MjGrEeN vs Da_Throwdest
 

Battle Rules:

3-4 Barz
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-03-05 at 05:10 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

MjGrEeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-28-05 05:11 PM.

This bitch is slow, verse finished...before he even wrote his 'name'
Your lyrics is like your name..unheard,the same as your 'RV Fame'
You pray twice a day...begging for a better 'vocab'
Your skill is like your balls.....too small to 'grab'/

Its funny that you found the guts.....to challenge me,
Your skill is 'padlocked'...and you cant find the 'key'
Your a football, round white and low to the 'floor'
Your skills need pills....you should go take some 'more'/

I fucked your girl...while you was out.....'tryin ta spit'
She moaned that i was much better...than her previous 'shit'
We fucked in your bed, she gave head, sucked, then 'said'
"Ma bo's flow is so low hes always 'dis-respect-ed'/

I already won this battle...your the defeated 'fighter'
Verses see bite marks...and your a serial 'Biter'
Your a wanted cheater, rappers want you shot
Your lyrics are shitty....even worse than 'J-Dot'

Da_Throwdest has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-28-05 05:25 PM.

he claims illness, yet this homo's soft as "Sherbet"
bomb ya whole fuckin' town & commit "Mass-Murder"

suppose 2 b a vet but no shows in ur battles..? What a Clown..!
Bitch, i've just began "Wreck-An-Ise" like i was D-Lo Brown

hit u with hooks from every angle, right...left collisions
watch me make an example out of "MjGreen" like dictionary definitions

..& u a grown fuckin' man?? Bitch, u a kid please..!
cuz Jez, it ain't hard 2 c that "Fran's-A-Sis" like Steve

This ones in the bag for sho...good try tho but ur rec is good and i expected more..no offense

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Voted For: Da_Throwdest

easily took this...mjgreen how are you gonna set da rules and then break um on the 3-4 bars thing???it dont matter throw ripped you.....your verse waz too basic you need to work on your vocab a lil more.....
da_throwdest you had nice vocab nice structure punches were hittin good......mj you had a decent structure too

Voted For: MjGrEeN

okay...dis battle was alrite no creativity from really from nun of u

opener-mj good opener kind of a personal and multi...throw u forced dat bar da ryhme so dat made it weak

structure-throw stop seperatin ya lines fukks up ya flow

punchlines-mj took dis 1 he had a couple of em nothin spectacular...an throw i wasn't feelin nun of ur's

creativity-nun from u both

personals-nun from u both...

finisher-wasn't really feelin nun but mj's was betta...throw whut da fuk did u mean by dat line

enjoyed-mj i think he was consistant threw out dis whole battle...thorw work on ya shit fam get creative and stop forcin shit 2 ryhme


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Voted For: MjGrEeN

soft as sherbert????
that is uhmmm.....forced, an uncreative, an i dont like your whole structure of 2 bars, then a space, it dosent flow at all, its like your trynna tell jokes an not rhyme, so no Throwdest, ya dont get this battle, be more witty in your rhymes, an structure it ALOT Better, an you'll be alright

MJ, Ya flow was alright, few decent personals, wasnt feelin that J-Dot line, but other then that, it was pretty nice, not the best by any means, but enough ta get u my vote

return the fave

Peace

Yeh i'm still kinda new with this....still learning...text is harder than audio....i may do audio soon...i found tha Kingz thing funny that Hotshot is 15 and the pic shows him and his description says 6 foot..no way hes baby faced as well lol

fucc dat bullshit cuz they sum hataz neway but still uppin 4 sum unbiased votes

So you think your vgerse is better than mine, mine was consistent,ur didn't even rhyme on sum bits...sorry to spoil ur record mayn

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Voted For: Da_Throwdest

I think overall this was not the best battle i have seen on this site but Da_throwdest won this with more creativity in his punches and hir verse ...

MJGREEn i wasnt feeling your structure or your lack of vocabulary in your punches you need to find your niche and elevate a littlemore withyour punches and also creativeness

Vote - Da_Throwdest

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3-4 bars eh....doesnt look like it to me..........

Voted For: Da_Throwdest

yo imma give you this dawg cuz you wrecked him with less words
opener da
multies da
hits da
structure da closer da

nice shit man

yo mj try rapping about something that offends him i bet you have never even met his bitch if he has one any way your fucking stupid for writing that shit

Voted For: MjGrEeN

ok i'm gonna have to say that that MJ green had this...cuz it actually looked like he wrote it

Uppin 4 votes.................honest votes.......will return the favour.

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both yall niggaz suck but...

i'll give it to dis bitch cuz he was a tad bit better

all ya'll niggaz need to work on ur game cuz ya'll WHACK AS HELL DAMN YALL BITHCES SUCK ASS

Voted For: Da_Throwdest

alright, kinda one sided.....

Green, you had some alright punches, but where's the creativity man? you had like one nice bar, and that was the life he don't have one line. You need to work on being more creaitve. your structure, and flow is on point though.

Throw, I've seen you come harder, but you used more creativity, meaning more metaphors, and more thought out punches. You did a good job in this battle, with the flow, and the structure, overall a good drop. No hate to either.

Throw please return an honest vote in my battle. THanks

Voted For: Da_Throwdest

MJ GREEN:
man no hate but i think you didnt try here iv'e seen so much better from you...you didnt have any good vocab here it lacked creativity a bit there was a few good metaphores but nothing so creative you know i just felt it lacked that..but you did have a good stucutre and flow thats good...no hate man

Da_Throwdest
that was pretty good man you elevated alot your vocab was alot bettter then shadows and your stucture and flow is alot better now..the creativty and metas were there seen alot of imagery there was very good verse from you i shoulda been looking alot mroe cause your gettin better...damn good job...

opener: Throw
closer: Throw
metas: Throw
Imagery: Throw
flow: Throw
structure: Throw
creativty: Throw
win/ Da_Throw

Voted For: Da_Throwdest

Mj Green-- I think your grammar is horrible... No hate at all, ... all that shit adds up, and gets real irritating to have to re-write in my head... I think you had a good path on this topic too, but your writing mis-cues really take alot away from your verse....

Throw- Not bad at all, I kind of expected a little bit more fluidity to your verse- but the story and rhymes flowed well enough I think to win you this... your verse really reminded me of being a teen-ager for some reason... good shit... Vote Da_Throwdest.