Cincanatus vs Linguistics
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 03-05-05 at 10:30 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Linguistics has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-05-05 10:02 PM.

been awhile u miss me? put u out of your misery
what kinda herb brags about a noshow victory
trust me i'll gitcha, the truth must not have hitcha
cuz just like ya sig......
anything to do wit recording is out of the picture
u worse than I thought, need a clue, circle this loss
he been on my dick so long, even my purple rubbed off
C i'm cuttin ya head off, leave it bloody and raw
watch the quick wrist movments, cause i'll arkansas
part this dog, from large ego, but back to the basics
and i'd try to reach ya level...........
...............but virginia aint got basements

are u gonna check in or WHAT!................


your gonna noshow arent u..................

Cincanatus has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-05-05 10:27 PM.

you fed off my verse!....................thats herb shit!

Voted For: Cincanatus

Linguistics
whoa that was pretty dope the stucture was dope the vocab was fire the punches were alright but i didnt feel you were trying to diss him you just went on and on with vocab n shit try and put some creativty and play with some words more i did see you do it but not so offten maybe a few lines and lines but you and cin actually have a simuliar style maybe the same person..pz

Cincanatus
hmm i felt you had dope stucture flow and vocabulary your punches were what won you this the creativty was far beyond his but i feel as if yall are the same persons hmm maybe the colours but iunno you won this with creativty but maybe try not to use so much vocab abd multis actually nm there pretty good like that, pz

RTF in my battle wit Speats links in the sig

This was feedback posted for Cincanatus
 

sry i voted with the wrong account the links in this accounts sig, peace

Voted For: Linguistics


Aight..Check'd This Battle..

Lingusitics Took This Battle With These Two Bars..

"trust me i'll gitcha, the truth must not have hitcha
cuz just like ya sig......
anything to do wit recording is out of the picture
u worse than I thought, need a clue, circle this loss
he been on my dick so long, even my purple rubbed off"

Straight Up...Everything Cin Spit I've Heard Before or Either Isn't True.

The Whole Not Battling Vets Thing...I Said That Punch Back When I First Started On RV....and I Know Who Linguistics Really Is and Those Punches Don't Even Relate To Anything About Linguistics.

Vote - Linguistics For Better Punches and Creativity.

~R~

Voted For: Cincanatus

Normal Punches-Cincanatus, overall your punches were pretty good. Kept coming every line and most hit decent. Linguistics, your punches were rather weak and unoriginal (bloody ish).

Personal Punches-Linguistics, you definately got this. I liked the recording line and no show line. Should have kept em coming. Cincanatus, had some personals, but they were worded bad and seemed like you were reaching out for it.

Metaphors-Cincanatus, decent metaphors. I liked the secretary line most. Linguistics, no real metaphors. You need to work on that.

Multiple Rhymes-Linguistics, mostly for having them. Kind of threw off your flow though. Cincanatus, no multis that I saw.

Structure-Cincanatus, just easier to read and better looking. Linguistics, I hate the ..... crap. If it doesn't fit it doesn't fit.

Flow-Cincanatus, nice flow through all of this. Your constant punches kept it moving. Linguistics, your flow was rather choppy and hard to follow.

Word Play-Tie, both didn't have good wordplay.

Cincanatus, overall this is one of your best battle verses I have read. Your personals have improved, along with your punches. Try to include all aspects of a verse, wordplay, multis, etc...

Linguistics, personals were good and were pretty funny. However, your verse didn't offer much to the table and your punches and metaphors were bad. Your "wordplay" wasn't that great either.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter

v/Cincanantus

One Vote .One Battle. One Victory

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r.

these are gay votes.................fuckin DR's both of u r wack he had some gay ass punches

how is mine a d/r? i just realized the cin is epic and epic is someone i hated for monthes

Voted For: Cincanatus

good battle....from cincanatus

cin-good opener...shit got my attention,flow was on point like always...decent wordplay coulda done better....punches hit pretty hard..some connected...personals were alright in yea drop...structure was on point...multis was lacking..overall:7/10

liguinstics-OK opener...coulda done better,flow was alright nuttin to special...punches came weak...structure was bad overall...vocab was in good use...personals was lacking...and multis were aight...overall:6/10

v/cincanatus....

Voted For: Cincanatus

good battle here chums, this is how i see it

cincanatus....thought you came real strong, had nice punches and personals in there, wordplay and vocab were aight....just flow and structure were a little off in some areas, 2nd last bar seemed a little stretched, but you still came on top

fav lines
Say Virginia Got No Basements? Well Ain't That Where Ya Located
Contradicting Ya Self, Like Miss Understood Sentences Translated
^that shit was tight, same with finisher, thought those were the ones that hit hardest

Linguistics....thought you came out a little weak, some punches were definately played, verse lacked complexity...had a weak opener, flow and structure were nice though, no problems there, just thought cincanatus had the harder punches/better wordplay and vocab.....but you did have a few nice lines....

fav lines
u worse than I thought, need a clue, circle this loss
he been on my dick so long, even my purple rubbed off
^^fuckin laughed at that shit...

good battle but v/cincanatus

Voted For: Cincanatus

im votin fo cincanate cuz he had better punches, dope last line, dope flow, n linguistics verse, i wuz readin it thinkin "i hope its soon tha end" it didnt really keep my atention, nom sizlaxin? but both wuz good, no hate linguistics or howeva u spell ur name. werd

uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^....................,......... ......

This was feedback posted for Linguistics
 

im gonna have to give this to you considering the fact that you owned him, lol

LING...shit was decent but was kinda good at the same time, some shit was just played fillers but the atcual shit that hit, hit real hard, that one about his sig was dope, but you need to work on your strucutre , he had a more solid structutre than you
but good shit, the closer was dope..
FATAL... your shit was decent also but you was feeding off his verse which makes you loose, how you fed? i dont know, but the fact you did was very wack, but other than that it was decent but your whole verse was a bunch of fillers, work on your punches yo

Voted For: Linguistics

Cincanatus:
Lingustics....Kid Made An Name That He Couldn't Pronounce..
After This Battle You'll Be 4-2 And In Need Of New Accounts..
gay
Ya Career Is Based On, Retarded Kids, Concenrating On Test..
Claim To Be Dope,But I Checked Ya Status You Battles No Vets
blah
Say Virginia Got No Basements? Well Ain't That Where Ya Located
Contradicting Ya Self, Like Miss Understood Sentences Translated
wow, wack metaphor yo
You Keep Riding My Dick Coz You No Showed And Gained A Loss
I Pimp Smack Ya Worse Then A Secretary Who Refrained From His Boss
ok
Insinuated You'd Beat Me...Sherlok Holmes Couldn't Of Told Ya
I's Gonna Expose Ya Whackness But Ya Provided Ya Own Esposer
better

Linguistics:
been awhile u miss me? put u out of your misery
what kinda herb brags about a noshow victory
ok
trust me i'll gitcha, the truth must not have hitcha
cuz just like ya sig......
anything to do wit recording is out of the picture
nice
u worse than I thought, need a clue, circle this loss
he been on my dick so long, even my purple rubbed off
blah
C i'm cuttin ya head off, leave it bloody and raw
watch the quick wrist movments, cause i'll arkansas
dope wordplay... but is he from arkansaw?
part this dog, from large ego, but back to the basics
and i'd try to reach ya level...........
...............but virginia aint got basements
good lol

Ya, I have to go with Linguistics in this, very one sided, he killed it, why it's 4-1 against him just straight amazes me... but ya, he had some dope lines, definalty a lot wittier, and had a good wordplay bar

Cincanatus, try checking legends of RV verses and elevate off that, you had decent bar but thats it, it was an ok try though

v/linguistics

upsy dazy.............................................. ..........

This was feedback posted for Linguistics
 

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Voted For: Cincanatus

I was feelin fatals more since he hit with more personals and punches....structure was nice bothsides...flow was tite and on point also....multis lack in this battle coulda done better....

v/Fatal Lyrics....since he had better personals and punches...both need to ELAVATE alot....yep

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: Cincanatus

Iight Thass Wierd How Yall Both Got That Basement Line In Ya Verse..............

Fatal Lyrikz Good Drop,You Had Some Decent Punches They Hit Hard.Ya Personals Wass Mean Couple Decent Lines..The Verse Wasn't Stretched Some Vocab In Thea And A Couple Good Lines Of Wordplay.........

Linguistics Ya Verse Was Decent To.You Punches Hit Hard Juss Like Fatals.You Didn't Have Many Personals In Ya Verse.Umm You Structure Wass Well Balanced.You Didn't Have Any Vocab Which Was A Minus.And Ya Closer Didn't Hit As Hard As Fatals

Overall Fatal Lyrikz Came Harder Because His Verse Had More Personals And Wordplay So Fatal Took Thiss Battle With His Personals Vocab And Wordplay..............