Lyriclesolja vs Kesse
 

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6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes
No D/R
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-03-05 at 06:27 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Lyriclesolja has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-03-05 04:31 PM.

Kesse has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-03-05 04:42 PM.

afraid to show your real record, i guess for a 'solja' your pretty brave
for you this battle is like a war, you'll be getting a cross on your grave
your user title says 'im deep', im thinking your some kind of mole
cause with all those losses you really have, your in one giant hole
im guessing poetry is your area, but i think your bullshitting, to be frank
because a true writer is always writing, and in your sig, the notebook is blank
if your in this to see how many battles you can lose, your already into the fame
and its not like it will get any better, cause you can't even spell your own name
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explans:
-line 2 cross on the grave, like an X through the battle...a loss basically
-his real records 9-22 or sump
-everythin else should be easy

yo enouph of his wack ass back lash shananagins,
silicone ally Mcbeal his style aint real he a manakin,
out of his league he a priest passin a round of drinks brian flannagin*,
and he cant speak like a crippled dude tryina do the two step wit no feet,
he a lyricle cripple it aint hard to realize its simple,
stuck ma dick in his mouth now he got a dimple,
his rhymes are scary like the facial skin of john kerry,
folded and wrinkled his face is oiley he ate to many pringles.


Brain Flannagin-Tom Cruse in Cock Tails......hence he's a bartender..

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This was feedback posted for Kesse
 

poll checkin..........

Voted For: Kesse

kesse took this battle for actually rhymin......he had harder hittin punches dat rhymed n shit..
solja ur verse waz goin good but u waznt rhymin wit shit yo....u would build up dis nice ass punch n den say some shit at da end dat didnt even rhyme....u gotta fix that and you'll b straight...........
kesse return da favor
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...91&page=1&pp=15
im up 4-0 against lord.wun pleaze get dat shit closed out yo

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Voted For: Kesse

Gotta go wit Kesse on this one, punches were harder, didn't like the structure that much, but LyricalSolja didn't come with nothin really, so Kesse took it.

No Hate

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Voted For: Kesse

Kesse: dope personals - i liked your opener...i liked how u attacked his real record and shit..that was kool...ur flow was pretty good, rhymes were fairly basic but that was alright, ur punches and personals made up for it

Lyriclesolja: i liked ur opener too, it was prolly ur best punch, ur flow was ok but ur rhyme scheme really threw me off...like the line about the pringles...whut did that rhyme with

overall i feel Kesse took this one quite handily, but respect to both of u...

Return The Favor- Link in my sig

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Voted For: Kesse

afraid to show your real record, i guess for a 'solja' your pretty brave
for you this battle is like a war, you'll be getting a cross on your grave
GOOD OPENER , STRAIGHT TO THE POINT
your user title says 'im deep', im thinking your some kind of mole
cause with all those losses you really have, your in one giant hole
HHAHA, DATS FUNNY, GOOD PLAY ON TITLE
if your in this to see how many battles you can lose, your already into the fame
and its not like it will get any better, cause you can't even spell your own name
THE TRUTH HURTS MORE THAN DISSES SO GOOD JOB WITH THIS ONE

yo enouph of his wack ass back lash shananagins,
silicone ally Mcbeal his style aint real he a manakin,
DECENT BAR PUNCH NOT REALLY THAT HARD
out of his league he a priest passin a round of drinks brian flannagin*,
and he cant speak like a crippled dude tryina do the two step wit no feet,
NOT REALLY DIGGING THIS
he a lyricle cripple it aint hard to realize its simple,
stuck ma dick in his mouth now he got a dimple,
PRETTY LIL KID BAR RIGHT HERE, TOO SIMPLE
SOLJA, YA PUNCHES WERENT HITTING LIKE USUAL
SEEMED RUSHED, IM SURE NEXT BATTLE YOULL KILL EM
KESSE NOT YOUR BEST EITHER BUT JUST ENUFF TO EDGE IT OUT
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=179726
PLEASE RETURN FAVOR

Voted For: Kesse

yo enouph of his wack ass back lash shananagins,
silicone ally Mcbeal his style aint real he a manakin,
no…weak punch
out of his league he a priest passin a round of drinks brian flannagin*,
and he cant speak like a crippled dude tryina do the two step wit no feet,
okay, punch didn’t really land hea
he a lyricle cripple it aint hard to realize its simple,
stuck ma dick in his mouth now he got a dimple,
okay, decent I guess
his rhymes are scary like the facial skin of john kerry,
folded and wrinkled his face is oiley he ate to many pringles.
no, weak hea


afraid to show your real record, i guess for a 'solja' your pretty brave
for you this battle is like a war, you'll be getting a cross on your grave
okay pretty decent
your user title says 'im deep', im thinking your some kind of mole
cause with all those losses you really have, your in one giant hole
decent bar here
im guessing poetry is your area, but i think your bullshitting, to be frank
because a true writer is always writing, and in your sig, the notebook is blank
pretty good
if your in this to see how many battles you can lose, your already into the fame
and its not like it will get any better, cause you can't even spell your own name
this punch was kinda weak hea…

Overall this was a 1-sided vote here, cuz Kesse took this shit tho
Just came harder in the punches all thru the verse…

RTF Kesse…

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Voted For: Kesse

V/kesse.... he gets my vote cause he had better punchs an personals an he was consistent an he had original diiss's...david....u need to work on some better diss's u need some new original punchs...RETURN THE FAVOR
opener=kesse
closer=kesse
structure=tie
punchs=kesse
personals=kesse
overall=Kesse

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Voted For: Kesse

David- your name already cracked me up
but anyway your verse was ight but i wasnt feeling the punches you attempted your grammer was weird and the vocab was weak, stucture was weak and i was just not feelin your verse at all in any suspect but work on your punches thats the main thing of battles ight pz

Kesse
not your best but the stucuture is alot better the flow was decent the vocab was weak but you had the dopest punches ever man:thuumbup: lol but yea you had a better all around verse then david did i was feelin the punches hit way stronger n everything too, pz

RTF in my battle vs. speats pz