It's Over
 

i walked into this place gettin no respect
placed up against every possible test
i got so obsessd i knew i had to impress/
with out me knowin ideas just started flowin
i started growin look at the skill im showin/
it took hard work but its my art work/
but now all i do is go back and forth with cincantus
tryin to see whos the badest but id much rather/
drop the beef while i can im tryin to be the bigger man
it all began over one post it was never my plan/
to drop open mic after open mic dissin him
i hope every one on RV is listenin/
its done its over im not goin at him any more
im not gonna help destroy the music i adore/
PAC and BIG is plagin my thought
it has me to the point where im destraught/
how cand words kill but still every diss gave me a thril/l
it was crazy we repeatin benzino and shady/
maybe we can squah it stop it ill admit ya brought it/
but i wouldnt let him beat me i wouldnt let him defeat me/
so i dissed him on goin to war both our open mics werent called for/
but it didnt matter we would of rather just fought to the death
till our last breath i thought who wants it whos next
even though i saw succes i still wouldnt rest
we gota realize bein able to rap were blessed/
so thats why im layin it down im done
i wish i coulda stoped this b4 it begun/
realize i aint sayin this cause im a bitch
ill never endanger people im with/
so this is it im done its written
so every body listen and quit dissin/

whats so funny Cinc.??? a person who keeps goin after the other trys squashin the beef is a true hard ass that just wants ta beef and yo excell i felt every word this was good 7/10

pretty good,forget about cinn something,pretty good,proud to see your active man,mad respect...good drop,just watch structure

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Good shit homie i liked the hole verse........check out one of my OM's and leave some feed please...Pz

thanks for the feedback ill check that out

Feelin it papi! I just keep thinkin bout dat "toy soldiers" song! Any way I give u a 7/10! Keep workin hard!

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You had stretched lines but this was an ok piece does remind me of Toy Soldiers because of you wanting to squash the beef with you and who ever.I'll rate this at a 7.10 because you had stretched lines and some didn't fit this piece

yeah i wrote it to the toy soilders beat....up up and away

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shit was okay...

flow hea was not good, make it longer
vocab, u need to up that shit there
structure hea u need to work on that
overall it wasnt wack, barely, but i'll
give u a 4/10

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good peice... i would liked it more if the lines were longer but you got the point across, and not really anybody else has been trying to do open mics like this... veyr toy soldier-ish... 7/10.. keep the sick shit comin

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Shit was good I liked what you talked about. Structure was so was the vocab I think you could of came harder but it was still good. 7/10

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a o that was dope it was an okay flow thank for tha message on my rhyme dawg

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