riddlemethat vs .Evolution.
 

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6 lines min
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-03-05 at 07:38 PM

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riddlemethat has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-28-05 07:39 PM.

.Evolution. has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-28-05 07:41 PM.

The bitchass kid said he was good...shit..you can hardly rap
Riddle me what?..Cuz your name speaks for itself...
...........................................we already know your wack
Compare my other punches to yours....looks like you came worst
I mean...
...since I new you was wack..didnt noticed you posted your verse
Don't worry..I was a newb back in '04 just like you too
But by the looks of your other battles...
.........................................glad I wasn't as wack as you

Key'd

dont get it? dont vote then...

Come at me dog, my decks bin dealt all there is to deal//
Quit thinkin you complex cos I'll have you seein shit fo real//

I see the way you walk bitch, ya got a stutter in ya stride//
One leg swing lower than the other, can't walk in straight lines//

You the Will Hung of rap, and the midgit of basketball//
The arthritis of athletics and the wart of genitals//

I stand proud over the shell you call a body its funny//
Prone to insult and more timmid than a Granny's fanny//

I can flip spit any style of shit I wanna rap for fun//
I withstand ya blows, they light as feathers an ya done//

Uppin for some votes

Uppin for votes people!!!
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Voted For: .Evolution.

yo Evolution took this. I'm out pc niggas........................
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lol j/p but yea, I think Ev took this. First nigga, riddle, your shit was aiight. I jus don't think you hit hard as you could. And yo flow was off and wasn't feelin' yo structure as much. You had some decent lines thou. keep dropping and you''ll get it soon my lil nigga.

Ev, you came aiight. Your punches were a lil better than his. They were jus aiight tho. Nice flow to your shit too. Your strucutes was aiight too. But overall i liked the punches much better so you got my vote.

pc out my niggas, I need to go feed my 2 yr old daughter, and 16 yr old wife J... pc

uppin this battle

Voted For: .Evolution.

Damn
a'right
Evo took this

Riddle:
I dont like how u seperate your bars like that
ya had some good ideas tho, ya just worded them incorrectly, main thing for you is ta work on structuring your flows better, an you'll be a'right, just keep elevating

Evo:
some dope shit homie, the closer wasnt witty or nothin, but there was just a general flow too it, an it hit hard, ya whole verse was nothin special, but it just flowed real well an u definately got the win

RTF YO

Peace out

Voted For: riddlemethat

riddle took this on imo......he had da harder punches in dis battle.....he had the structure down....you dont need to do these things // we all can figure out where ya bars end and shit we know all dat.....he had sum nice vocab n shit thrown up in there
evolution i can tell u gots skill u shouldnt have keyed dis one....ur structure was fucked...toward da end ya lines were kinda stretched.but dis waz good both need a lil work tho..........
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...002446&posted=1

^^me vs mistauthentiq 1-1....

er? harder punches? nigga u dont kno what a punch is..

fuck outta hea wit that wack vote...wackass nig

Yo, RTF DAMNIT......
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

^i will later on tho...

Voted For: .Evolution.

meh, nothing special.....heres how i see it

evolution....you had the better punches in this one, harder ones at that, but still they were weak, and you used "whack" in all of them, you established that he was whack in the first punch, move onto a different personal, and your structure is a little stupid, keep it consistent.....flow was nice, had that on....wordplay and vocab needs to elevate, still pretty "whack", alot of shit coulda been worded better for more efficiency........but overall, you stayed consistent with insulting him, and your punches were better.....but dont get all excited cause you still need to elevate

riddlemethat....you need alot of work, no offense, but your punches/personals are very weak, i would suggest reading the tutorials, cause your punches aren't really specific, in your case, your merely just stating random things, not really dissin' your opponent, so you need to work on getting the hang of punches/personals......but on a high note, you did have good flow, structure was decent (i'd lose the slashes after every line though) and your vocab was decent.....so, keep elevating man

v/evolution

uppin this shit

Uppin this battle.
Yo evo. Why hate votes against u?
I'm takin what I've bin dealt.
Keep them comin people.

Voted For: riddlemethat

riddlemethat- decent drop your gonna get this one because i didnt get fuck'n lost half way through your rhyme... i'll explain in his// but yea up your vocab .. but i thought u had some half decent lines .. by far the funniest one was.."You the Will Hung of rap, and the midgit of basketball//
The arthritis of athletics and the wart of genitals//" that shit made me laugh o yea take off the //"<-- at the end its pointless

7/10

evo.. damn man your structure was all over the place haha.keep it simple. your things didnt match .. i read it twice. and i understood your punches but damn man loosen up on the structue.. over all though your comp had harder punches and personals thats why he is gett'n my vote.. i did like your opener though

vote..//riddlemethat

rtf its in the sig

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uppin this for votes
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o yea forgot to say the link is in my sig ...honest votes only pl

uppin this piece

Voted For: .Evolution.

.Evolution. - Good spit you had a good flow, and some good wordplay with alright punches.
6/10

riddlemethat - Your shit was just rappin' to real punch lines or wordplay, some shit didnt rhyme, work on it.
4/10

RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=179781

uppin this battle

Uppin this battle people!
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Voted For: .Evolution.

wow this was one sided... good job evolution.. u came nice punches.. flow was nice the whole way thru... your structure could use some work.. but the punches and flow is what gave u this battle... some nice personals in there too.. good job evolution gets the vote.. pz..