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Hotshh! vs .Grafh.
Battle Rules:
10-14 Lines No Crew/hate/DR Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 800 Check in by: 03-04-05 at 09:15 PM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired / old battle win |
.Grafh. has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-01-05 09:48 PM.
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On da real,ya wack so really ya cant fukk wit me
Onlyway ya beatin me,is if ya used my "verse"against"me" Rv tired of ya,since ya recylce more lines den smarterchild Ya da gaytype ta press pause on b-rabbits ass on 8mile Ta be serious,ill give ya my lyrics so ya can really be "hotsh"it Even then,drops i spit,gonna have ya walk around wit a safetykit Ta play safe kid,im puttin out da "hotflame"my punches started Want another win,i suggest ya keep votin fo'self like spul did Da way i drop iLL lines on ya hommie,call "da medicine man" You da kind of nigka ta swim in da ocean,when every1 tans He aint "hot"keep it a "secret",and stay callin ya self "hotshh" Mattafact,wheres mc firetruck?so he can put out dis fag ish And im not tryin ta talk trash and get off da subject But you just another reject,who loves ta ride on plenty of dick |
hotshh! has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-04-05 07:45 PM.
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aint even been on, my bad, quick key
Suicide was on ya mind, aint have the heart to pull a Wesson knew HOTSHH! would murder him so he gave me 2 mil to check in dont even Try,you a internet thug everything you Speak is a Lie I told graph to SPIT something...da nigga said my mouth too dry In this game you lames R Better Moving.....my Aim is Retribution Graph, you too stupid to live...damn... Im Ashamed of Evolution U dont want no 'beef'...Talk Grease? U similar to a veggie freak Like babies with no arms when U dropped U was Already Weak Hope you wouldnt bleed 4 a vic , with me it could be Gallons cuz Graph's about as big a thug on this site....as Woody Allen Im causing Havoc... you'll elevate when u get tossed in Attics Get Outlawed from the site cuz like ya name..this Loss is GRAPHic So gassed... Ya Brain'll Fart...... paint pictures?.. I Frame the Art cuz like GAMES girl on dat show you should ve had a CHANGE OF HEART |
aint even been on, my bad, quick key
Suicide was on ya mind, aint have the heart to pull a Wesson knew HOTSHH! would murder him so he gave me 2 mil to check in dont even Try,you a internet thug everything you Speak is a Lie I told graph to SPIT something...da nigga said my mouth too dry In this game you lames R Better Moving.....my Aim is Retribution Graph, you too stupid to live...damn... Im Ashamed of Evolution U dont want no 'beef'...Talk Grease? U similar to a veggie freak Like babies with no arms when U dropped U was Already Weak Hope you wouldnt bleed 4 a vic , with me it could be Gallons cuz Graph's about as big a thug on this site....as Woody Allen Im causing Havoc... you'll elevate when u get tossed in Attics Just been Outlawed from the site cuz like ya name..dis Loss is GRAPHic So gassed kid... Ya Brain'll Fart...... paint pictures?.. I Frame the Art cuz like GAMES girl on dat show you should ve had a CHANGE OF HEART __________________ Member of RV's DreamTeam 1st Multi League Champion 3rd place KORV |
finally lol ya dropped....pretty dope shit hommie...uppin this...
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This was feedback posted for .Grafh.
checkin polls biotches:thumbup: good lucks to both tho ight
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Voted For: .Grafh.
Suicide was on ya mind, aint have the heart to pull a Wesson knew HOTSHH! would murder him so he gave me 2 mil to check in ^^^ dosent make sens,e you said ''he knew i'd murder him so he gave me 2 mil ta check in''....why would he know your gonna beat him an pay u ta battle for a loss? dont even Try,you a internet thug everything you Speak is a Lie I told graph to SPIT something...da nigga said my mouth too dry ^^^ thats pretty decent tho, nothin special, but the punch in the second line was alright In this game you lames R Better Moving.....my Aim is Retribution Graph, you too stupid to live...damn... Im Ashamed of Evolution ^^^ not bad, not bad at all, second line once again kinda hit hard, decent stuff U dont want no 'beef'...Talk Grease? U similar to a veggie freak Like babies with no arms when U dropped U was Already Weak ah, this time around ya flow was nice, but the 1st line connected harder, second line was a little boring an not very creative Hope you wouldnt bleed 4 a vic , with me it could be Gallons cuz Graph's about as big a thug on this site....as Woody Allen ^^ okat stuff once again, but just average, i exect better from you m causing Havoc... you'll elevate when u get tossed in Attics Just been Outlawed from the site cuz like ya name..dis Loss is GRAPHic ^^^ could have definately used a better way ta play off his name, but it was still okay, just could have been alot better So gassed kid... Ya Brain'll Fart...... paint pictures?.. I Frame the Art cuz like GAMES girl on dat show you should ve had a CHANGE OF HEART ^^^ build up line was dope an i could see what ya tried ta do, use GAME cause its the talk on RV right now, maybe could have woirded it better sorry i got this far, an i dont wanna analyze Grafths verse bar by bar so i'll brake it down Grafth, ya had alot more creativity, for insatnce... Rv tired of ya,since ya recylce more lines den smarterchild Ya da gaytype ta press pause on b-rabbits ass on 8mile ^^^ like that Very creative an although many use 8 mile in they lyrics, you bough a new dimension too it, ya feel? nice shit overrall ya had alot more creative ideas, not many of the bars hit in this battle like they should have, Hotshh, ya worded ya verse all wrong in places, but in others it was some decent stuff, ya had nice ideas, just used them wrong in this battle, thats my opinnon anyway Grafth, ya was much morwe consistant, an every line i read, i didnt really know what was coming next, an thats the best way ta entertain in battles, so u get my vote Peace out oh an RTF |
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Voted For: .Grafh.
Grafh You Had An Alright Verse Man, Your Structure Was Goot Ish Was Ligned Up Well, You Had Vocabulary Here Some Personals Which I Found Cool, I Like Your Punches Man Remind Me Of Me, Weerd, You Sad Some Nice Word Play Whoa! Dope Verse Man, Your Opener Wasn't There But The Res Was There Man Good Work On This Battle Hotshh! Nice Verse Man This Aint The Best I Saw Out Of You I Saw Decent Ish Out Of You, Your Vocabulary Was Kind Of Basic Man, And Personals Wasn't Quite Hitting That Much, You Had Some Nice Punches Though That I Felt Was Hitting, But Not Hard Nuff, If You Would Of Played Your Whole Verse On Him You Would Of Got This Battle, But You Did Well Man, Over All Best Line Was Your Closer, Werd Vote-Grafh Return The Favor Nigka Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for hotshh!
would vote, but i cant.......tight battle, pretty funny too, should be close in the end
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[QUOTE=Buck.Shot]Voted For: .Grafh.
Suicide was on ya mind, aint have the heart to pull a Wesson knew HOTSHH! would murder him so he gave me 2 mil to check in ^^^ dosent make sens,e you said ''he knew i'd murder him so he gave me 2 mil ta check in''....why would he know your gonna beat him an pay u ta battle for a loss? ^^^^read the 1st line....suicide was on his mind, aint have the heart to shoot himself....knew i would kill him, so he paid me two mil to make sure i checked in to kill him, he really did pay me 2 mil just to check in, i wrote this in like 15 minutes, but damn buck, you had to hate vote on me? |
well i did pay him 2 mill ta check in cuz i thought since he doesnt know me he wouldnt wanna battle so i had ta give him money just ta check in....and no suicide isnt on my mind....
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Voted For: .Grafh.
woo dam nice battle cant vote but good shit.. grafh in my crew but i would say hotshh took this one with that woody allen line that shit was crazy Vote removed |
oh shit my bad lol hotshh get that shit deleted didnt mean to press vote
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This was feedback posted for hotshh!
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This was feedback posted for hotshh!
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This was feedback posted for hotshh!
hotshh!! won this battle because his verse flowed better his rhymes rhymed better he had a nice closer and good punches ok multies i liked
cuz Graph's about as big a thug on this site....as Woody Allen Im causing Havoc... you'll elevate when u get tossed in Attics .Grafh your verse was pretty good but the rhymes were off a little this was my favorite line Ya da gaytype ta press pause on b-rabbits ass on 8mile the first "gay oriented punchline" that acctually made sense that i've read in a while overall ok battle V/ Hotshh!! but i dont got 800 votes sorry |
This was feedback posted for hotshh!
hotshh!! won this battle because his verse flowed better his rhymes rhymed better he had a nice closer and good punches ok multies i liked
cuz Graph's about as big a thug on this site....as Woody Allen Im causing Havoc... you'll elevate when u get tossed in Attics .Grafh your verse was pretty good but the rhymes were off a little this was my favorite line Ya da gaytype ta press pause on b-rabbits ass on 8mile the first "gay oriented punchline" that acctually made sense that i've read in a while overall ok battle V/ Hotshh!! but i dont got 800 votes sorry |
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Voted For: hotshh!
this battle wasnt that big for me, i htink hot got it tho. I was feelin yo shit more hott. i think u came a lil harder wit punches, and personals in this one. I liked yo style in this one, and yo verse seemed to flow better also. I think you got this one. Graphf, no hate, but yo verse was borin to me, and uninterestingg. I think u should elevate on puttin more feelin or sumthin into yo verses. But, i liked some of ur puches, not all, and i feel you came harder in metaphores, but i dont think yo overall verse was better in this one. NO hate, just my opinion. Overall-this battle was kinda wack to me, wasnt feelin it that much, but i think hot got this one. Yo verse was better to me, and graf, i feel you lacked too many things in urs to take my vote... NO HATE....plz RTF on last battle link in sig. and plz make it explained. good battle yall....~1~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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This was feedback posted for .Grafh.
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