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Dirty Nigga 03-01-05 10:53 AM

Punk 101.....
 
Nigga wanna do some 50 cent shit an mention my name, Then i'ma do it right back..........

Hook:
I'ma Teach you how ta Punk, Son
This bitch plottin n schemin, merkin me? HA! must be Dreamin
I'll teach 'em how ta Punk, Son
I got that Nine, but this about some Rhymes
You bout ta get PUNKED, SON!

Vrese:
Nigga talkin bout Phoney Queens, when he Repp that Place
Only ''Wrap'' he got is the Mic cord tied round His Face!
Air out this Disgrace, with a Mac-Philly, G
Bitch is on welfare with Dis-Ability (This ability)
Mention my name cause i PUNKED His Leader
Think they ''Established'' when this site Dont Need-Ya
You bring a Hot Torch?, i Got Flame Throwers
Why all the Hate Dogg?...You fuckin Owe-Us
I said ya Name, now you got some RV Fame
You was Lame, Now ya dope? or so you Claim...
But i'm the one ta Blame? Naw, just a Mutual Enemy...
Stock up on ya ''Redbull'' faggots, ya gon' need the Energy
I dump Shots, an Punk fake Pacs.....
Expose you as a Wankster for trynna Buck.Shots....
Test ya skills on Hot-or-Not, an Bitches be Like Ewww
I'ma ''NOK you OFF'' Whenever i Come Thru
Nothin you can Do, just sit back n watch the Master..
Cause i got Toys for You Boys......
......That'll have you runnin too a Pastor
You gon Blast-Huh? with What? a Cap-Gun?
Redbull got you ta diss cause he dont want no ACTION
On a Battle site an Dosent Even Rhyme............
Claims he's Retired, but thats just a Sign.....
He dont want shit from me or Any of the Kings..
We bout too NOK You out in Pairs like Siameise Twins!(not sure the correct spellin)
Marv before you talk, You best Think
Before you could even walk, Ya momma dressed u in Pink!
Couldnt tell you from a Bitch, but its an Easy Mistake.....
So call my black ass ''Director'' cause of all the ''Shots i TAKE''
Slang Hammers ta Break your Piggy bank....
....Steal ya Jewels
Even the Fuckin A-Team ''pitty you FOOLS!''

Adam 03-01-05 10:59 AM

^ Bad structure... Flow was eh... Vocab was pretty played, and the punches weren't that hard really. Elevate... 5.5/10

Dirty Nigga 03-01-05 11:01 AM

Hahahah
There was nio PUNCHES
Its all Personals, an real one's.....Somthin marv didnt have, structure wasnt off neither, an uhm, Your ARE OWNED Once again :D

you didnt even read it, did you?
you only posted in Marvs Piggy Bank 2 minutes ago, your either the fastest reader, or mad because once again i clowned you

Adam 03-01-05 11:02 AM

^ It wasn't that long...considering your lines are like 5 words each...and a personal is basically the same thing as a punch moron. It's not like I'm breaking down a battle, I'm just typing fastly what I thought about your wack open mic.

Adam 03-01-05 11:03 AM

If there is no punches...why do you dump shots?

I dump Shots, an Punk fake Pacs.....
Expose you as a Wankster for trynna Buck.Shots....

^ Terrible structure by the way...the flow is terrible...count your sylabols...way off bitch... you're wack.

Dirty Nigga 03-01-05 11:05 AM

LOL ^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Okay then, whatever you say kiddo......

''Stay out of my thread'' blah blah blah

Rhyme, or get off the site, you come here everyday ta hate on me, WHAT DOES THAT SAY FOR YOU?

Dirty Nigga 03-01-05 11:06 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Red Bull
If there is no punches...why do you dump shots?

I dump Shots, an Punk fake Pacs.....
Expose you as a Wankster for trynna Buck.Shots....

^ Terrible structure by the way...the flow is terrible...count your sylabols...way off bitch... you're wack.

DO you ever know what ''Dump'' means?

Adam 03-01-05 11:08 AM

^ I don't come here to hate on you. I spit open mics when I'm in a good mood, just chillin on RV till I get my audio up. Because real emcees don't use a keyboard to rap, and ones with over 40 losses are truely wack. I also run probably in the top 3 of best crews on the site... I'm just trying to help you elevate...simply because you are wack as fuck...Man you live on rapverse...your always fucking online...its ridculous.

Dirty Nigga 03-01-05 11:15 AM

^^^^^^
You was here before me today, an i'm leaving in 10 minutes
You was here last night
an yesterday
an the day an night before that
an the day an night before that
...............how you gonna hate for me being here when your here more than me AN YOU DONT EVEN RAP
Your gonna do audio? hahahah, that will be fun, you realize you actually have too FLOW, an not talk tho? RIGHT lmaooooooooooooo

Me? whack? an yours is the top 3 crew? okay, Council, the TOP CREW, They want me, so uhm, sure am whack..............? hahahah, you talk so much an your not gonna say, ''Yeah your alright''...because i diss you constantly an i won you, not much more i need ta say on the matter, Ho

AN WHO WASNT HERE FOR 2 MONTHS? You were here an you still only have 16 battles, i battled more than you in 1 week than you have your whole time being here, you fuckin sick, now unles YOU GOT LYRICS FOR ME, I dont wanna see nothing, all you ever fuckin do is TALK, At least Marv had the guts ta actually use Lyrics, you dont bring nothin, 1 open mic that takes at least 2 days too drop?????
that is fuckin Horrible, i flowed off the dome just now, I RESPONDED STRAIGHT AWAY Too Marvs verse, so i guess as well, i'm not a real emcee because I TEXT, Best go hate on the text heads in your crew too huh, an 40 losses, 19 of them are dq'z, an i battle everybody on the site, name one nice emcee you have beaten with 5 votes an not a DQ?

Dirty Nigga 03-01-05 11:42 AM

Uppin.............

Ma$fit 03-01-05 11:59 AM

owned...case closed
-Doe Bagz

NOK still on top wit tha OM's...4real

~Tony Green~ 03-01-05 02:02 PM

Once again Buck kills and Establishbitch member!

Mentor 03-01-05 04:45 PM

yo..that was some hot shit, ya had all punchlines and good shots at establishment and flow was on for the most part some of it fell off but just for dissin' establshment straight up 10/10....besides that i'd give it a 8/10

Adam 03-01-05 04:55 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Buck.Shot
^^^^^^
You was here before me today, an i'm leaving in 10 minutes
You was here last night
an yesterday
an the day an night before that
an the day an night before that
...............how you gonna hate for me being here when your here more than me AN YOU DONT EVEN RAP
Your gonna do audio? hahahah, that will be fun, you realize you actually have too FLOW, an not talk tho? RIGHT lmaooooooooooooo

Me? whack? an yours is the top 3 crew? okay, Council, the TOP CREW, They want me, so uhm, sure am whack..............? hahahah, you talk so much an your not gonna say, ''Yeah your alright''...because i diss you constantly an i won you, not much more i need ta say on the matter, Ho

AN WHO WASNT HERE FOR 2 MONTHS? You were here an you still only have 16 battles, i battled more than you in 1 week than you have your whole time being here, you fuckin sick, now unles YOU GOT LYRICS FOR ME, I dont wanna see nothing, all you ever fuckin do is TALK, At least Marv had the guts ta actually use Lyrics, you dont bring nothin, 1 open mic that takes at least 2 days too drop?????
that is fuckin Horrible, i flowed off the dome just now, I RESPONDED STRAIGHT AWAY Too Marvs verse, so i guess as well, i'm not a real emcee because I TEXT, Best go hate on the text heads in your crew too huh, an 40 losses, 19 of them are dq'z, an i battle everybody on the site, name one nice emcee you have beaten with 5 votes an not a DQ?


I wasn't here from september to january dumbfuck...in the last month i did my 6 last battles, your a fucking moron. who gives a fuck if the council wants you, they pm'd my alias asking me to join...i was also in council before...and CS owns the council....NOK is wack, just like you.

~Tony Green~ 03-01-05 04:59 PM

Tony Green says FUCK YOU!

Dirty Nigga 03-01-05 06:47 PM

apprciate the feed y'all, uppin this....

Dirty Nigga 03-02-05 07:43 AM

Uppin this..................

H!T-sT!Ck 03-02-05 07:47 AM

yo delete some private messages......damn.... 6/10 i ve seen u do better .........punches werent as good as they could of been.....good personals and name n word play.........

Dirty Nigga 03-02-05 08:01 AM

yEAH, THANKS, I WROTE THIS IN LIKE 10 MINYTES, JUST A QUICK REPLY TOO MARVS PIGGY BANKS DISS, AN I DELETED ALL MY PM'S, THANKS FOR THE FEED THO'...APPRECIATED

UPPIN Y'ALL

T-Dot 03-02-05 08:35 AM

yo, I set up another battle.. so go check in.

MackMilli 03-02-05 08:48 AM

I know how they want me to structure my feedback but I don't have time to waste sayin' what everybody else said. As a diss, that was mediocre at best. Like you said yourself "No punches". Personals and punches go hand in hand but they're not the same ish, you should've made some hard punches off of the personal information you have on them, you woulda blew the tops off some niggas if you had done that. I highly doubt you wrote that in 10 mins unless you're a fast thinkin' fast typin' S.O.B....but for even a lil quicky is still mediocre. 5/10

Dirty Nigga 03-02-05 09:04 AM

your either an Alias or youu didnt understand the personals, because there is no way you knew what i was talking about in any of the lines at all, but yes i did write that in like 10 minutes, i drop 12 line battles in 6 minutes, i just rhyme, i dont think up my stuff, an this was a quick reply too Mrv Jays piggybanks, maybe if you read that you'll understand some of the lines a little better, but my guess is you may be an alias, but thanks for the feed, i'd drop a feed on your stuff, but frankly i cant be botherd, no hate, just newbs open mics are not high on my egenda, but thanx anyway

Peace


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