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Dirty Nigga 03-05-05 06:11 PM

onestepbeyond vs Buck.Shot
 
Battle Rules:

12 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Buck cant be dq'ed for having more than 5 open battles

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 03-05-05 at 06:41 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

System 03-05-05 06:15 PM

OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-05-05 06:15 PM.

System 03-05-05 06:21 PM

Buck.Shot has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-05-05 06:21 PM.

Dirty Nigga 03-05-05 06:26 PM

Kid thinks he owns Open Mic, his rhymes dont Shine
He gotta have people featurin ta make up for his Lines
Bitch just Whines, he even left NOK when things got Tough
Mark ya chest with 'X' an the 'kiss' of Death if you wanna play 'Ruff'
Enough is Enough, the sites Tired of the 'Queens'
'NOK YOURSELF OUT'...Yea by all Means
Be my Guest, cause your Lyrically Blessed?
Thats like sayin.........
............Bazooka shots wont hurt cause ya wearin a ''Vest''
You'll never be above the Rest...
Ya raps bore, theres just no Anticipation
Propped you up with a Suspension, an still no Elevation
I dont know what ya thinkin trynna call out a Real KING
You wouldn't own the 'Block' if ya name was Yao Ming!
go 'head n do ya thing, lemme see the played out Flow
its talent you lack son, ya whack son...
.......i'd still get the fuckin win if i was ta no Show!

Explanations:
Opener, NOK think they own Open mic Forum
Next bar:- he ran out on NOK because they had beef, an there the only explanations

Kirk 03-05-05 06:34 PM

your beef was over before it started


stop tryna act so hard... stop beefin cause they're not jealous,
why's your name buck.shot? when lyrically your like air soft pellets,
i don't dislike you, and buck.shot im not threatening dude,
im just sayin you got 4,000 posts and im better than you,
its about fuckin time i ended this, start punchin lines,
you'd have to drop 5 open mics even to equal one of mine,
look at your record... every loss i bet you're heard cursin,
son you could get beat by a dude that speaks in 3rd person,*
you was in NOK, then got pissed, then dropped your rep,
thinkin your dead hott, but the case is you'll be shot to death,
grabbin the shotty... and im bout real to ill ya health,
so the morgues tellin the newspaper, you killed yaself..**

*tony green could beat him and he speaks in the 3rd person
**shottys shot buck.shots... get it?

Dirty Nigga 03-05-05 08:55 PM

Uppin this........................................

Dirty Nigga 03-06-05 09:26 AM

Upp
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Dirty Nigga 03-06-05 03:27 PM

Upping this.......................................

High-Dro 03-06-05 03:56 PM

Voted For: Buck.Shot

Buck.Shot - i liked ur flow, sum were kinda stretched but that was ok cuz u had some nice personals and had dope punches
"Thats like sayin.........
............Bazooka shots wont hurt cause ya wearin a ''Vest''"
i liked that...it just stood out to me...like i said sum coulda flowed better that was the only thing i could find wrong with it

OneStepBeyond - ur flow was good and you had some nice personal shit thrown at him in there...but, ur punches didn't really hit that hard so nuthin really stuck out..work on ur punches and u'll be kool homie

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Dirty Nigga 03-06-05 05:48 PM

Uppin this........................................

Big City 03-06-05 05:55 PM

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 
checkin polls ight drops from both...............

Dirty Nigga 03-07-05 07:27 AM

Uppin this y'all..........................
Crunk crunk

Dirty Nigga 03-08-05 12:19 PM

Up[pin this here y'all............................

Sten. Cell 03-08-05 12:52 PM

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Ok Battle But Im Goin With OneStep On This.HIs Punches Where Jus A Little Bit Stronger And His Personals His Closer To Home.Buck Started Out Ok But Got Weaker Towards The End.Also His Verse Was A Lil Sloppy Cause His Bars Were Uneven.Some Shorter Then Others.


Also Using Periods Jus So One Line Isnt A Run-On...........
...................Is Gay

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Kirk 03-08-05 07:54 PM

............uppin.......... should be a close battle...

Dirty Nigga 03-09-05 08:31 AM

uppin this........................................

Dirty Nigga 03-11-05 08:58 AM

uppin this battle ONCE AGAIN
Vote...yeah?...you best fuckin vote BITCHES

~Tony Green~ 03-11-05 05:07 PM

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 
I don't know Tony Green thinks its gone be a close on!
G'luck to both yall!

Dirty Nigga 03-12-05 08:52 AM

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Kirk 03-15-05 09:56 AM

uppin.............................................

Dirty Nigga 03-16-05 09:39 AM

I stay on the grind...
i tell the ho's all'a time
...GET IN MY CAR (Bitch get in!)

Dirty Nigga 03-16-05 07:31 PM

Uppin this........................................

A_M_H 03-16-05 08:44 PM

This was feedback posted for Buck.Shot
 
u came ok in this battle but ur wordplay in this 1 was not on point like the othaz i've seen step it up duke & keep elevating

TuNiT 03-18-05 05:55 AM

Voted For: Buck.Shot

DAMN dizbattle wuz ht proppz goes out 2 yall fo diz mayne ya both came hard wid da flow both had nice personals i tnk buckz puns an creativity on hiz barz gets him da win but LMAOOOOOOO @ da shot 2 death line by one step beyond dt wuz nice buck had da moe consistancy doer

Dirty Nigga 03-18-05 07:36 AM

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TAKENOTICE 03-20-05 02:15 PM

Voted For: Buck.Shot

Wordplay goes to Buck that ruff kiss and x line i was feelin the
creativity but your closer well play'd everyone always talkin bout
noshows now a days i've done it to...
onestep you verse was alright but i think bucks verse was more
appeallin to the voter as far a readin it and style but all the same
you had a clean drop Bothe of ya'll came with some personals nice
ones here and there this time i'll have to go with buck but i have
tah hit up more of both ya'lls battles cause i really think ya'll is
doin it good buck i can tell you really here and your about
somethin you got crazy amounts of battles open so i'll have to hit
them up and maybe battle you sometime...

Dirty Nigga 03-20-05 02:18 PM

Yeah man, i'm down for whatever, i just battle whoever want it, ya reppin FL Too?
same here man...

holla at me if u ever wanna battle

thanks for the vote

favors are returned by both us two if ya leave links

Peace

Big City 03-20-05 02:18 PM

checkin polls.......................................

Kirk 03-20-05 08:53 PM

these votes are kinda bullshit with feedback......

Dirty Nigga 03-21-05 10:06 AM

Blaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
Uppin this shit fuckasses!!!!1

Dirty Nigga 03-22-05 07:06 PM

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p4ntzistheish 04-01-05 01:23 PM

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 
wait i thought this battle was wit buck.shot not escoolayde....

Kirk 04-01-05 05:14 PM

uppin............................................. .

Kirk 04-03-05 03:44 PM

haha, uppin....................................... don't dq that shit, this has been open forever

.Judicial. 04-03-05 11:51 PM

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

punches were kinda around the same level in this battle..osb's structure was a lot better then bucks...buck u shouldnt have put that lack son whack son shit in there....both had nice personals....and punches...vocab was a lil better in buckshots verse....osb's verse seemed to go a lil better and caught my attention more than buckshots did..overall this was a real good battle..i had to judge on structure and more leadin into the punches...and with that my vote goes to osb no hate tho....


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