.Grafh. vs Golden Shellz
 

Battle Rules:

8 - Lines
No Crew/hate/DR Votes
No Biting

my first battle in a month so lets see if i still got it...g'luck hommie

dont no-show

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Check in by: 02-27-05 at 05:44 PM

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Closed - Expired / old battle win

.Grafh. has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-05 04:52 PM.

C'mon dis kat like pinoceo,he RV tellin false tells
Only time you "golden" is when ya body catch gun "shellz"
Demostratin you a fag,ya weak,my punchlines like stones
While ya give more low blows unda da belt den Roy Jones
15-11?That should let da audience know ya wack,its clear
Why "Ima Free Agent Again" been in ya sig for almost a year
I do agree witcha on something,True G's Up but dat aint you
Im straight killin you,Get ready for ya record ta be 15-1-2....

itz suppose ta say inda first line he "in" RV telling false tells

Golden shellz has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-05 05:38 PM.

<center>Its hard bein a loser ask gutter shad he knows what its like
quit makin songs nigga get a battle and dust off ya mic
ambulance prolly wheel u away just like ya motor home
to strobe this "momma's boy" replies "i love you"like he was donell jones
Cool j reject making love songs now u noe he soft
its sad wen u got a computer for only rappin and beattin off
i bet hes always "hot at hand" just like handy cambells soup
u a outlaw not even pac would sign u to his group</center>

<center>donell jones that singers song was called u noe i love you
his two open mics are "u noe i love u" and "mommas boy"
cambells soup got this thing called soup at hand that keep ya soup hot...in ya hand</center>

Voted For: Golden shellz

Golden Shellz
structure is good.. flow is pretty nice.. no multis.. wordplay was close to average.. a few of your punches connected.. no good personals..

.Grafh.
structure is good.. flow is pretty good.. no multis.. you attempted wordplay.. but most of it was either played or just garbage.. for example, i know ive seen that Roy Jones line before.. you didnt have very many punches your shit was just random statements.. like, "ill make your record 15-1-2".. what does that have to do with anything punch related?.. you attempted a name play, but i can tell already it is MAD played..

Overall
.Grafh. attempted a personal.. doesnt really mean shit though cause it sucked.. both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. neither had multis.. Golden Shellz had better wordplay and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. Golden Shellz gets my vote..

VOTE - GOLDEN SHELLZ

Please hit up the link in my sig..

yeah ya seen that roy jones punch around cuz im da one sayin it around lol...

^ You either recycled that punch that you used on another site..

..Or ive seen it before from somebody else.

nope not another site....i said once or twice in cypher...

This was feedback posted for .Grafh.
 

that was a good line tho i like it no homo uppin this battle

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ayyo cmon now get them votes in here yall...................

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iight iight yalls lets git some votes in here,......

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wat the freakin hell get some votes in here.......

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This was feedback posted for Golden shellz
 

GS took this one in my opionin wit better wordplay, and better personals. No one didnt really have too many good punches in this one, so I couldnt look for that. Both structures was coo, but I think GS took this one easily.
grafh-yo verse was wack to me, i think you should elevate. not battlin in a month isnt an excuse. i felt like yo verse was beyond simple. I wasnt feelin it at all. no hate tho homie
overall-i think gs took this one because his verse didnt put me to sleep, and i seen better wordplay and personals in hsi verse.

v/golden shellz

Voted For: Golden shellz

good battle from both and it was close to call but here it is.

Grafh had a good verse from the start, Nice personal punch wiv good set up and nice metaphor use that hit hard. Then a nice second bar, good metaphor but i wasnt really feeling th punch too much. Third bar was real good, i loved the punch, good personal. Then the closer was cool aswel, ended it nicely. I thought it would be difficult to beat. Especially wiv the flow being real good, a nice read.

Golden Shellz had nice opener, good punch that hit nicely. Good metaphor in this and the second bar too that also worked really well, hard hitting there. "got a computer for only rappin and beatin off" -This was a dope line! Then the closer was dope too wiv a nice bit about hot at hand and campbells soup. That clinched the win for you man.

Well done to both

-shakes head-

lets get some votes iight--------