medicine vs MaRVJay1009
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-08-05 at 06:13 PM

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medicine has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-05-05 06:19 PM.

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-05-05 06:20 PM.

listen marv, i'm bout to flip these cards.
better take your meds, cause you aint hittin hard.
get your perscription card, you need to check the charts.
cause the verses i dispurse are known to stop the hearts.
Of all the sucka mcs ,that try to fuck wit me.
& you aint enough, to even touch a puff of smoke i breath.
you aint approachin me,
with somethin i havent seen.
you just a average joe,
with an average flow who wont let go.
lets face it , your wasted, you suck, your basic.
you can keep the dream,
but youa aint ever gonna make it.

Let me see marv....
what u got........
waitin for my verse 1st.......
where u at?

look......

when he go 2 a chick crib they dont let em sit on da couch
...........fam u neva got "head"
only when da girl "Sick" she put "medicine in her mouth".....
dont talk let ya pumps spray me...but i think son crazee.....
he a aol feen stay with da "net on his head" like "lunch lady's"
dont talk bout reppin da street..u neva held a weapon or piece
i'll put ya "heart in da air" now u wont trouble "catchin a beat"
u'll neva have a rap career quer wont neva tour da state...
and u "PiSSED" off cuzz on a scale 2 a million "UR-N-EiGHT"..
u madd cuzz dis bastard's hott...but when i flash da glok
medicine u betta give me more "space" than "astronauts"..
you wear "makaveli boxers" so now u think ya "ass is pac"..
i'll stand in ya street "wavin more arms" than "Traffic cops"


nuff said

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

when he go 2 a chick crib they dont let em sit on da couch
...........fam u neva got "head"
only when da girl "Sick" she put "medicine in her mouth".....
dont talk let ya pumps spray me...but i think son crazee.....
he a aol feen stay with da "net on his head" like "lunch lady's"
FUCKING DOPE AS LINE, DIGGING IT FO REAL
u madd cuzz dis bastard's hott...but when i flash da glok
medicine u betta give me more "space" than "astronauts"..
you wear "makaveli boxers" so now u think ya "ass is pac"..
i'll stand in ya street "wavin more arms" than "Traffic cops
NO D/R BUT YOU KILLED THIS VERSE FAMO, ENTERTAINING SHIT RIGHT HERE
GOOD JOB
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listen marv, i'm bout to flip these cards.
better take your meds, cause you aint hittin hard.
NICE RHYMING HERE, NO PUNCH
get your perscription card, you need to check the charts.
cause the verses i dispurse are known to stop the hearts
COOL SELF GLORIFY HERE, BUT STILL NO PUNCH
Of all the sucka mcs ,that try to fuck wit me.
& you aint enough, to even touch a puff of smoke i breath
DECENT BUT STILL NO REAL PUNCH
MY ADVICE TO YOU MEDICINE IS T LAY LOW AND WATCH A FEW BATTLE, SEE HOW OTHER CATS WORD THEY SHIT, CUZ I CAN TELL YOU GOOD BUT YOU CANT WIN BATTLES WITH REG VERSES, THE VERSE HAD TO PERTAIN TO THE PERSON YOU BATTLE, NOTHING WRONG WITH PRACTICING, YA NEXT BATTLE BEAT UP ON A NEWB TIL YOU FEEL MORE COMFORTABLE WITH HEADS LIKE MARV..
V/MARVJAY
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PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR

goodlookin fam...i cant vote on ya battle cuzz graph in my crew so if u got any other links holla

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Yo marve got My vote, cause in my eyes this was just one sided, he had better Punches and Mulites, his structure was even all the way through, witch made the flow better, just an over all better verse then medicine..

Medicine Yah started off aight, but then yah fell off around the end, like yah stop trying of sumttin.. Next time try al little harder..

No Hate..

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

V/marvjay1009...he gets my vote cause he had better structure an his had good original punchs....medicine u need to work on ur punchs an personals also ur structure was a little off.....RETURN THE FAVOR
opener=marv
closer=marv
punchs=marv
structure=marv
personals=marv
overall=marvjay1009

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

i would break it down but marv j took every catagory on the real...............his punches personals and name play were all ot medicine go for weaker heads first no hate...marv go check in

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

you medicine, decent drop, you got potential, even though you didn't do anything your sopposed to in a battle... at least not at this site, but you got a good example by lookin at what marv just spit.

marv- wordplay every fuckin bar, thats just fuckin fire right there, one of the best verses i've ever heard. fuckin solid all the way through.
only problem you had is that not very many were direct punches. dope lines but if they aint directly aimed at the kid its pretty much filler, good filly but still filler.
when he go 2 a chick crib they dont let em sit on da couch
...........fam u neva got "head"
only when da girl "Sick" she put "medicine in her mouth".....
^^^ya only real personal and real punch
dont talk let ya pumps spray me...but i think son crazee.....
he a aol feen stay with da "net on his head" like "lunch lady's"
^^^ punch but made up personal, still dope.
u'll neva have a rap career quer wont neva tour da state...
and u "PiSSED" off cuzz on a scale 2 a million "UR-N-EiGHT"..
^^^ dont understand what the 8 is

all and all you spit dope lines even without many direct punches and a few lines pretty much self glor... like
u madd cuzz dis bastard's hott...but when i flash da glok
medicine u betta give me more "space" than "astronauts
^^^ but still dope wordplay

ite, ko... but, med keep that flow goin and take some lessons on punches and you'll be droppin some hot shit.

return a vote on battles in line... PLEASE.