SenseR - Unpredictable...
 

this a hot track yo peep it and leave some feedback iight peace..1ne..

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/w...olume1music.htm

1ne,...

*listening*.. i like what ur doing with ur voice on this.. it fits with the beat real nice... the flow is nice pretty much the whole way through.. im not really feeling the beat but im still feeling this song.. its real nice... lyrics are coming pretty hard the whole way through.. chorus is real nice... ughh this song is pretty much just dope...

good looks on the feed back son..i appreciate it...but damn this shit gettin sleeped on big time...holla at cha boi peeps 1ne....

aiight im listenin

i guess your qualities aiight...you have a pop filter...

jea this is a dope mainstream song right here...this would be dope for the radio and shit.....jea this shit is hot fo sho....good flow.....and good lyrics of course...but i know you would come hot...shit...your senser...niggaz love ya here....word....Hot shit keep it up 8/10

uppin this for you.

iight coo good looks..1ne..

aiight, listening~good beat choice, this shit is hot....lol@ "senser muthafuckaaaaa" your trademark...nice flow on this track, good voice....dope so far...nice lyrics as well, wow, you killed this beat, i liked your voice fluctuations too, great job.1

I liked that song, :laugh: "bitch get in my car"

but yeah, you need a filter or somethin. but I like this outside the hissin, best song I've heard on here in a while. I'd like to hear it with better quality, and shit if you can do that I'll put it on my mixtape. let me kno, if you have the vocals I can fix them as well so pm me

jea its diff and i liked it, good shit fam
hiss's are the only thing i can hear that stand out, otherwise its dope
1

beat is coo

i like the delivery here...good

and voice fit the flow

nice 1

listenin...
beat is real dope
voice is hella nice!
lyrics were nice, sounds more commercial type
flow and delivrey is on point
mic presence is hott also
overall this ish is hott as fuck! haha

ohh this kanye shit..i coiuld have got this beat i didnt want it though.....ok lyrics are kinda simplistic but thats a good thing because niggas is stupid(i spit simple most of the time to0)....flow is pretty good feelin your delivery...u got a whisper thing goin on with your voice nahmean ive peeped one of your tracks before i feel your emotion could be upped just a little more but first verse was pretty cool homie... hook is aight...

2nd ohhhhhhhhhh lol homie i was about to say your flow wasnt as flunet as the first verse but then u went off homie lol... lines were str8 nahmean ...solid drop right here dawg props on work keep elevating doin u


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178661

aight fam lyrics were coo on this joint...delivery was pretty good...you actually remind me of this b-more cat thats tryna get his buz...flow was pretty good yea in the 2nd verse closer to the end you started spittin homey...quality is good...overall this was a good track...keep spittin fam...peace

damn this track got some real good feedback back..thx alot all of yall its very much appreciated and about the hissin man i wish i would of kept the session open but since i did this track super fast i mean super fast i aint really think to save any thin but its all hood na'mean..and im still uppin for this holla at cha boi 1ne...

checkin it now...

vocals/flow and dubs all fit perfect,chorus nice..feelin tha beat,radio kinda vibe goin here,lyrics is proly 8/10 from your usual but still nice

1ne

Commercial Booooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Anyways;)
Pretty Nice Lyrcially Good Nice Overall Here Wasnt Feeling The Beat Not Enough Hype In It Sun But You Handled It Well Nice Hook Too;)

yeh nice beat..............you rode the beat real good, but you didn't really say anything that makes you want to play it back. but your vox were on with the beat. I don't kno if I really feel the hook though. It was ok, wasn't real catchy like a hook should b, like that sing a long shit that dmx does, you could do shit like that not as aggressive, but you could do that sing a long rap if you wanted to. You have a good rap voice with a good beat and you rode the beat. I give it a B. I'm goin to check out more of your shit though tonite

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179543

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The beat was a loop so it explains why it somewhat blan...beat it was a beat if you were hyper couldn't made work....but the hook was way too laid back....the lyrics was ah'ight you had a couple good lines but was too generic..I was waiting for a punchline on a unique concept but you jus had good flips on old concepts...the track was cool...to the general public this would be great..whcih is what really matters but to people that really listen to rap it was subpar...not wack but just average.....I know u can do better...no hate jus realness............1

straight fire man. you switched your flow up alot within this song. thats what i like lately, im into that "switch flow every couple of bars" ish rite now. made it stand out, like stated before this beat wasnt the greatest but still not a bad beat at all and as long as you can work it its legitimate. def came with it, from the earlier songs i peeped by you to now i see a big elevation period comin, you already elevated alot in such a short amount of time. i showed my mans ur track with 20 grand and he never has nothing good to say about any of the net mc's i show him and he absolutely loooooved your shit so keep it poppin fresh pimpin. holla at me sometime to throw down some flame!

Yo Senser, peep this, I cleaned up the hisses, and I want to put this on my mixtape, is that cool?

http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...ID=2157476&q=hi

http://www.soundclick.com/util/Stre...ID=2157476&q=lo

good looks on the feedback Trip but yeah i know i can do better..but i stated i did this quick dig it wasnt anythin serious...just some shit i wanted to throw together for the hell of it...and yall its coo to place my track on your mixtape Pair a dyce 1ne...