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pictureperfect2 vs Kesse
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate Votes etc... Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 02-27-05 at 11:58 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
pictureperfect2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-05 11:51 PM.
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Kesse has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-05 11:56 PM.
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Homey you done, everyone’s level’s beyond you son
That’s why we have to look backwards to see where your from Kesse can’t ever do audio… it’s the trueth but never hurts Cuz nothings beatin, I just hear boo’s accompany his verse Keep your lines they aint worth biting so, I never rob’em Not seein light at the end of your tunnel isn’t just a minor problem U fat fuck don’t fight me like im a fuckin riot This chubby bitch needs to learn im rapper and not a diet Ya you sad bitch, looking back only time I’d check your status You’ve showed ya crew lets in faggets, ya that’s the only thing established |
i look at this guy's name and wonder, whats so "perfect"
shit, with that many losses, all i can "picture" is a reject you couldnt make a dope verse, if you were smoking pure gold been here over a year.....winning, still dont have a secure hold been in 45 matches, and you have more losses than your age if i wrote down how many times you be KO'D...voters be clickin 'next page' i'll rip this guy apart, literally leave him picking up his bones and i dont need to worry, his rhymes more stoneage than the flinstones so let me give you some adive, just stop, quit while your ahead cause if your record gets any worse, this name should be but to bed |
^ should be a 'd' at the end there, pretty self-explanatory....wird
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Voted For: Kesse
eh alright battle thought that keese came harder with his punches.... alright multis and metas noth'n to special//PP2 alright drop not the greatest... keese took... opener closer punches personals metas structure vocab PP2 took structure overall my vote goes to keese on this one he jus came harder vote.//keese Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^wird, yeah, quick spit, didnt have much time, so, whatever, uppppin
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Voted For: pictureperfect2
ok you win, just my opinion ... KESS. shit was dope but since ive been here for a while so all of your personalas that played off the name where played...lol structre was better than pictures but it doent make up for all that non sense you posted...but very good for anewb...you just need to elevate on your punches.....other than that this shit was close but just that the name shit was played perfect.. good shit...for someo reason i really enjoyed reading your verse, shit flowed pretty good. your personals where also punches which was good. you had a lot less fillers than the other guy, your structure is what almost lost you this battle fix that and everything will be fine vote= picture Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Kesse
ok this battle was cool....better then some of the others i've read...... keese - u didnt have any multeis bu your shit flowed...and had good struct......and your punches were good there was played one...the flinstones line....but i like the ko'd so manytimes they have to click the next page shit that was tight..... pictureperfect - u had a ok verse too.....you had good multies...and it flowed good...and had good structer.....you didnt really have any good punches just average shit but still coo..... so this was hard to pick cause.....it was so close...but i have to give it to keese for the better punches...cause i'll always take punches over multies..... |
Voted For: Kesse
Kesse: look at this guy's name and wonder, whats so "perfect" shit, with that many losses, all i can "picture" is a reject could've been worded better, and I say this mainly because it didn't rhyme you couldnt make a dope verse, if you were smoking pure gold been here over a year.....winning, still dont have a secure hold decent personal been in 45 matches, and you have more losses than your age if i wrote down how many times you be KO'D...voters be clickin 'next page' another decent personal, but didn't hit very hard i'll rip this guy apart, literally leave him picking up his bones and i dont need to worry, his rhymes more stoneage than the flinstones blah, setup was good, 2nd line could've been worded better so let me give you some adive, just stop, quit while your ahead cause if your record gets any worse, this name should be but to be what in the world? pictureperfect2: Homey you done, everyone’s level’s beyond you son That’s why we have to look backwards to see where your from decent opener Kesse can’t ever do audio… it’s the trueth but never hurts Cuz nothings beatin, I just hear boo’s accompany his verse didn't hit hard, could've been worded better Keep your lines they aint worth biting so, I never rob’em Not seein light at the end of your tunnel isn’t just a minor problem weak U fat fuck don’t fight me like im a fuckin riot This chubby bitch needs to learn im rapper and not a diet ok, well this isn't a weight-loss forum... Ya you sad bitch, looking back only time I’d check your status You’ve showed ya crew lets in faggets, ya that’s the only thing established decent personal, decent closer overall Winner: Kesse, but neither of your drops were that good. You 2 know that this was honest, so there's not much need for me to explain this anymore. |
^ werd, it twas a perdy shitty drop, i made alot of spellin errors :(.......thanks for input, but upppin fo mo feed
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Voted For: pictureperfect2
Kesse structure is good.. flow is good for the most part.. what is up with your rhyme scheme?.. perfect and reject dont rhyme.. ahead and but to be dont rhyme.. no multis.. attempted wordplay, but most of it was played.. maybe one of your punches connected.. no good personals.. pictureperfect2 structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay is decent.. some of your punches connected.. your closer was tight as hell.. that was a good personal.. Overall both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. neither had multis.. pictureperfect2 had the better rhyme scheme.. better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. pictureperfect2 gets my vote.. VOTE - PICTUREPERFECT2 |
Voted For: Kesse
even tho u aint rhyme at times....4 some reason i was feelin ur verse more....the punches you had hit harder than pictures.....the next page line waz nice.....good battle picture....ive seen u come better than this.....add some understandibility(makin up words) because we wont know what your talkin about unless we saw him before...you were talkin about his appearence when the voters may have not seen him...but vote goes to kesse 1 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Kesse
V/Kesse....this was a close battle but kesse...gets my vote his verse had consistent punchs an sum personals wit good structure...picture u had a good verse in some areas but u lacked consistent diss's.....RETURN THE FAVOR Opener=kesse closer=Kesse structure=tie punchs=kesse personals=kesse overall=kesse Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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