KOOL COL-B vs J-Money
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

werd

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-05-05 at 08:23 PM

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KOOL COL-B has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-03-05 04:17 PM.

J-Money has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-03-05 05:26 PM.

now this my boy, i'll kill anyone who DISSES JUSTIN
but he aint made beef scence grade 9 wif MRS. BUSTIN
j-money? thats tha closest he iz to BEING DOPE
ex-Neighborhood Sniper, but ur still NEEDING SCOPE
cuz i can tell by tha smell, u keep TALKIN that SHIT
i aint got my hands on a clock, but im CLOCKIN my GRIP
ima cal u "un-cool", but we AINT RELAITED
i spit so hot, ima make my MAYN CREMATED
so j-money aint dope, but im BURNIN up this NEWB
wif a dick so small he prolly URINE on hiz PUBES

explinations:

now this my boy, i'll kill anyone who DISSES JUSTIN
but he aint made beef scence grade 9 wif MRS. BUSTIN
~in grade 9 our cookin class teacher wuz Mrs. Bustin~

j-money? thats tha closest he iz to BEING DOPE
ex-Neighborhood Sniper, but ur still NEEDING SCOPE
~he used 2 b in a gang here called tha Neighborhood Snipers, but he left~

wiggity wiggity werd

aight i fucked up a lil on 1 of tha lines, ima fix it up...

now this my boy, i'll kill anyone who DISSES JUSTIN
but he aint made beef scence grade 9 wif MRS. BUSTIN
j-money? thats tha closest he iz to BEING DOPE
ex-Neighborhood Sniper, but ur still NEEDING SCOPE
cuz i can tell by tha smell, u keep TALKIN that SHIT
i aint got my hands on a clock, but im CLOCKIN my GRIP
ima cal u "un-cool", but we AINT RELAITED
i spit so hot, ima make my MAYN CREMATED
so j-money aint dope, but im BURNIN up this NEWB
wif a dick so small he prolly URINE on hiz PUBES

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j-money? thats tha closest he iz to BEING DOPE
~j money= money 2 buy joints, lol~

first off, u claim hispanic, but u aint nothin but white
u think u got a bright future but there aint nothin in sight*

after this battle, ima leave u "$JOHN_DOE$", and have ur family in grievance
2 alias' on the site, and combined, ur record barely brakes even

truth be told, when kool gets old, he'll still be green with envy
thinkin to himself " i shoulda never asked j-money to go against me

u aint a hustla, so stop wastin your time
cuz the only capital u got is at the ENDS OF YOU LINES

stop tryna be black, cracka, act like u supposed to
dont make me upload some pics and really expose you

a ratty goatee and long pinky nail dont make you a g
the only way u'd win this battle is if u wasmistaken for me

so fuck kool col-b;a fake e-thug and a neighborhood sniper
i'ma write my verse in braille just so he can decipher*



*Kool Col-B is legally blind
$JOHN DOE$ = Kool Col-B's alias on here
capital = money

first off, u claim hispanic, but u aint nothin but white
not true, im white and hispanic, not just white


so fuck kool col-b;a fake e-thug and a neighborhood sniper
i'ma write my verse in braille just so he can decipher*

lol, my favorite 1.

overall good, but u sayin sum un-true shit. still pretty nice tho, werd

Voted For: KOOL COL-B


Kool
Nice Man You Had A Pretty Good Structure Some Word Play Up In Here I Was Digging, Nice Rhyme Scheme Hommie, Punches Was Here I Was Feeling The Closer Ha Ha, Werd Nice Man, Your Personals Was Alright I Felt You COuld Of Done Better With That But Over All You Had A Good Verse Man Weerd

J-Money
Pretty Good Hommie, Some Punches Was Alright Not All You Had Cool Vocabulary, Bars Was Streched Out Wasn't Digging That Man, Your Personals Was Whacked Out, You Had No Rhyme Scheme Here, Your Word Play Is Played Out Some Didn't Even Make Since Over All You Need To Elevate

Vote-Kool
Return The Favor Link In My Sig Man

uppin, werd
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Voted For: KOOL COL-B

KOOL KOL B:

now this my boy, i'll kill anyone who DISSES JUSTIN
but he aint made beef scence grade 9 wif MRS. BUSTIN
^^good opener good personal 7/10
j-money? thats tha closest he iz to BEING DOPE
ex-Neighborhood Sniper, but ur still NEEDING SCOPE
^^another good personal good consistency 7/10
cuz i can tell by tha smell, u keep TALKIN that SHIT
i aint got my hands on a clock, but im CLOCKIN my GRIP
^^2 dope meta's nice bar 8/10
ima cal u "un-cool", but we AINT RELAITED
i spit so hot, ima make my MAYN CREMATED
^^wack 3/10
so j-money aint dope, but im BURNIN up this NEWB
wif a dick so small he prolly URINE on hiz PUBES
^^good wordplay decent closer 6/10

overall: 31/50 (62%)

J-Money:

first off, u claim hispanic, but u aint nothin but white
u think u got a bright future but there aint nothin in sight*
^^dope personal, decent opener, could have been better 7/10
after this battle, ima leave u "$JOHN_DOE$", and have ur family in grievance
2 alias' on the site, and combined, ur record barely brakes even
^^another dope personal 8/10
truth be told, when kool gets old, he'll still be green with envy
thinkin to himself " i shoulda never asked j-money to go against me
^^wack 3/10
u aint a hustla, so stop wastin your time
cuz the only capital u got is at the ENDS OF YOU LINES
^^ehh decent personal decent punch 5/10
stop tryna be black, cracka, act like u supposed to
dont make me upload some pics and really expose you
^^decent 5/10
a ratty goatee and long pinky nail dont make you a g
the only way u'd win this battle is if u wasmistaken for me
^^wack and played 3/10
so fuck kool col-b;a fake e-thug and a neighborhood sniper
i'ma write my verse in braille just so he can decipher*
^^good closer 6/10

overall: 37/60 (62%)

Voted For: KOOL COL-B

V/kool col-b....this was a close battle but he gets my vote cause he had better punchs an personals an he was consistent wit original diiss's...j money....u had some good lines but u werent consistent wit the diss's an ur structure was off ....but good battle to both....RETURN THE FAVOR
opener=kool
closer=kool
structure=tie
punchs=kool
personals=tie
overall=kool col-b

Voted For: J-Money

j moneys verse was just overall better.......both had okay personals....but ya punches werent that good cool.....jays were str8 and just came harder.....plz return favor

thanx 2 every1 who voted, werd
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Voted For: KOOL COL-B

Aight, this was a close battle
J:
Flow was alright, the fact you seperated your bars loses you this battle

ya had some aight lines tho'...some stuff was a little played, could use work on ya punches, an connecting your bars alot better., cause it didnt seem ta flow, an that is the biggest flaw u can have in a battle, NO HATE THO

Kool
Ya flow was aight, structure was a little blkah too
but ya punches an personals were right on point in this, decent wordplay too, opener was witty as hell, nice stuff

RTF In any of my battles u see floating around the frontlines forum, i got like 8, so they shouldnt be hard ta find

Peace out

Voted For: J-Money

yo, i aint votin cuz i'm friends with both of these dudes..sorry colby, but in my opinion, justin won this pretty handily...his punches and personals were dope, colby u had a shit load of multies bu i dont think u can win a battle jus cuz of ur multies...also, u can't "urine on pubes"...it would b urinate because "urine" is not a verb..it is a noun

shit..............i meant to hit feedback, but w/e

that, by the way, is the worst reason i have ever seen

Voted For: J-Money

i dunno, this is how i see it

KoolB....thought you didnt come that hard, and it showed cause your punches were that strong....you had good creativity, but poor wordplay and structure made them a littl weak...some lines were a little played...and alot of lines coulda been worded a little better....flow was a little off in the middle.....yeah, so, didnt get my vote because your punches and wordplay were weaker, and didnt stay consistent with your verse

j-money...thought you had better defined punches, and better structure/flow and wordplay which helped add some more effectiveness to your punches......some lines seemed a little forced, and you should upp your vocab a little.....but you still get my vote....whird

v/j-money

Voted For: KOOL COL-B

VOTE: KOOL COL-B

J-Money, yours was soild but I'ma have to give this one to KOOL...Yours was both really good, but this one made me laugh.

J-money quit a gang thats not cool man, but he should go back in, this guy can rap... I would give a better explination but wuts the point. KOOL WON