::..:$lobK::..: vs MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
 

Battle Rules:

6-8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


G-LUCK :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 02-26-05 at 02:38 PM

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MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-26-05 02:14 PM.

::..:$lobK::..: has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-26-05 02:35 PM.

Since This Commission Came On The Site..The Justice Been Missin'
Lets Not Get "Technical" But This "Black Queen"' Has A Fucked Judicial System..lol*
So Listen "Mista"..Am I Suppose To Get Aroused..Cuz Ur Rec Is Outta The Clouds?
Na..U Dont Even Deserve Bows..Cuz "The Jury" Is Always Part Of A Crowd..lol
Are You A Vet?..Na U Aint..And That's Y You Aint Earnin Respect..
And How Is Homie A G..When He Get Hard Off Of Pictures Ova Da Net..
You A Nerd Kid..So Wat If Im New..Cuz It's Wins Im Lurkin..
And This May Sound Disturbin'..But Ur Guilty Of Bein Whack..And That's The Verdict

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Technical and Black Queen Are Members Of His Crew(The Jury)
^^^Did My Research..

Did You Posted In The Box?


Not The One Down Here Right ? The Long One? I'm Talking About The Short One.

This was feedback posted for MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
 

just wanted to see the polls on diz one..i like your line about the converse thing and the bunsen burner thing was nice too....i b usin dem shits in chemistry lol...you deffinately is gettin better yo.....since u wasnt text battlein for a while...good shit

Coo thanx.........uppin for some fucking votes holla at cha boi................

Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

Slob
ight yo that was basic i didnt see much creativty about your verse you had basic punches and set up lines but you didnt fisnh wit wordplay theres tempts but there wack yo, trying uppin that ish and it would be tight like your stucture and flow is decent but your punche sare seriously weak, no hate yo pz

Mista
nothing great here seen betta from you but i like the way you said your words ive seen much elevation from you like your grammer is alot better the stucture is better the punch lines are feirce and just killed this cat with yo ish, everything about your verse was better, pz

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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
structure is good.. flow is pretty good.. no multis.. wordplay is pretty nice at times.. some of your punches connected.. an attempted personal..

::...:$lobK::..:
structure is good.. flow is pretty good.. no multis.. a lot of your wordplay is forced.. like the one using the crew members.. it was just like, whatever.. a few, at best, of your punches connected.. LINKS ARE PLAYED AS FUCK.. dont ever use them again.. they were good last summer.. not anymore.. so dont use em.. attempted a few personals..

Overall
SlobK attempted more personals.. both had a good structure.. both had a pretty good flow.. neither had multis.. Mista had the better wordplay.. and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. Mista Authentiq gets my vote..

VOTE - MISTA_AUTHENTIQ

Hit up the link in my sig..

Aiiiiigh thanx for the honest vote's................uppin

Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

OH MY LAWD...thats the hottest shit ive seen on this site yet....holy shit LMFAO...i wasnt gonna vote on this but wen i read ur verse..i was like..HOT DAYUM

slobk..the punches in this was crazy..and multis was on fire too..the Personals was off the hook......the font colour was kinda fucked...but i could still read it so that didnt even matter.......umm...dope structure and the flow was off the hook...everyline was above 75 percent...this shit was dangerous

9.5/10

mista:

your shit was koo..but it looked like a herb drop compared to wat mista dropped naww meanz...umm ur best punches wuld prolly be
You aint dissing me, you dissing your self, look at them holes in ya name
Damn kid your retarted, like converse, your tongues stays open for them dick man

and that wasnt even that strong

vote:

slobk

and work to the BK!!

This was feedback posted for MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
 

MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

My punches put you in a choke hold make you see blue
I'll leave you bloody and eat you like sloppy joe's for food
^okay okay,bit self-glorification though

I seen your profile, your age is like infant punches 1 year old
Turn your lungs into a paper mache, leaving it fold
^good bar

You aint dissing me, you dissing your self, look at them holes in ya name
Damn kid your retarted, like converse, your tongues stays open for them dick man
^hehe,funny shit

Like your user title i'll show you my guns and you'll become a gun runner
talk shit in my toilet and i'll your ass on fire, like a fucking bunsen burner
^nice closer

Overall good battle,had some nice creative punches and personals in there,good wordplay but a little bit of self-glorification sometimes. Had your flow on lock, structure was cool and vocab was tight as well.


::..:$lobK::..:

Since This Commission Came On The Site..The Justice Been Missin'
Lets Not Get "Technical" But This "Black Queen"' Has A Fucked Judicial System..lol*
^hehe, funny opener

So Listen "Mista"..Am I Suppose To Get Aroused..Cuz Ur Rec Is Outta The Clouds?
Na..U Dont Even Deserve Bows..Cuz "The Jury" Is Always Part Of A Crowd..lol
^lmao,nice shit

Are You A Vet?..Na U Aint..And That's Y You Aint Earnin Respect..
And How Is Homie A G..When He Get Hard Off Of Pictures Ova Da Net..
^rofl at 2nd line

You A Nerd Kid..So Wat If Im New..Cuz It's Wins Im Lurkin..
And This May Sound Disturbin'..But Ur Guilty Of Bein Whack..And That's The Verdict
^good closer

Tight battle, real creative punches and mad personals! Was feeling your flow, structure was dope and vocab was impeccable. Made me laugh here and there, nice read!

Dope battle from both of you!!!

This was feedback posted for MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
 

uppin..................
Tight battle, dont sleep.

O word...i thought you was going to vote mane!


oh well......uppin

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Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

iight...its like dis for me...

slobk best bar:
"So Listen "Mista"..Am I Suppose To Get Aroused..Cuz Ur Rec Is Outta The Clouds?
Na..U Dont Even Deserve Bows..Cuz "The Jury" Is Always Part Of A Crowd..lol"
^^^dis was a nice one...could have left tha lol out though...i think people get it...no hate but yeah

mista best bar:
"My punches put you in a choke hold make you see blue
I'll leave you bloody and eat you like sloppy joe's for food"
^^^it was iight but wasnt matchin his kid

good battle but its really like dis...i guess

structure: slobk
vocab: tie...lmao
punches: slobk

my vote=slobk
yall both stay up...~1~

hope i voted right...w/e...but if its any otha questions...PM me...iight
-Doe Bagz

This was feedback posted for MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
 

dis waz a good battle fo real $lobk came hard on his verse as well as my noi mista dis gon be a good battle ima nominate it n Rv award

^^^Coo..Thanks On That...Uppin..............................

Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

i'ma vote for ::..:$lobK::..: your punches jus kept comin homie... i liked the first rhyme the best, nice multi...mista yours was pretty good too but "man" and "name" doesn't rhyme...both of u had nice flow...but ::..:$lobK::..: 's punches and multi put him over the top for me

return the favor...link in my sig homies

Aiight coo, coo.....uppin.................................

Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

this goes to $lobk because of personals...MA...ur punches were aight...but they werent personals or as clever as $lobk...$lobk str8 murdered tha jury in this verse...and that personal about tha pics was fiya...

MA...try usin more personals...

punches: $lobk
personals: $lobk
metas: $lobk
wordplay: $lobk
flow: $lobk
structure: both

Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

Not a bad battle, Black Quen was sayin it was hot, so i thought i'd check up on it an dropp my vote

Slob, nice shit, real nice personals, maybe strecthed your lines a little bit, an could of removed some undeeded words, but other then that, ya came real strong, are you an alias?

Mistah, dope shit, only problem is where he was strecthing lines, in maybe 1 or 2 of your lines, they wernt strecthed enuff, an centering your verse like that looks wrong unless you can make it look like a box, ya feel me? i learnt the hardway too, had some creative stuff tho'...closer ws prety dope an almost got you the win, but Slob was more consistant throughout so he gets my vote

RTF