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**GHOSTE** vs Da_Throwdest
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting no d/r NO HATE VOTES crew battle NOK vs Higher Aptitudes Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-07-05 at 07:19 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
**GHOSTE** has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-06-05 12:33 PM.
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Da_Throwdest has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-06-05 06:44 PM.
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...Ur Lyrically About 2 Get "Nok'ed Out...
!!..Watch this Clip-Pop wit Rib-Shots That 'End Ghoste's Plots' as i 'Punch Mid Sections' Injections make tension & have ya 'Ghost Ripped Out' like 'Eliminating Stupid Expressions'..!! !!..so b Expectin-A-Blessin cuz this is 1 lesson that don't give Myth-Help cuz 'Punches 2 Chest' will 'Buckle Ya Shoulders' like 'Unda Knecks Whipped w/ Belts'..!! !!..admit ur shelved cuz u bout 2 'Hit Ur Self' like 'Flicks From Fight Club' imma Night-Thug witta knife/snub that has u 'Catch Feelings' Healings w/ 'Gun-Love'..!! !!..the Gun-Tucked got this Dumb-Fuck w/ 'Runned Luck' like 'The Leprechaun Olympics' punch u missed it? now i got 'Gh-ost Think About' like 'Reminising His Own Shit'..!! !!..gotta Toned-Clip wit a Chrome-Tip that 'Take Ghost Out' like 'Eliminating Downplay Factors' leaved u punch layed, Bastard! cuz i got 'Da Ghoste Ripped Quick' like 'Over Payed Actors'..!! |
now look here slim, i hope u dont expect this win
u claim to be like 2pac*, but look wut happened to him** yo own crew wont miss u*3, dont bother strappin dat seatbelt dis dude must hate his *punches* cause homie u *(k)need* help*4 (get it) u wanna try to make it big, but u get *noticed* less than hobos*5 this homo cant be elavatin, 2 wins of his came from no-shos lets all give this fag the boot, cause all ur hits...i juke u cant truly think u got talent...DAMN...ur punches make maggots puke *1- in a post he compared himself to 2pac... *2- tupac ended up dead... *3- their leader bailed on the whole crew... *4- punch:knee (as in) "punch some1, then knee them in the stomach) :) *5- every1 ignores hobos :( |
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ghoste wish he merked me ha ha but uppin this 4 sum votes
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Voted For: **GHOSTE**
V/ghoste.....he gets my vote cause he came wit good wordplay an punchs wit better structure he had good consistent diss's...throwdest u had a good verse but ur structure was off u had some good lines but u werent consistent wit the diss's...no hate good battle RETURN THE FAVOR opner=g closer=g structure=g vocab=g punchs=g personal=g overall=Ghoste Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: **GHOSTE**
Ghoste: nice drop i can tell you didnt even try on this one .. you had some witty things i had to read it twice before i really understood it all. ha only thing i really didnt like was ur closers. but otherwise your shit had me laughing like the hobo line.. and the knee line was really good.. da throwdest: you had a good drop.. but ur structure was off. nice vocab. but you just didnt come as hard as ghoste on this one. your punches were decent . cept ghoste dropped flat out disses and u jus dropped nothing really personal . again nice drop on both sides Vote//Ghoste |
thnk u...........................................still uppin...im glad spme ppl can actually leave producted feed on this site...
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This was feedback posted for **GHOSTE**
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Voted For: Da_Throwdest
vote = throwdest basically, he won it with better multis and complexity...although it was borderin on tha over-complex...had to re-read most lines and tha structure can be hard to read. lines a little stretched for my liking. but really, i don't think you were tested in this battle. ghoste..u need to be a bit more harder with tha punchz - nothin really connected there...although its good you tried to use personals. also if you gonna go up against somone like throwdest you need to improve your vocab, cos although your shit would do well against someone less experienced, your verse looks simple in comparison. anywayz... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=180996 |
Voted For: Da_Throwdest
yo you know i gotta give you this one g that was some sick werk man best ive seen from you punches da opener da closer da multis da personals da yo ghoste werk on ya werd play yo da throwdest nice werk dawg Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for **GHOSTE**
checkin the mu'fuckin pollz.......................
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Voted For: **GHOSTE**
i think ghoste took this one with harder pnuchs. and better personals. he killed him in personals. but i think u shoulld work on ur structure. your structure and also ur wordplay was also off in this one. but i still think u took it. da_throwdest-i think ur verse was ight, but poorly structured also. i think u should work on that. u did come hard wit vocab, and some hard punches. but, i dont think u came off hard enough to take this...sry homie...no hate overall-i think ghoste took this one. harder punches, and a overal, better verse to me. -peace |
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hey return the favor n vote on my battles links in the sig
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This was feedback posted for Da_Throwdest
good drop da throwdest you had some good punches and multiples but you're structure was off at some points
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hey ghoste its non capisco... drop a honest vote on my battle ...RTF links in the sig
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Voted For: **GHOSTE**
this verse had the best punchlines and better structure |
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Voted For: Da_Throwdest
da throwdest ...Ur Lyrically About 2 Get "Nok'ed Out... !!..Watch this Clip-Pop wit Rib-Shots That 'End Ghoste's Plots' as i 'Punch Mid Sections' Injections make tension & have ya 'Ghost Ripped Out' like 'Eliminating Stupid Expressions'..!! !!..so b Expectin-A-Blessin cuz this is 1 lesson that don't give Myth-Help cuz 'Punches 2 Chest' will 'Buckle Ya Shoulders' like 'Unda Knecks Whipped w/ Belts'..!! !!..admit ur shelved cuz u bout 2 'Hit Ur Self' like 'Flicks From Fight Club' imma Night-Thug witta knife/snub that has u 'Catch Feelings' Healings w/ 'Gun-Love'..!! !!..the Gun-Tucked got this Dumb-Fuck w/ 'Runned Luck' like 'The Leprechaun Olympics' punch u missed it? now i got 'Gh-ost Think About' like 'Reminising His Own Shit'..!! !!..gotta Toned-Clip wit a Chrome-Tip that 'Take Ghost Out' like 'Eliminating Downplay Factors' leaved u punch layed, Bastard! cuz i got 'Da Ghoste Ripped Quick' like 'Over Payed Actors'..!! NIce rhymes yo way to get at ur opponent like dat nice punches and good structure 8/10 Ghoste now look here slim, i hope u dont expect this win u claim to be like 2pac*, but look wut happened to him** yo own crew wont miss u*3, dont bother strappin dat seatbelt dis dude must hate his *punches* cause homie u *(k)need* help*4 (get it) u wanna try to make it big, but u get *noticed* less than hobos*5 this homo cant be elavatin, 2 wins of his came from no-shos lets all give this fag the boot, cause all ur hits...i juke u cant truly think u got talent...DAMN...ur punches make maggots puke Ghoste short verse not as many punches, but u got sum good 1s alright elevation average structure and opening/finish 7/10 my v/Throwdest b/c of better punches and more elevation |
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Voted For: **GHOSTE**
Ghost Pretty Nice Verse Kid, Diggin Punches Up In Here, Personals Was Alright Not To Dope Though But It Was Nice, Vocabulary Way Better, One Thing Man Fix Your Structure And Get Better Wordplay Throw Personals Alright Complex Shit But ALot Of Shit Didn't Make Since my Nigka, Try To Fix That Punches Was Alright Not Great, But It Was Alright My Nigka, Fix Ya Structure Hell Of Work Is Needed Vote-Ghost Return The Favor My Nigka, Link Up In My Sig Me Vs Affinity |
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