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H!T-sT!Ck vs Bill Cosby
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-05-05 at 11:01 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Bill Cosby has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-02-05 11:02 AM.
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H!T-sT!Ck has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-02-05 11:14 AM.
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Fuck H!T-sT!Ck, this bitch aint gonna go far
His dopeness is as clear to see as his avatar Your on par with the worst, you can only look up Multies dont win battles, so your verse is a fuck up You wanna hook up with the best, I cant see it Dope is an adjective, and you just wanna be it Shit, I dont wanna drag this on, poor H!T-sT!Ck He saw "drag", and grabbed his fuckin lip stick So Sh!t-d!cK, I mean H!T-sT!Ck, get off the net Only you on here bothered about a fuckin rep Faggot your in debt, you cant pay your dues Record = 1-0, you beat someone who'll only lose Personals: Line 2 = He aint got an avy Line 4 = Uses a lot of multies Line 12 = Beat Blaze who aint won yet |
how many lines u went?..............................
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12
You stickin to that? *I Hate this bastard 50 character shit* |
yea ill go 6 bars give me like 20 minutes im battlin marv j his was first so im obligated to my priorties ill hit ya up...........
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B.C on that 'herb shit', a win this *guys hopin*...
ya verse is 'regular weed' to me it dont even get my *eyes open*.../1 Ya gunna need 'luck', so grip and keep that *clover close*... im like 'coke' if i went '12 lines' it would be an *overdose*.../2 my punches so hard they'll sprain ya *ribs through the sceen*... and ya free flow im gunna ignore b/c we all kno *kids say the darndest things*.../3 niggas probably 18 and at *home still*... im not worried about u every one *owns bills*.../4 [money] dont ever let me see u makin any *comment on me*... i already got u shook,u'll be shaking for years after this fight like *muhhamed ali*.../5 i laugh at my own jokes like sayin this *whores nice*... theres no chance of u gettin 'saved' in this battle becuz ur *Before.Christ*.../6 went easy good luck kid.... |
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This was feedback posted for H!T-sT!Ck
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Voted For: H!T-sT!Ck
Bill Cosby: Fuck H!T-sT!Ck, this bitch aint gonna go far His dopeness is as clear to see as his avatar ^^decent opener good personal 8/10 Your on par with the worst, you can only look up Multies dont win battles, so your verse is a fuck up ^^wack 3/10 You wanna hook up with the best, I cant see it Dope is an adjective, and you just wanna be it ^^wack 3/10 Shit, I dont wanna drag this on, poor H!T-sT!Ck He saw "drag", and grabbed his fuckin lip stick ^^wack 3/10 So Sh!t-d!cK, I mean H!T-sT!Ck, get off the net Only you on here bothered about a fuckin rep ^^dope bar 8/10 Faggot your in debt, you cant pay your dues Record = 1-0, you beat someone who'll only lose ^^decent closer 5/10 Overall : 30/50 (60%) H!t St!ck: B.C on that 'herb shit', a win this *guys hopin*... ya verse is 'regular weed' to me it dont even get my *eyes open*.../1 ^^dope meta decent punch 7/10 Ya gunna need 'luck', so grip and keep that *clover close*... im like 'coke' if i went '12 lines' it would be an *overdose*.../2 ^^dope bar again nice consistency 8/10 my punches so hard they'll sprain ya *ribs through the sceen*... and ya free flow im gunna ignore b/c we all kno *kids say the darndest things*.../3 ^^decent meta wack punch 5/10 niggas probably 18 and at *home still*... im not worried about u every one *owns bills*.../4 [money] ^^dope meta good punch 8/10 dont ever let me see u makin any *comment on me*... i already got u shook,u'll be shaking for years after this fight like *muhhamed ali*.../5 ^^forced 5/10 i laugh at my own jokes like sayin this *whores nice*... theres no chance of u gettin 'saved' in this battle becuz ur *Before.Christ*.../6 ^^decent meta and punch 6/10 overall : 39/60 (65%) Vote: H!t St!ck Hit lose the periods and slashes at the end of your bars it makes you look really noobie, and lose the asterix (**) those also make you look noobie, we understand the meta youre using without those |
AIGHT THANX 4 VOTE........uppin on battle 1-0
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Voted For: H!T-sT!Ck
at first i would say bill won but den he slacked off toward da end and got really wack....u werent that good but ur punches and shit stayed consistent...hit u could use a lil structure work tho.....1....you had decent ok punches bill u just turned from ok to whack but i know bof of yall can do betta.....1 |
Voted For: Bill Cosby
aiight ok.............. hitstick - your verse was realy no good....there was no real reason for u to post that link either......your punches were not any good...and some lines were stretched....therefore the struc was.....bad! bill cosby....i know u had succes with your tv show but rappings not your thing....lol....just playin but n e wayz.....your verse wasnt that good either....punches never really hit....multies were ok....nuttin any good here...... but in the end bill had the better verse cuz of structer and lil bit of multies sooo..... v/bill cosby |
Voted For: H!T-sT!Ck
fuck eh....this is how i see it Bill Cosby >Fuck H!T-sT!Ck, this bitch aint gonna go far His dopeness is as clear to see as his avatar -played, 3/10 >Your on par with the worst, you can only look up Multies dont win battles, so your verse is a fuck up lackin creativity...coulda been better 4/10 >You wanna hook up with the best, I cant see it Dope is an adjective, and you just wanna be it -liked this line.....6/10 >Shit, I dont wanna drag this on, poor H!T-sT!Ck He saw "drag", and grabbed his fuckin lip stick -coulda been worded better 6/10 >So Sh!t-d!cK, I mean H!T-sT!Ck, get off the net Only you on here bothered about a fuckin rep -no.....3/10 >Faggot your in debt, you cant pay your dues Record = 1-0, you beat someone who'll only lose -again, poor wordplay....4/10 overall: 26/60....only reason you lost this....inconsistent with your verse and poor vocab and wordplay, looks like you can get the hang of battling, jus pop into the tutorials or somethin an tune up a little, cause alot of your punches were ruined by your shitty usage of vocab....decent verse though Hit Stick... >B.C on that 'herb shit', a win this *guys hopin*... ya verse is 'regular weed' to me it dont even get my *eyes open*.../1 -dont use stars next time.....plus, little played 5/10 >Ya gunna need 'luck', so grip and keep that *clover close*... im like 'coke' if i went '12 lines' it would be an *overdose*.../2 -another played line....drug lines are too obvious....5/10 >my punches so hard they'll sprain ya *ribs through the sceen*... and ya free flow im gunna ignore b/c we all kno *kids say the darndest things*.../3 -nice play off the name 6/10 >niggas probably 18 and at *home still*... im not worried about u every one *owns bills*.../4 [money] -upp the wordplay.....6/10 >dont ever let me see u makin any *comment on me*... i already got u shook,u'll be shaking for years after this fight like *muhhamed ali*.../5 -meh....4/10 >i laugh at my own jokes like sayin this *whores nice*... theres no chance of u gettin 'saved' in this battle becuz ur *Before.Christ*.../6 -decent closer....first line sucked....7/10 overall: 33/60....shit, to me son, you almost lost this because of your poor/inconsistent structure and flow....you started off good, flowing nicely, but when you hit your 4th bar.....what the fuck happened, evertyhing shortened up and that takes aways alot of effectiveness from your verse....thats not what you wana do....but like BC, you gotta up your wordplay and vocab, had alot of good ideas for punches but the set up were a little lacking...nah mean...so, yeah, just work on that....elevate....wird |
thanx for votes 3-1 uppin................................
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Voted For: H!T-sT!Ck
This goes to H!t St!ck, ya punches hit hard and vocab was tight...Bill, ya verse was real basic, u need to elevate No Hate |
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Voted For: H!T-sT!Ck
oo okay battle ya'll.....kind of wun sided tho bill's ryhme scheme was wack and his punches were real basic...and hit was more creative and had some cleva lines... opener-hit structure-bill punchlines-hit creativity-hit multis-nun from both flow-a tie personals-bill finisher-hit enjoyed-hit....nuff said RETURN DA FAVOR LINKS R IN MY SIG..dont vote i'll get dis vote taken away |
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