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Lord.Wun 02-28-05 06:50 PM

Lord.Wun vs judicial
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 02-28-05 at 07:20 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

System 02-28-05 06:58 PM

Judicial has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-28-05 06:58 PM.

.Judicial. 02-28-05 07:11 PM

i told dis man 10 minutes to check 10 minutes to post...he gave his self all dist time to write his verse...its all good tho.i keyed this in like 5 mins he took da whole time limit to do his....straight ho

he tried escapin this lyrical-assasination
kids wack,aint came hard since masturbating
feel bad for dis ho cuz u bout to get hored son
beginnin of time,was da last time dat lord.wun
you losin is a re-proven conclusion
causin confusion when ur punches aint bruisin

System 02-28-05 07:12 PM

Lord.Wun has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-28-05 07:12 PM.

Lord.Wun 02-28-05 07:13 PM

Kids Wack "Just Under Decent" The Icial Committed Suicide..
Must Be Infected With Blizzardz, Cause Wen it comes to openin albumz,
.................................Your Cd Alwayz Stayz Inside..
"Leagues leader" of Welfare league, no wonder Dude Gets Cheap Wins
spit sick Linez If he sucked Hiv infested dicks And shat on His G-string
But It's a wrap...Thats what he said when the fat Gay dude Came
Used To Be Straight Nice..Now His parents look at this dike in shame

.Judicial. 02-28-05 07:33 PM

good shit lord.wun.......uppin for some votes yall...we did a quick battle so we expect some quick votes

.Judicial. 03-01-05 06:15 AM

uppin dis battle........honest votes will be returned with honest votes

.Judicial. 03-01-05 09:30 PM

Uppin Dis Muh Fuckin Battle...............................

.Judicial. 03-02-05 04:53 PM

up upp uppin dis battle yall...............................

DoContinue 03-02-05 08:56 PM

Voted For: Judicial

judicial got this battle...
lord wun's verse was horribly bad... it made no sense. I mean, it was just nasty. if you rappin about shittin on a G string? thats not rap, thats crap... Judicial had a personal and some straight rhymin... that won this battle for him. no hate. Lord wun, i've seen better from you.
i liked the lord wun personal

....Gone.... 03-02-05 09:43 PM

This was feedback posted for Judicial
 
checking the polls.......................................

.Judicial. 03-02-05 10:26 PM

thanks for da votes....keep em comin tho....drop a link if u want the vote honestly returned

Lord.Wun 03-03-05 08:04 AM

docontinue you fuckin herb its wordplay....dawg you shouldnt be rapping if you cant understand wordplay.....

Linguistics 03-03-05 05:56 PM

Voted For: Judicial

this was a short battle not much to say........

lord.wun...even though i guess we got beef...dont know how though this my honest opinion.....i think judical won this because he had 2 better punches and pretty good multies in that last line....and i think lord.wun is getting better wit his structer....your punches just dont hi for real and so to me judical takes this....no hate tho....

v/judical

Lord.Wun 03-03-05 06:00 PM

omg if you think i lost this.....if i lose i quit this fuckin site....

Red Stroke 03-03-05 06:36 PM

Voted For: Judicial


Alright Pretty Decen By Both, In Structure Lord Wun Had This But Punched Judicial Took This Man
Structre-Judicial
Punches-Judicial
Personals-Lord.Wun
Over All Both Had A Good Verse By Judicial Took This One No Questions Asked He Came Harder On Everything Except For Personals, Which Isn't That much Compared To Punches, Weerd, Nuff Said Return The Favor Me Vs Buck In My Sig I'm Up 2-0

Kyleon 03-03-05 08:41 PM

Voted For: Judicial

ima give it ta jud since his shit was more clearier on what his whole concept was...coo structure on juds side..flow was on point both sides...vocab was nicely used here in this battle..wordplay was lackin like no other....this was some good ish on da reall

v/Judicial

.Judicial. 03-03-05 09:25 PM

thanks thanks.....uppin for 1 more vote yall.....tryin 2 get this ko and closed out

Germ 03-03-05 10:26 PM

Voted For: Judicial

what an easy vote...........

lord wun.........shit man, almost all your punches were played, your gay punches werent funny, and your opener was totally wack and poorly structured....shit flowed horribly, and you made all the voters choices easy...

judicial, shit was that special either, but still solid enough, like the opener, second bar was good....finisher was the weakest line, flow was off and poor structure, but still, you beat this guy by far

v/judicial....for harder punchers, better flow, more creativity, complexity, not having played shit, everything was better,


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