Lyriclesolja vs EyeDEA
 

Battle Rules:

2 lines.......lol
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-03-05 at 05:25 AM

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Lyriclesolja has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-28-05 05:25 AM.

xcept it hoe..........................................

yo with his battle wit X-Cell he was wack as hell and obcessed with fluids he gay,
"drop of genious" from my penis now hes taken to the cleanas folded and put away.

ok im bout to acept this shit.....................................

its one bar hurry up wit ya slow ass...................

EyeDEA has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-28-05 05:53 AM.

Lyriclesolja, wtf this kid spelt his OWN fucking name wrong. fucking HERb as newb

this nigga so dumb, he bout to get lost in the midst as the night~grows~darker
gotta spit accapella, becuase he falls off his lines more then tight~rope~walkers

yo
this nigga got a accapella song in his sig...lol wtf...

OK structure was kinda off becuase of the way i put it .....sorry upping for voters

Voted For: EyeDEA

okay obviously eyedea took this battle..the ending to both lines was good..da last line(2nd line) was kinda funny....solja....u tried to put to much into ur bar and it sounded kind of stretched....
vote/eyedea

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Voted For: EyeDEA

eye you took this one this was a super short battle .. you packed more of a punch. in ya lines i thought. can't really critque shit like this but i thought you had the better meta as well as the better vocab

ls. your line was well intresting ... leave your penis out of your rhymes from now on ... thanks/// but otherwise i didnt see any really hard punches...


vote//EyeDEA

return the favor and drop a honest vote links in the sig

Voted For: Lyriclesolja

this was a wack battle here...both drops were...weak

but...to me here, lyricle took this one...just came harder
than eyedea's...and the way he set it up was better here
not makin it mad-stretched like eyedea's...

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Voted For: Lyriclesolja


LyricleSolja
Pretty Decent Man, You Be Elevating Home Boy, Nice Multi's In Here, Used Em' Well, Punches Both Lines Was Clear, Decent Man, You Was On This Battle, But Yo Try And Up Your Vocabulary Man

EyeDea
Alright You Had An Alright Peace As Well Man, Nice Punches 0 Multi's But Cool You Also Had To Up Your Vocabulary, But You Had A Good Rhyme Scheme, Try And Add Some Wordplay Here

Vote-Lyricle

P.S. That Vote Was Explained Coz There's Only Two Lines Not Much To Say But If You Think Other Wise Report It To Strobe, And You Both Will Have A DQ, Trust Bin There Done That

^^^fuckling dumb.......did you read it

both of my lines where multies,,,
lol
and they both where metaphorical
stupid fuck...........

uppppppppiinnnn this shit....

my shit was dope yo i had personals metapheos and punches in my fcuking bar

Voted For: EyeDEA

EyeDea gets my voted...his flow was good and had a good personal...nice multi, too

Lyriclesolja ..urs was hard to follow cuz the flow wasn't very good, also, u rhymed "away" with "gay", which wouldnt be a problem if the battle was more than two lines...in a 2 line battle i think u gotta have sumthin a lil more complex

Return the favor...hit the link in my sig

Voted For: Lyriclesolja

give it to lyriclesolja...atx stand up...

no need ta explain since it was just a bar....

and eyedea lines were stretched but he he cut both lines ta make it seem like they were'nt...werd...

Voted For: EyeDEA

i gonna have to give it to eyedea becuase he had better word play but still its kinda wack

and the other guy had played ass penis lines...lol

my vote =eyedea

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xcept it hoe..........................................

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Voted For: Lyriclesolja

v/lyric
thought your first line was forced and the needless
fillers wern't needed you had a decent flow and a good ender
i did not vote for idea because that punch was weak.

Voted For: EyeDEA

well its good to see a short battle, umm eyedea got this one becase of that tightrope walker line the first line seemed forced but the second made up for it
solja you was aigth but your lines where strechted my vote is for eyedea