MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ vs Judicial
 

Battle Rules:

10- Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

G-LUCK :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 03-04-05 at 09:56 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Judicial has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-04-05 09:30 PM.

MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-04-05 09:31 PM.

opener:
like 70's remedy's bout 2 b off wit cha head like kennedy
dis bitch aint sick,he just got a scholar in seredepity

killer:
hiz name says auth3ntiq but boy u aint real kid
soft n mushy,vanilla puddin,like bill in ya sig
you should have quitted b-4 dis thread u submitted
even if i swallowed your eyes u couldnt see me spittin
im causin defection and deep depression to mistas lyrical progression
he regrettin dis battelin session,u rap wit homos obsessions

finisher:
thanks 4 settin dis charity,cuz u battelin me,wins im only collectin
like when u checked-in in dis battle you comin second even wit god u couldnt handle my confessions

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179865

^^ his pic with the bat

Dq told me, judicial and herself cyber sex


He's scared of mice http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177251

he told me that he dont have a mom

Told me that he lives under the basment

PM ME IF YOU DONT GET MY PUNCHES

Voted For: Judicial

checkin this shit out........judicial should have it, his punches are way harder.....word

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^ fuck, meant to leave feedback
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^^ Wow!.....................w/e.............uppin.......

Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ


Mista
Damn Cozzin Nice Punches I Like How You Turned Em' Into Personals Ish Was Dope Man, Looks Like You Put Alot Of Effort In This Verse, You Had Some Good Vocabulary That I Felt Was Decent Your Opener Was Neat, Man That Was Dope, Ha Ha, Your Closer Was Pretty Good As Well Nicely Done, You Should Of Played Of His Name But It's Cool , Lol Alot Of Personals Here Man, I Liked Your Structure As Well Man Nice And Neat

Judicial
Whoa! Nice Verse Man Best I've Seen From You Yet Man, You Had Over All Nice Structure Neat Punches I Found Creative Man And That's Good,Meta's Absolutely Effective, Lol, Man Pretty Dope Closer I Was Feeling That Out Of Your Whole Verse Cozz, But One Thing Man Try And Up Your Vocabulary Weerd, It'll Help You Out Alot Man, Any Way Nice Verse No Hate But I Got To Go With Mista

Vote-Mista
Return The Favor
Links In My Sig Me Vs Buck I'm Up 4-0
Nuff Said No hate To None

Thanx for the vote.i'd Already returned the favor................uppin

Voted For: Judicial

pretty close battle, M.A. had the punches

I don't know how you can be a gangstah when you scared of a mice
And nigga my punches are hot, so that bat in your pic, won't save your life
^prolly his best line, but i woulda said scared of mice ryhmes with save your life... your style was very simple and i didn't like it, thats why im voting for judicial

punches didn't come as hard from judicial but he made up for it with hismultiples.. like i said it was really close but i like multiples.. becuase its harder to ryhme a dicload of words and still coem up wiht a decent punch..

Erm W/e.............................................uppi n

uppin this battle yo.......................gots a close 1 hurr.........

uppin uppin uppin............................................

This was feedback posted for Judicial
 

Nvere thought y'all would be battlin, BUT LMAO @ THE PERSONALS FROM BOTH

Nice dropps

Checkin polls....

Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

like 70's remedy's bout 2 b off wit cha head like kennedy
dis bitch aint sick,he just got a scholar in seredepity
wack opener…
hiz name says auth3ntiq but boy u aint real kid
soft n mushy,vanilla puddin,like bill in ya sig
…what?
you should have quitted b-4 dis thread u submitted
even if i swallowed your eyes u couldnt see me spittin
okay
im causin defection and deep depression to mistas lyrical progression
he regrettin dis battelin session,u rap wit homos obsessions
no, weak punch
thanks 4 settin dis charity,cuz u battelin me,wins im only collectin
like when u checked-in in dis battle you comin second even wit god u couldnt handle my confessions
flow = too long, punch = not good

Judicial i'll hit you with 7 bullets, and have your soul rising to the above
This kid is retarted. Dq gave me the scoop ya'll both have sex with fake love
decent punch
C'mon mane, even my flow's tighter than you like bill cosby sweaters
You a pussie but still ain't breaking "V"'s you elevate? please never
okay…decent here
Even though you don't have a mother, your punches still feels like purses
This kid aint elevating, and i know why, you live under the earth (basement)
nah, aint likin this 1
I don't know how you can be a gangstah when you scared of a mice
And nigga my punches are hot, so that bat in your pic, won't save your life
okay, decent
Kid i'm like a daddy to you, im'ing me is "this verse good?" You've already been sonn
Like a crown that is ghost, judicial your punches ain't touching me, nor my throne
decent punch, it landed tho

Overall M.A. took this one, cuz
Judicial…what kind of fuckin drop
Was that?...punches weren’t even landing…
Elevate son…don’t know how you got a vote
But elevate

iight.........anywayz uppin dis...................

Cool Uppin This.....................................

uppin............................................. ...........................

uppin............................................. .

Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

Judicial i'll hit you with 7 bullets, and have your soul rising to the above
This kid is retarted. Dq gave me the scoop ya'll both have sex with fake love
that was a nice as personal and very embarrassing for judicial.....8/10
C'mon mane, even my flow's tighter than you like bill cosby sweaters
You a pussie but still ain't breaking "V"'s you elevate? please never
lol.....that was ight...6.5/10
Even though you don't have a mother, your punches still feels like purses
This kid aint elevating, and i know why, you live under the earth (basement)
that was a pretty good personal...7/10
I don't know how you can be a gangstah when you scared of a mice
And nigga my punches are hot, so that bat in your pic, won't save your life
blah....that was alright...6/10
Kid i'm like a daddy to you, im'ing me is "this verse good?" You've already been sonn
Like a crown that is ghost, judicial your punches ain't touching me, nor my throne
str8 closer.....7/10

Judicial

like 70's remedy's bout 2 b off wit cha head like kennedy
dis bitch aint sick,he just got a scholar in seredepity
opener mustve been the best bar in ur verse...8/10
hiz name says auth3ntiq but boy u aint real kid
soft n mushy,vanilla puddin,like bill in ya sig
that was ite...poor vocab...5/10
you should have quitted b-4 dis thread u submitted
even if i swallowed your eyes u couldnt see me spittin
bars about takin out peoples eyes are gettin played out
im causin defection and deep depression to mistas lyrical progression
he regrettin dis battelin session,u rap wit homos obsessions
gay jokes are played.....5/10
thanks 4 settin dis charity,cuz u battelin me,wins im only collectin
like when u checked-in in dis battle you comin second even wit god u couldnt handle my confessions
....blah...that was ite...2nd bar was mad stretched tho...6/10

Mista got this one tho...nuff said

^^ Werd Bruh.............uppin For Some More Votes

Uppin for more votes mane...............................

upppin dis shit yall...............................

uppin to get this closed out yall...................

This was feedback posted for Judicial
 

Just checking polls and the votes ya know...

DQ

uppin to get this shit closed out fo real.........

Voted For: Judicial

1st off, mista.......your personals was hot as shit, u feel me........throughout the whole battle, u got Judicial wit da personals buh there wasnt really n e "eye catching" metaphors or punches. Ju, u got Mista wit da metaphors and a couple punches but u shoulda did like he did and spit sum personals.........buh i look for punches in battles and Mista didnt have none so my vote goes to Ju..............

thanks.....upppin............2 more votes for either of us to get dis closed out....................

Why you got me aim block?........................................

yo uppin this fuckin battle yo.....lets just do a draw or somethin

Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

to me, this one easily goes to mista,

mista-good:i liked the metaphors, similes, werdplay, and punches, you also had a nice structure and flow, the links also made this verse more catchy and made the punches have more meaning
bad:i didnt really like the opener OR closer, i also felt like you cood have upped the multies, and vocab

judicial-good:i liekd the multies that WERE in there, i also think that you beat your opponent in vocab,
bad:your structure wasnt good because of some strectched lines, felt like your puinches just didnt hit hard in this verse, i also didnt like your opener or closer either
both:both shood try to mainly work on your openers and closers

opner:tie
closer:tie
multies:J
flow:M
punches:M
werdplay:M
vocab:J

rtf....links in sig

v/mista_auth3ntiq

one more fuckin vote to get this shit closed out...its been up for like a fuckin month now..........fuckin get this shit closed out

This was feedback posted for MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
 

jus check'n the polls...............nice drop MA.........

uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin

holy shit.......this battle is still open??????????

Voted For: Judicial

Judicial i'll hit you with 7 bullets, and have your soul rising to the above
This kid is retarted. Dq gave me the scoop ya'll both have sex with fake love
6...gud personal, 1st line was filler though!!
C'mon mane, even my flow's tighter than you like bill cosby sweaters
You a pussie but still ain't breaking "V"'s you elevate? please never
7...better line, 1st line was gud!!
Even though you don't have a mother, your punches still feels like purses
This kid aint elevating, and i know why, you live under the earth (basement)
4...weak line, hell the rhymin is barely there and that's bein generous!!
I don't know how you can be a gangstah when you scared of a mice
And nigga my punches are hot, so that bat in your pic, won't save your life
5...a failed attempt at a solid punch!!
Kid i'm like a daddy to you, im'ing me is "this verse good?" You've already been sonn
Like a crown that is ghost, judicial your punches ain't touching me, nor my throne
6...aight closer but the 1st line was wack!!

OVERALL: 29/50


opener:
like 70's remedy's bout 2 b off wit cha head like kennedy
dis bitch aint sick,he just got a scholar in seredepity
6...i like this, but lay off the sick shit cuz its becomin more played by the day!!
killer:
hiz name says auth3ntiq but boy u aint real kid
soft n mushy,vanilla puddin,like bill in ya sig
6...nah! failed personal!! not feelin it!!
you should have quitted b-4 dis thread u submitted
even if i swallowed your eyes u couldnt see me spittin
7...nice the meta was cool!!
im causin defection and deep depression to mistas lyrical progression
he regrettin dis battelin session,u rap wit homos obsessions
6...nice multi but gay shit = played!!
finisher:
thanks 4 settin dis charity,cuz u battelin me,wins im only collectin
like when u checked-in in dis battle you comin second even wit god u couldnt handle my confessions
5...weak closer and the 2nd part was stretched!!

OVERALL: 30/50

Aight, no offense to either MC's but this battle was weak. A lot of played concepts and ure vocabs are both too basic as is ure wordplay. Need to throw in more complex shit, get creative, drop more personals that are decent!! mista u had the personal but they were weak, and i think two bars u dropped were very weak and that is what just lost u the battle!!

V/ - Judicial

- Return the fav on the Kesse battle, links in the siggy!!!

Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

Decent battle.

MA:
Punches were ok, but your flow kept falling off. Not huge, but enough to be choppy. Personals were nice. Good dirt, but they could have been made a lot better. Too much stating and not enough punching. No real wordplay or multis. Overall decent verse, but work on inegrating some wordplay and better punches.

Jud:
Ok punches, but you lacked in real personals. You had some wordplay but other than that nothing that good. Lot of self glorification, and weak punches just overall. Work on better personals and punches. I didn't like you homo punch, played man.

Overall both of you need to work on your punches.

v/ Mista Authentiq