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A.K. NightFall vs .Grafh.
Battle Rules:
8 - Lines No Crew/hate/DR Votes No Recycling No Biting g'luck nOObe....:thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 400 Check in by: 03-01-05 at 10:50 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
A.K. Nightfall has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-28-05 10:59 PM.
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yo im the monster in ya closet and the boogie man under yur bed..
your so scared of me u pull the barbie plankets up over yur head.. this nigga acts rough but we all know hes a fake... he thinks hes tough cuz he packs a glock but u miss 100% of the shot u dont take.... bitch ill knock u off the the "gragh" so fast... ull go runnin when u count the death toll of my killing spree and blood bath, rath... i take no mercy in killin and the look in a bitches eye... ill put the barrell to your head and ask one question, are u ready to die...? |
.Grafh. has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-28-05 11:16 PM.
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I dont know if ya fully understand,ill "throw"in some"punches"
This fatazz got motivated ta lose weight but stop after 2crunches Ya da kind ta buy wal-mart t-shirts and rock da "price-tag" New ta RV,i see that you didnt read da welcome sign,"no fags" Talk is cheap,ya flow is garbage,da style ya have is only for men Also Known for suckin dick ova night,and den back to it at 10(am) GayPerson:From da look of things,I predict after dis ya career will fall AKNightfall:It wont be that bad,atleast ill still have yall....... ........(directed towards da gay person)lol |
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Voted For: .Grafh.
nuttin much to dis battle but you take it....your first 2 bars were decent....u kind of slacked off after that....ak u kind of slacked the whole time.....all this gansta blow ya brainz out shit dont work on the net yo take dat into consideration in yalls next battle n shit.......good shit from both keep elevating 1 |
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yo AKA why ya aint uppin dis ish hommie....
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i dont know whut uppin is man im a newbie haha........
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uppin is when you post on this battle...by sayin UPPIN so katz can vote but if you dont up this it will be forgotten
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i dropped a vote on your battle can u drop a vote on mine????im winnin 1-0......but its gettin slept on please vote |
oh shit i diddnt know that.....fuck ight ill start uppin....
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This was feedback posted for .Grafh.
you murked this kid, damn
ok i will honestly own both of you guys but here graf you win, you had better structure wich automaitcally made you win,laso you had some punches, no metaphores tho, but decent verse, both of you need to elevate alot, also work on your personals, you could have worded alot of them better to make them harder hitting.. AK, ok your just plain out wack, go elavte and stick to new poelpe hwo have just joined the site...and also work on your structure, that will help you out alot in all areas....all in all your wack vote=graf well you stupid fucks made it 400 post so i will just leave feedback and RTF on anyone of my battles |
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This was feedback posted for A.K. Nightfall
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^^damn why yea check pollz..i coulda told ya how it look....uppin for votes
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Voted For: .Grafh.
.grafh. you took this one easy.. your opener and closer were alot better than his.. i liked ur vocab. and alot of your wordplay there were no lines i really wasnt feel'n it had a good flow. and your metas and personals werent all that bad 6/10 aka nightfall... wow you need alot of work.. your whole structure was off. your vocab wasnt all that good either.. your punches were weak.. my suggestion go and read battles and looks for help in the tutorial threads no hate jus elevate Vote//.grafh. rtf links in the sig... honest votes only please |
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Voted For: .Grafh.
this wasnt a very good battle put grafh got my vote cause he had the punches that actually hit flow wasnt that good structre was good yo man sayin some ones gay isnt original anymore never really was an ight verse best line-Ya da kind ta buy wal-mart t-shirts and rock da "price-tag" New ta RV,i see that you didnt read da welcome sign,"no fags" 5.5/10 please return the favor in my batle in my sig peace |
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