane, good flow. Nice lil wordplays. Punches was kinda "eh" balanced. But either way nice verse with good flow and punches...........plus wordplays


Skritpz-

Aiiight good flow, nice decent punches. Didn't see any wordplays, but the punches is wat stood out in your verse. Nice meta'z.


Overall=Ok battle. Buck your punches was kinda balanced, with good and bad........Stretch lines but that dont matter. Wordplay's was good. You had some good punches, and with some bad ones......But keep it up fam. Skriptz Your punches was hard and decent......flowed pretty well, nice meta'z. My vote goes to skriptz cause his punches hit way harder, buck your's was effective but still didn't have enough to come up with the win. wun

Voted For: Skriptz

This kid aint no ''Real'' emcee, he's a Whack ''Shady''
He was Conceived by Bobby n Whitney, the Boys a Crack Baby
...aiiiiight punch, not great, but decent
Yeah you do hate me, But i Wonder Why?
U Just a fuckin herb that buzzes around rv like a Housefly..
......bar put a funny pic in my head of skript as a fly
We all know you gonna Deny, but kid you do Cheat
Couldnt ''Serve'' Ya ''Punces'' for Lunches as Hobo 'Meat'
......good bar i like the punch for sum reason
It aint that you Untouchable, its nobody wants to Touch
your on every thread like my shadow....
.............................Obsessed much?
...closer was ok you aint try on this bar
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Ah, this kid is battling me again… but he’s still a non-vet
Said he has skills… to bad it hasn’t really been found yet
...aiight bar not original but decent
You’re far from dope, man… so you might as well quit*
I told him that his punches were chappy…
……………………………… so he went on and licked his lips
....nice punch best of battle
He thinks he’s a textcee… shit… I’ll smack you with a MIC
Threw his punches in the air… and he thinks they took flight
......good bar, good meta, overall good
I’ll slap this bitch around… and watch this homo get pissed
Said he’s coming at me with punches… that never even exist
......pretty good line, kinda basic though
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honestly this was a close battle, so i based my vote on enjoyability and slightly enjoyed skriptz shit more, no hate
buck, u came good too

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return the favor please

uppin this.....

How come all your votes are only ever when your online?

i mean its not like your cheating or nothin, right?
its just a coincidence.............

???

i just came on like 20mins ago, these were when i came on
like around 11am...then went off for a basketball game.....

Voted For: Skriptz

solid battle....

Buck...
>This kid aint no ''Real'' emcee, he's a Whack ''Shady''
He was Conceived by Bobby n Whitney, the Boys a Crack Baby
-weak opener...5/10
>Yeah you do hate me, But i Wonder Why?
U Just a fuckin herb that buzzes around rv like a Housefly..
-flow off here....4/10
>We all know you gonna Deny, but kid you do Cheat
Couldnt ''Serve'' Ya ''Punces'' for Lunches as Hobo 'Meat'
-coulda been worded better....6/10
>It aint that you Untouchable, its nobody wants to Touch
your on every thread like my shadow....
.............................Obsessed much?
-okay idea, but coulda beend worded better again....6/10

overall: 21/40.....okay, buck, had some good ideas, but your flow and structure kinda went to shit on some of the lines....just fix that up a little and this coulda been a solid verse....i think thats what mainly killed your verse, few weak punches, not really any good personals either, so i have to go with skriptz

skriptz...
>Ah, this kid is battling me again… but he’s still a non-vet
Said he has skills… to bad it hasn’t really been found yet
-haha, little played, 6/10
>You’re far from dope, man… so you might as well quit*
I told him that his punches were chappy…
……………………………… so he went on and licked his lips
-haha, solid line here, 8/10
>He thinks he’s a textcee… shit… I’ll smack you with a MIC
Threw his punches in the air… and he thinks they took flight
-okay, 6/10
>I’ll slap this bitch around… and watch this homo get pissed
Said he’s coming at me with punches… that never even exist
-haha, nice finisher, 7/10

overall: 27/40...word, flow and structure were solid, really easy to read, not too much complexity, but still got the job done, few nice personals/punches in there, still had enough to take this one, decent drop man

v/skriptz

Buck your a fucking whiner....seriously man, i left feed, because if i voted honestly you would just cry that it was a dick ride, when i told skriptz he won this easily, he acctually told me not to vote on this battle.... so stop bitchin you cunt

Redbull you ho, What do you expect?
I whine about cheats, you, an spritz are gay bitches that are sad an pathetic enuff ta cheat on a fuckin Internet site, Skriptz OINLY EVER GETS VOTES WHEN HES ONLINE, An if ya check his Profile, he Pm's alot, then 10 minutes later, he gets a vote, an he also AIMS FOR VOTES ....EVERYBODY SAYS SO, Redbulkl your gay, you need a life, you cant even rap, you cheat for votes an also get DQ'S For NO REAZON, Ya both some bitches

Obviously there has to be a reason to get a DQ... you sound like an idiot everytime you talk.

uppin this already

This was feedback posted for Skriptz
 

uppin this shit

uppin for this win

i just checked your votes lol
Its Mistah who hates on me, Kesse who hates on me, Hotshhh who has a battle open with me, an u call that fair?????

you had 1 fair vote on this, the rest are hate, but whatever nigga, you keep ridin the cock ftoo get your wins, Its NOTHIN

^okay?...i can careless really...
uppin...

Uppin............................................. ...
Real votes would be nice

Voted For: Skriptz


Skriptz
Alright Good Verse Man, You Had Some Nice Meta's That Was Hitting Hard Man, Also Had Some Good Vocabulary, Best I've Seen From You Yet, For Serious Man Well Maybe Not The Best, Anyway, Your Structure Was Decent Had Some WordPlay In Here I Was Feeling, I See You Played Of His Name So You Had A Few Personals In Here Alright Cool,...9/10

Buck.Shot
No Beef This Is An Honest Vote Man, Plus Yo I'm Finna Stop The Beef Yo No More Beef Man, Me And J Dot Cool Weerd, Any Way Your Flow Was Decent You Had Some Nice Multi's Here Pretty Good You Elevating, Strcture Could Use Some Work Though Weerd, Your Flow Was Decent But One Werd Of Advice Vocabulary, Try And Get You Some Decent Vocabulary Know What I'm Saying??...And Add Some Meta's Here , You Had Small Ammount Of Personals Cool...8.5/10

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