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Affinity 03-05-05 09:11 PM

Affinity vs Big City
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 10 lines
No Crew Votes (if anyone from are crews vote the person will be d/qed from the battle)...
No Recycling
No Biting
You accepted my battle call out so its goin on dont duck you got 1 and a hlaf days to drop your verse after checking in


Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 03-08-05 at 09:11 PM

Must drop verse in 1750 minutes after check in.

System 03-05-05 09:30 PM

Affinity has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-05-05 09:30 PM.

Affinity 03-05-05 10:14 PM

Ur grammar is weak no wonder ur shit at talkin English
If u got an issue then wait for god to deal with ur wish
ur girl called told me she aint even miss u, drop to ya knee
Bag, kiss my shoe, hit the floor, no need to force, u asked me
NOK=wack, feel my intensity as I Nok out the smallest Baron
I don’t bother to offer aid & attention, to anyone not Carin
Call urself the biggest city, u aint massive, I aint foolin me
My punches “Knocked u out” leavin u at the hospital for surgery
The wrong decsion was NOK, you shoulda went vice versa
Go ahead think ur flawless as I order meat just as raw…

Affinity 03-05-05 10:15 PM

i already dropped now hurry up hoe

o ya NOK is wack too ahhaha

Affinity 03-06-05 05:43 PM

dont duck you hoe.

battle me...................

Affinity 03-06-05 06:52 PM

aww your ducking me i know your online hoe stop duckin fag

System 03-07-05 03:22 PM

Big City has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-07-05 03:22 PM.

System 03-07-05 03:39 PM

Big City has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-07-05 03:39 PM.

Big City 03-08-05 12:28 AM

BIG CITY...holla at me

chea,...yo you just a manly bitch, this Dyke here wanna run
you like ya sig dog, cuz u LIGHT YEarS from a BUZZ
rappin aint for you, go ahead and switch jobs hoe
stay down, this lame clown, couldnt get PROPs at an improv show
heard that he dyin to pull chicks, im resupplyin the full clips
he like a rodeo clown, im amazed the way he ridin this BULL SHIT
the attacks is vicious,... homie u lack prodigious
God couldnt save that flow, .....nigga its sacreligious
look jack, im pleadin.....this might b past ya reason
but u rappin, you got an Affinity for committing acts of treason........1.....

Big City 03-08-05 12:30 AM

ight uppin for votes nah mean, honest opinions only b

Big City 03-08-05 09:46 PM

ight uppin for votes nah mean, honest opinions only b
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Big City 03-09-05 06:04 AM

ight uppin for votes nah mean, honest opinions only b
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Big City 03-09-05 05:51 PM

ight uppin for votes nah mean, honest opinions only b
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Affinity 03-09-05 07:00 PM

uppin............................................. .

Big City 03-10-05 05:17 AM

ight uppin for votes nah mean, honest opinions only b
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Affinity 03-10-05 01:32 PM

uppin............................................. ...................

Affinity 03-10-05 07:30 PM

uppin............................................. .

Affinity 03-11-05 09:00 AM

uppin............................................. ...........

Big City 03-12-05 06:47 PM

ight uppin for votes nah mean, honest opinions only b
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Big City 03-19-05 03:59 PM

ight uppin for votes nah mean, honest opinions only b
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Big City 03-20-05 02:29 PM

ight uppin for votes nah mean, honest opinions only b
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Big City 03-21-05 08:12 PM

ight uppin for votes nah mean, honest opinions only b
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Big City 03-23-05 03:51 PM

ight uppin for votes nah mean, honest opinions only b
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Parallel 03-23-05 05:24 PM

Voted For: Affinity

checkin polls.....................................

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Big City 03-24-05 12:24 PM

ight uppin for votes nah mean, honest opinions only b
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Big City 03-26-05 10:18 AM

ight uppin for votes nah mean, honest opinions only b
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MaRVJay 03-26-05 04:16 PM

Voted For: Big City

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=183593
^^^LINK 4 YA'LL DA RETURN DA FAVOR....

now my vote n shit....

big city:
chea,...yo you just a manly bitch, this Dyke here wanna run
you like ya sig dog, cuz u LIGHT YEarS from a BUZZ
^^^I SAID DIS BAR BOUT 2 YEARS AGO...NO DISS FAM..BUT BUZZ N RUN DONT RYHME GOOD CONCEPT THO N NAME PLAY
rappin aint for you, go ahead and switch jobs hoe
stay down, this lame clown, couldnt get PROPs at an improv show
^^^DA MULTI WAS GOOD BUT DA PUNCH WAS WEAK
heard that he dyin to pull chicks, im resupplyin the full clips
he like a rodeo clown, im amazed the way he ridin this BULL
SHIT
^^LOL DATZ HOTT GOOD PUNCH
the attacks is vicious,... homie u lack prodigious
God couldnt save that flow, .....nigga its sacreligious
^^^NAHHH
look jack, im pleadin.....this might b past ya reason
but u rappin, you got an Affinity for committing acts of treason
^^^UMM AN OKAY CLOSER....

affinity:
Ur grammar is weak no wonder ur shit at talkin English
If u got an issue then wait for god to deal with ur wish
^^^NAH FAM..I DIDN'T LIKE DA WAY ENLISH N WISH RYHMED..SHOULD OF ADDED MORE 2 DAT
ur girl called told me she aint even miss u, drop to ya knee
Bag, kiss my shoe, hit the floor, no need to force, u asked me
^^^WEAK
NOK=wack, feel my intensity as I Nok out the smallest Baron
I don’t bother to offer aid & attention, to anyone not Carin
^^^DA 1ST WAS GOOD BUT DA SCEOND WASN'T
Call urself the biggest city, u aint massive, I aint foolin me
My punches “Knocked u out” leavin u at the hospital for surgery
^^^LOL MADD WACK
The wrong decsion was NOK, you shoulda went vice versa
Go ahead think ur flawless as I order meat just as raw…
^^^VICE VERA & RAW DONT RYHME STOP FORCIN SHIT FAM..

OVERALL..BIG CITY TAKES DIS CUZZ HE SHOWED SOME CREATIVITY..FORCED LIKE 1 BAR BUT DAT WAS IT..NO PERSONALS BUT HE ATLEAST 1 GOOD PUNCHLINE...AFFINITY I KNOW U DONT REALLY DO TEXT LIKE DAT SO I AINT EXPECT U DA SPIT SOME SPECTACULAR SHIT BUT U WERE FORCIN ALOT OF WORDS 2 RYHME AND U SHOWED NO CREATIVITY..

RETURN DAT FAVOR LINK IS UP TOP..1

Big City 03-27-05 01:58 PM

thanks for the vote marvjay...uppin for more good ones nah mean

Big City 03-28-05 02:06 PM

ight uppin for votes nah mean, honest opinions only b
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Big City 03-29-05 06:23 PM

ight uppin for votes nah mean, honest opinions only b
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B. Magik 03-30-05 04:58 PM

Voted For: Big City

It's like this:

Big City:

Godd verse man...creative and hard-hitting punches, nice metaphors, good structure and flow, and nice multies

flow-9/10
punches-8/10
structure-10/10
wordplay and metas-7/10

Overall, 34/40...Good drop man...

Affinity:

Give it up man...You fuckin suck...No hate, just trying to let you know man...Your whole verse was ass all the way thru...Try throwing a real punch, not a little sissy smack...

Flow-6/10
Punches-1/10
Structure-7/10
Wordplay and metas-1/10

Overall, 15/40 is not too good...Elevate ALOT and then try battling someone...

V/ Big City

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Big City 03-30-05 05:09 PM

ight black magik thanks for the honest feed....uppin for more

Adrenaline 03-31-05 12:47 PM

Voted For: Big City

uhhh...ya u took this easy...still...better punches and wordplay and metaphors...

affinity needs to have those to win...and he didn't...
that's pretty much it...
uppin....and return the favour...it's not in my sig so...just click on my username or sump'n....

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Big City 03-31-05 04:07 PM

thanks for the feed unknown legengd uppin for more honest votes

Big City 04-02-05 10:43 PM

cot damn this is so wack, i hate when thi shit happens

Big City 04-05-05 07:22 PM

cot damn this is so wack, i hate when thi shit happens

Kirk 04-05-05 07:25 PM

This was feedback posted for Big City
 
checkin polls and what not........................

Big City 04-10-05 12:35 PM

thanks for the feed unknown legengd uppin for more honest votes
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Big City 04-10-05 10:02 PM

thanks for the feed unknown legengd uppin for more honest votes
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Germ 04-11-05 02:15 AM

Voted For: Big City

well, this is obviously one sided....big city takes it

affinity, your shit is whack,s traight up, you dont kno how to create and grasp the concept of a punch....thats all i need to say

big city, im giving you this due to decent consistency to diss and attempt punches, wasn't the best from you, but easily kO'd this bitch ass, keep up..

v/big city, RTF on my K.Solo battle in my sig please


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